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Friday, October 2, 2015

Book V - Chapter V - Christian and Anastasia Fan Fiction

CHAPTER V

Lust is to the other passions what the nervous fluid is to life; it supports them all, lends strength to them all ambition, cruelty, avarice, revenge, are all founded on lust.

Marquis de Sade
29th Summer 


“Good morning Seattle! It’s six a.m. top of the hour and at 64 degrees, it’s shaping up to be a beautifully sunny Friday! Chopper Dave is over the I-5 freeway. What can you tell us about the morning traffic Dave?” the radio alarm goes off. I slept in! First I turn to the baby monitor which remains silent.
I extend my hand to the radio alarm to turn it off but Anastasia extends her hand sliding over my body with a grin and presses the alarm clock off.
“Teddy?” I ask.
“Our Gail is giving us the morning off as a present for your birthday. She would have given the entire day off but I know how much you’re attached to him, so, he’ll join us later in the day,” she says.
“Mrs. Grey, you’re spoiling me!”
“Get ready to be spoiled more, Mr. Grey,” she adds with mischief.
“I have to go to the office this morning for a very important meeting, but I am sooo fucking tempted to take the day off.” Why didn’t I remember my own fucking birthday? Have I been too busy? Of course I have. I’ve got scores to settle and I’ve been too consumed with getting my ducks in a row in that effort. I know we’ve also spent quite a few sleepless nights since Teddy became fussy this week with an oncoming ear infection. Ana remembered my birthday despite the fact that she’d been up with the baby all week. I am more awed with this goddess who became my entire universe with each passing day. She completely beguiles me.
“Far be it from me to refuse anything my wife wants to do. Take charge Mrs. Grey.”
“You’re letting me take charge?” Her eyes are wide as she sits up. Her engorged breasts shake as she sits up. My cock is on full alert mode.
“Ow!” she says holding her right breast which Teddy seems to favor. As soon as her hand goes to her breast, the light pressure applied causes the breast milk to squirt milk to my face. I blink with the unexpected yet fully pleasurable assault.
“Is that how it is!” I tease and pull her to my chest and with the pressure both her breasts start leaking onto my torso turning me on further, making me want to fuck her nine ways to Sunday. Yet, it would help if we got the milk a little under control.
“I suppose we don’t want to waste Teddy’s food, otherwise we will have a very cross little Grey man in our hands and he has even shorter temper than his daddy.” I say.
“Shall I get the breast pump?” Ana asks sitting up on her knees, trying to halt the profuse leakage.
“No, baby. I’ll go get it.” I jump out of the bed and rush to the kitchen. I locate the drawer containing breast pump, sterilized bottles and the bottle liners. I place a bottle liner in two of the bottles, and rush them back to our bedroom. The house is awfully quiet without Teddy’s expected cries around this hour for his feeding. Even though I know he’s safe only above the garage with Gail and Taylor, I still have to remind myself that he’s safe and well.
Damn, I’d lay down my life for him but I am so fucking excited about this alone time with my wife. Anastasia, my Ana… She is such an inexorable part of my life that I don’t know where I stop and she begins.
When I get to my room Ana is holding her breasts with an effort to keep the milk from freely squirting out while standing in the doorway to the bathroom completely nude.
“Bring them over here husband,” she commands in a sly voice. What are you up to Mrs. Grey?
“Yes, ma’am,” I respond, my eyes narrowed. “Don’t you think you’d be more comfortable in the wing-back chair?” I ask.
“I have my make-up chair.” She shrugs.
“Could you put them over there,” she nods with her head over to her make up station. As soon as I place the items in my hand on to the counter, I catch a glimpse of Ana in the mirror. The flooding mid-June sunlight through the bathroom’s tall windows illuminates the travertine floors. The same sunlight inundates Ana’s thick strands of loose hair, partly falling onto her breasts which are still covered with her hands. She looks slightly flushed, her chest rising and falling in rapid succession as if she has a carnal desperation just like when I tie her up and fuck her hard. She slowly moves her left hand over to her right breast pressing the right breast with her arm. Her right hand slowly glides down her belly to her pubic bone and then to her sex.
I don’t turn around. She knows I’m watching her reflection in the mirror. Her fingers explore the lips of her sex. This woman who was too shy to see her own naked body in the mirror is now a tigress, boldly exploring her own sexuality. Her fingers rub through her slit, slowly. Caressing over her clit. Her left hand flexes a little, white milk leaks through her delicate fingers and her arm, then down through the under curve of her breasts, coating her body in small lazy rivulets. She tries to pace her strokes and plunges of her fingers into her sex with the rhythm of her hand and her timed exhalations.



I almost feel compelled to turn around and look at my wife, participate, take her, but some magic of hers keep me glued to the mirror. It’s as if I turn, the sensual image of my wife pleasuring herself for my benefit will disappear.

Her left arm and hand start moving rhythmically in circular motion, completely in sync with her right hand, stimulating her nipples. The leakage grows as her pressure builds up. When her orgasm starts building up, her body starts shaking, her eyes are glued to my body, scanning me as if I’m her inspiration in her quest to reach her climax. Her fingers quicken their pace in her race to reach her peak. Her left hand moves away from her breasts. Instead, she takes a few involuntary steps towards the wall and then supports herself with her now freed hand. Her milk continues to ooze and spray as her arousal reaches a new height in her sex. Ana’s arms shake, her body trembles, her lips part to receive more oxygen into her body. Then her eyelashes lower. She licks her lips, swallows profusely then a small moan escapes as she climbs her peak.


The second she reaches her climax, her fingers flex, she makes an involuntary effort to curl her toes.
“Christian!” My name comes out like a prayer out of her lips. I spin around and she comes gaze to gaze with my dark, urgent sexual desire. She is washed with an equal amount of overwhelming desire as if nothing else has precedence besides this moment, this connection that we’re experiencing.  I don’t know when I take the steps to pin her with brute strength to the wall. Getting lost in the moment, her body is flush with mine, she places both hand on me, pushing in an effort to spin me around to take charge.
“Mrs. Grey!” I growl.
“Christian!” Her voice is moist, breathy, caressing my face, churning my insides, tightening my chest and erecting my penis like a flagpole. Her greedy carnal desire for me is demanding. I let Anastasia take charge. Let her turn my back towards the wall. Her body still flush with mine, while she lowers herself painstakingly slowly with her tight, engorged buds of her nipples teasing me, leaving a wet trail on my torso.  First the pads of her fingers then her nails follow suit. What would have terrified me a year ago is now a welcome, desired act.  Her scent inundates my senses, the sensual view of her body having pleasured herself coupled with her touch boils my blood, and fires up all my synapses like the 4th of July fireworks. The connection between us at this moment is more than a sensory bridge. We are two pieces that complete each other perfectly: she, a seductress and I her willing subject, getting our cues from each other’s bodies wordlessly.
Ana kneels on the floor before me. She unties the string of my silk pajama bottoms and drops them to the floor. I flick it to the corner with my toe. Anastasia looks up to me from the ground with a reverential admiration. She slowly, sensually slides her hands up my leg, finally reaching up to my cock, encircling it with her fingers. She then rises up on her knees and sensually licking her lips; she lifts up her heavy eyelashes, giving me a lascivious smile and reaches to the crown of my cock. Her tongue caresses and licks the tender flesh of the tip of my cock. I feel the burning of my erection, the near desperation of her receiving me in to the wet warmth of her mouth, softness of her tongue. In a greedy move, she sucks the tip, stroking her tongue around the crown as if she is relishing the taste. With one hand she firmly grasps my cock but with the other, in a demanding motion, she pulls me towards her digging her nails into my ass while wearing a smirk around my cock.
She takes me in deeper with a grunt, closing her eyes. Her mouth works my length with her hand.
“Christ! Fuuuuck!” escapes my lips involuntarily. My eyes roll behind my head. I try hard to prolong the feeling. My hands move to her head, first caressing then pulling her hand wrapped around my wrist, guide her to slow down, to let me savor this moment.
When I feel the tension building up, I realize I don’t want to come into her mouth. I want her wrapped around me.
“Stop, baby, stop! I want to be… agh! Fuck… inside you,” I manage to finish my sentence.
She goes down on me twice more.
My cock comes out of her lips with a suction.
“I am still in charge, Mr. Grey,” she says from below.
I growl my approval.
The desire I feel for her is almost a physical pain. Anastasia slowly stands up with her hands gliding upward with her. Then she places her hands onto my chest and pushes me, making me walk backwards into her chair and slowly. Then she leans down and locks her lips with mine. Damn! Her lips, her mouth is made for a man’s kiss. Mine! My kisses only!
Her lips are soft like rose petals. Her kiss is gentle at first; her lips move against mine, molding, shaping, leaving a scent of fresh cinnamon, leaving behind a trail of fire, lighting me within. A wave of rapturously close need washes me to take over and have my way with her. Yet, I restrain myself and let her lead. I would do anything for her.  


As soon as she thrusts her tongue into my mouth, she starts lowering her sex onto my throbbing erection cowgirl style. As she’s still descending to encase my cock with her velvety walls, I thrust upwards, filling her to the brim. The surprise of it makes her gasp. Her hands firmly clench my shoulders.
“Topping from the bottom Mr. Grey?” she grins, teasing me.
“Topping, period. Top, bottom, sideways. I always dominate, baby!” I kiss her deep, making her moan. My right hand supports the back of her head guiding her, and the left, grasping her delectable buttock. She starts moving in sync with my thrusts. Her movements rub her sensitive nipples over my chest. I can feel the warm liquid oozing with her heightened pleasure, further exciting me, making me want to satiate my hunger for her. While I brand her inside, she marks me outside. Somehow it’s fitting, arousing, and fucking hot!



Even though I am inside her, and she’s wrapped around me, I have an intense desire to have an uninhibited, wild lovemaking with fervency. I stand up with my cock still deep inside my wife and nail her to the wall and speed up my thrusts, angulating her hips to my liking to accommodate my full length in the deepest position. Anastasia’s fingers curl into my hair. Both sweat and her milk create sheen of slick over our bodies.
“Oh God!” Ana shouts her pleasure. “I love the way you…” she gasps for breaths, her eyes rolling back, “…. feel!” She tightens around my cock. “Virile! Thick… hard!” It’s as if she’s commanding me to fuck her harder.
I nip her lip and suck her neck. Each pulse, each thrust quickens our breaths, chests heaving. It’s a frenzy to reach our peaks. Her nails dig and run along my back as my cock makes her move up and down. When I am completely sheathed within her sex, I feel the rolls of her climax being released, she shouts my name and I too reach my climax, thrusting twice more, finally emptying my load inside her. She’s spent in my arms. Without breaking our connection. I walk into the shower with her and turn the water on. The first cold sprays make her squeal and giggle. When the warmth finally arrives, I let her stand on her feet. There’s nothing but matching awe and adoration in each other’s eyes.
“Happy birthday, Christian!” she whispers. “I. Love. You.”

*****      *****

A soul mates purpose is to shake you up, tear apart your ego a little bit, show you your obstacles and addictions, break your heart open so new light can get in, make you so desperate and out of control that you have to transform your life, then introduce you to your spiritual master...
E. Gilbert

After an intimate breakfast, Anastasia dresses up for work and Taylor is waiting for us to take us to SIP and then to GEH. But when we enter into the SUV, Teddy is already placed in it in his car seat, sleeping.
“Is Teddy coming to work with mommy?” I ask curiously, yet happy to see my baby I haven’t seen all night all this morning.
“Nope.” Ana responds with a mischievous grin.
“I know it’s not the ‘take your son to work day’ at the GEH. So, what are you cooking in that beautiful head of yours baby?” I raise a quizzical eyebrow.
“We’re not going to work.”
“We’re not? I told you that I have a very important meeting today, it cannot be postponed.”
“No you don’t. That meeting is scheduled for Monday; I asked Andrea two weeks ago to keep today clear. You have nothing today.” Her grin is wide.
“Mrs. Grey, aren’t we enterprising… Well then, tell me what’s on the agenda.”   
“Mr. Grey, I think I’ve learned a thing or two about keeping mum from you when it comes to certain surprises. You, showing up in Georgia, what you did for my birthday, our honeymoon… Shall I go on?”
“Baby, you got me there. How did Taylor kept this a secret from me?” I ask meeting Taylor’s gaze in the rear-view mirror. Is it a twinkle in his eye? What are they cooking together?
“Taylor has dedicated his life to your protection and your happiness…” Ana says teasing Taylor. This time I see Taylor’s blushing face in the mirror. “I have thus far compromised none of it, so we’re good. Right, Taylor?” she asks.
“No, ma’am. You didn’t compromise anything.”
“Where are we going? My parents?”
“Tsk. Tsk. Tsk… You know what they say about curiosity Mr. Grey…” She shakes her index finger at me.
“Okay, not my parent’s place. Elliot’s?”
“Curiosity killed the cat, Christian.”
“Not Elliot’s. Escala? But you wouldn’t take the baby to Escala for this sort of planning…”
“Now I know how I sound like to you when I’m insistent and curious,” she says pursing her lips.
“How would that be Mrs. Grey?” I tease knowing her exact answer.
“Like a particularly curious and annoying two year old!” she replies and I burst out laughing, managing to wake Teddy. He has such a loud cry, you would think a chorus was behind the sound. Ana rolls her eyes at me.
“Now, you’ve done it! Well, you must face the consequences of your actions Mr. Grey. Taylor?” Ana instructs.
The next voice I hear is the Dixie Chic singing away, “the Lullaby”.

Dixie Chicks – Lullaby
“Well, at least my son has good taste in music.”
When the Lullaby is over, the next song on the mix is ‘First Time Ever I Saw Your Face.’ The unexpected emotions that go through my mind are indescribable. What I had never imagined I could have is right here. My wife who looks at me as if the sun rises and sets with me and this little one who depends on us, who thinks he’s an extension of his mother and of me.



Roberta Flack – First Time Ever I Saw Your Face

My son is finally settled down holding his mother’s index finger in his tiny hand with all he’s got while I hold his small bottle to his lips containing the fresh milk that I expressed out of my wife’s breasts after our several rounds of very hot morning sex.   
When Taylor takes the exit to the airport, I look at Anastasia again.
“Still not going to tell me where we are going?”
“You’ll find out. Though, I am utilizing your company’s jet. I thought my husband is worth it,” she says with a deadpan face. Her remark makes me want to laugh again but remembering Teddy, I suppress it down to an awkward smile. When we are on tarmac, I take Teddy’s car seat carriage. Sawyer and Melissa are already at the airport, emptying the trunk of our other SUV.
“This is just for the weekend, right?”
“Yes.” Ana is monosyllabic with that mischievous twinkle in her eyes.
“Oh my God! Can I please hold him? Can I, can I Ana? Christian, can I?” Mia squeals from the top of the stairs from the GEH jet. Mia is here?
When I climb up, Stephan gives a restrained warning to Mia. “Miss Grey, we are going to leave soon. Would you take your seat until we get the rest of the passengers in so we don’t bottleneck the entry?”
“I will, I will! But I need to hold my nephew!” Mia retorts.
“Good morning Mr. Grey,” he greets me. “Happy birthday, sir!”
“Do you want to tell me where you are taking me?” I ask almost sternly.
“I would sir, but I have strict instructions from Mrs. Grey. She said, and I quote, ‘it’s my husband’s birthday. If he pesters you for the destination and you spill the beans, you will not be forgiven!’ And honestly sir, I don’t want to be on Mrs. Grey’s ‘unforgiven list’. I hope you understand,” he says with a genuine smile.
“Surprise!” a chorus of voices greet me followed by “Happy Birthday!" when I walk into the cabin. I see that my parents, brother, Kate, and Mia are all along for the ride.
“Hi! Thank you for showing up for my birthday trip. I’m sure you all know we’ll have fun, there!”
“Nice try, son. But Ana instructed all of us to keep silent about the destination.” My dad smiles blissfully.

It is difficult to hand in the reins blindly knowing the recent events, reliving them in my nightmares. I suppose that if I wasn’t surrounded by the people I love the most, a surprise trip would probably completely freak me out. Even knowing this is my wife’s plan for my birthday, the fear of uncertainty still resides in a dark corner of my mind. Not because she or anyone in my immediate circle would wish me harm, but if something or someone who wish them harm, I fear that would be blindsided and that's not a place I want to be in. I hate not having the control in my hand, but I am willing to surrender it briefly to my wife whom I trust the most. Since Taylor also knows about this travel, he knows how to take precautions as far as my security protocols are concerned.
I look around the cabin: this is my family. These are the people who love me. I had not felt the love they were offering me, showering me with until after Ana has gotten into my life. She’s the glue that binds me to my family, my siblings, and our own little family. I had loathed the expression of someone’s ‘better half’. I mean, if you were not a proper individual, I don’t know a better half would salvage a person, or perhaps I thought of it as a condescending expression. Yet, I am inclined to feel that she just may be my far better half, the catalyst that makes this inadequate human salvageable, or dare I say worthy of love. Anastasia is not just the center of my universe, but she is the beginning and the end of it. She and Teddy make up the single entity around whom revolves my entire universe. I don’t exist without them. I’m meaningless. 50 Shades fucked up.

Without Ana, I didn’t know and didn’t have the capability to understand that I could mean something to the other members of my family. She gives me one of her dazzling smiles as she seats herself across me after making sure that Teddy’s car seat is properly secured next to her, though Teddy is in the arms of his Aunt Mia.
“Earth to Christian. Yo! Bro! I’m sure not knowing the destination is killing you and you’re probably trying to find a way before we take off. But, chill out for a little bit. It’s okay to let the little lady ride you a little bit,” he says inserting another one of his sexual innuendos. “Though I’m not sure if you’ve gotten any sort of riding lately.” He laugh loudly.
“Elliot!” Chides Kate.
“It’s alright Kate. It’s been my experience that those who are just quick draws tend to talk a lot about what they can’t accomplish and those who can, just keep quiet and enjoy the ride.”

“Christian!” Ana is the one who is chiding this time, blushing profusely. My parents are too engrossed in their grandchild to notice anything else going on around them.
“Good morning everyone! This is your captain speaking!” Stephan's voice echoes around the cabin. “We are ready to get in the queue at SEA-TAC to take off shortly. Please fasten your seat belts. As soon as we are airborne, Clarice will resume food and beverage services.”
I notice that Stephan doesn’t give the flight duration or the landing time as he usually does.  Well, it looks like my wife acquainted him with the fear of God or secrecy pact against his own boss.
My dad gets up to place Teddy in his car seat and carefully buckles him up. Teddy’s not pleased to be off of the loving arms of his grandparents and shows his protests loudly and clearly. Ana coos him and gives him his binky and directs his attention to the little plush frog attached to his binky he likes to hold. As the jet’s engine revs and gets louder to take off soon, I can see Ana getting nervous. The jet slowly taxis on the tarmac and takes her place in the take-off queue. I lean in and take my wife’s hand and firmly hold it in mine while I find myself making baby noises to my son. He likes the sound of my voice. It calms him.
The jet speeds up on the runway and finally the nose lifts up and we’re airborne. When we reach the cruising altitude and when Stephan turns off the seat-belt signs, Ana’s fingers' firm grasp still continue to crush my fingers. The flight is pleasant, and uneventful. I have made jokes with my family, talked about sports, Teddy’s upcoming shots, his monthly growth and work. But, no one mentions the nearly devastating events of Teddy’s kidnapping. Thank goodness for that! My family enjoys the food and drinks which are supposed to be the best available for private aircrafts.

When Stephan announces that we are ready to land and to please get back to our seats and buckle up, we’ve been up in the air for two hours and ten minutes. Having occasionally seen the ocean on the right of us, I know that we’re still on the west coast and we have gone down to south and not north. So, we are somewhere in northern California. When we exit the jet, I know we are in San Francisco. It’s a bright sunny day and two SUVs are waiting to pick the family and our luggage up. Taylor greets both the drivers by their names and he’s already assigned passenger per SUV. He’s riding in our vehicle next to the driver and allocates space for Sawyer and Melissa in the other SUV. My parents ride in the second vehicle along with my sister while Kate and Elliot are assigned in to our vehicle. When everyone is loaded into the two black Suburbans, we move towards 101 North Freeway.
Anastasia looks at me expectantly.

“I gotta hand it to you baby, you know how to surprise a man! Thank you!”
“It doesn’t take much to surprise you then bro,” teases Elliot.
The friendly banter continues for almost half an hour while the girls chatter excitedly. Kate is talking about all the good shopping she and Anastasia can do while the boys are busy. Ana does her non-committal ‘we’ll see’ to Kate. I know she’s got something else up her sleeve.
The driver takes the 6th Street exit, then turns right, avoiding the construction, and he finally turns right onto the 3rd Street entering the circular driveway. Four bellboys are already waiting to help with the luggage and I feel enormous pride for my wife who is watching me like a hawk.
“I’m totally impressed Mrs. Grey.” My seldom uttered, genuine compliment makes her grin ear to ear.
“Coming from you, it’s an honor, Mr. Grey.”
One of the bellboys offers to take Teddy’s carriage, but I don’t hand my son into any stranger’s hands.
I’m his dad, I will take him!” I say a little too harshly and the bellboy shirks his hand away as if I burnt him.
“Of course sir,” he scuttles away with the suitcases.
“Well?” Ana asks.
“St. Regis? Well done, Mrs. Grey. Tell me you got the presidential room…” I say trying to change the topic.
“I got the presidential room. Anything but the best for my husband. But, that wasn’t what I was asking, and you know that.” She is chiding me for scaring the bellboy.
“No stranger touches my son.”
Our son,” she smiles. “Alright, let’s go get settled,” she says holding my hand.

*****      *****

“Teddy must have missed his mommy,” I say when I see him greedily nursing and holding her breast so possessively.  
“He doesn’t mind the bottle, but he prefers me.” Anastasia’s eyes don’t leave Teddy for one second when she’s talking to me. “Don’t we baby?” she tickles under his chin. Madonna and child painting by Raphael comes to mind with this almost sacred visual. How a mom should be. Holding our son protectively, lovingly. A mixture of joy, love and pride exudes through my wife profoundly and acutely. Somehow seeing her with that deep maternal love leaves me exposed, raw even. Has anyone ever held me like that? Looked at me the way she does towards Teddy? Did the crack whore love me? I had never understood the concept of love before I met Ana. But what I feel for her and for this tiny baby weighing less than ten pounds, less than a sack of potatoes in fact, make me feel like my heart is beating outside of my body. With his first cries, my heart jumps to find out what he needs, if he’s hurt, hungry, and dirty. If he needs me and he does need me.
"Penny for your thoughts?" Anastasia’s voice breaks the silence only broken by Teddy sucking, content and satiated noises.
"Oh, they're worth more than a penny, baby."
“In that case, is there a station coming up where I can board your train of thoughts?” 
“Sarcasm?” I ask narrowing my eyes.
“Curiosity.” She pats the space next to her on the bed. I sigh and sit next to my wife.
“Just that you’re a wonderful mom. You really must be the best mom in the world.” I'm in awe of her capacity to love. 

“I think you’re biases Christian. All moms are devoted to their children.”
“You’re different, baby.”
She hands me Teddy. Putting his small blanket on my shoulder, I hold him within my embrace patting his back.
“Do you remember anything from your childhood with your mom?”
“Grace?” I ask. “You know I didn’t come to the Grey household until I was four.”
“No, before that. Something pleasant. Like this moment for instance,” she probes.
“I try not to remember the crack whore. Sometimes, few good memories find their way to surface. But, they’re mostly bad.”
“Christian, can I ask a favor of you?”
“Sure, anything.”
“Could you not refer to your biological mom as the crack whore?” she asks softly.
My body goes rigid.
“That’s what she was Ana. Besides, I really don’t want to talk about her on my birthday. It doesn’t bring anything positive.”
“I know. I’m really sorry, Christian. But, it's just that, since becoming a mom, I would hate to imagine that someday Teddy could refer to me in a similar way, or dislike us for something we may do unwillingly. You know how hard it was to carry a baby with all the morning sickness. How painful was the delivery. Not to mention afterwards… What you had gone through. Teddy has both of us together, devoted to him and Mrs. Jones and lots of family members, yet it is still difficult, still more than a full time job to care for a baby.” She smiles when she sees me wordless, staring out the window towards the San Francisco Bay.
“What I’m trying to say is, don’t be hard on yourself or the memory of Ella. We didn’t have to endure her difficulties. Just don’t hate her, please. For my sake. For Teddy's…”
“Ana, I…” I exhale a breath and take in a deeper one. “I don’t hate her. Not anymore, but I don’t particularly want to think about her either.”
“We are not!” She’s all smiles. “Because, it’s getting late, and we are going to go to dinner with your family.”
“It’s only four p.m.”
“Well, your mom and dad want to entertain Teddy while we get ready. Don’t worry, Melissa is going to be there with him,” she adds quickly. When I give her a reticent expression she adds, “They’re only two doors down, Christian. I want Teddy to learn to bond with his family members and I want to encourage that at every chance we get. They adore him!”
“I know, I’ll take him there.” When I notice her bristling with nervous energy, I get suspicious. “Are you up to something else?” I ask narrowing my eyes.
“Just what are you trying to say, sir?” she bats her eyelashes innocently. “I’m sure I don’t know what you mean.”
“Have you been to San Francisco before?” I ask. So far, she’s done a great job with the arrangements for everyone.
“Nope. My first time.” She then changes the topic. “Would you take Teddy to Grace and Carrick please while I try to get ready?”
“Where are we going for dinner? Or is it a secret as well?”
“You just have to learn to trust me, Mr. Grey.”
“You are enjoying this, aren’t you?” I ask, grabbing Teddy’s diaper bag and his carriage.
“You have no idea!” She grins wide.
“I might have to get you back for all the topping you've been doing today, baby.”
“Really?” She asks hopeful.
“I don’t divulge my secrets either, Mrs. Grey. You’ll just have to find out.”

*****      *****
 I knock on my parents’ room and greeted by my sister Mia who grabs the carriage out of my hands.
“Easy, Mia, easy!”
“Oh, I just love him so! Makes me want to have a baby!”
“Mia!” shouts both mom and dad.
“Relax! After I find a fabulous husband of course. Meanwhile, I will just love and practice with my Teddy.” She takes Teddy out of the car seat and right into her embrace. She makes kissing noises to my son who seems to love the attention he’s getting.
“You’re my little little angel, aren’t you Teddy?” she smooches him.
“Okay, okay. He’s not edible Mia,” I try to take him.
“Moooom!”Mia complains. 
“I’ll take my grandson,” my mom reaches and cradles Teddy.
“I’m a pediatrician, Christian, and I raised the three of you. He’s in good hands.”
“I’ll moderate the overexcited ladies if they get out of hand,” my dad adds. I grunt.
“If they need my help, I’m here too, Mr. Grey,” Melissa adds. I roll my eyes to all of them.
“For heaven’s sake,” I raise my hands in surrender. “Okay, fine. I’ll see you all at the dinner.”
“Yeah, bye,” they all say eager to get rid of me so they can play with Teddy. Our tiny baby wrapped everyone around his pinkie.
When I get back to our suite, I find Anastasia is wearing a stunning black halter mini satin dress with a plunging back and the neckline is showing her ample bosoms.
“You like?” she asks after seeing my stunned face.
“Wow!”
“Does that mean you like it?”
“Yes, but I don’t want to have everyone in the city of San Francisco ogling my wife.”
“It’s for your benefit, Mr. Grey. Not for the other occupants of the city.”
“Just so you keep that in mind… These,” I run my finger over her cleavage, “are mine and so are these,” I say as I stand before her and pull her swiftly to merge with my body, cupping and squeezing her buttocks. She gasps in reaction.
“They’re all yours.” Her voice is breathy. “I want to please you on your birthday,” she says stunning me into silence.
“That you shall, Mrs. Grey.” She smiles, and then bites her lip. Fuck it! I lean down and kiss my wife for all I’ve got. 

*****      *****

When Taylor pulls up in the parking lot for Gary Danko SF, I am very impressed by my wife’s choice. The restaurant has a reputation for having an impressive wine list, amazing food and privacy for their clients. When our large group enters the restaurant, I’m surprised to find Sawyer already there. The restaurant’s Maître d is also waiting to escort us to a private room without delay. Anastasia comes eye to eye with Sawyer as if to ask something, and he nods once.
  Taylor too speaks to Sawyer and they check some information on their smart phones, and then resume their wait by the door.
“Honestly Christian,” speaks a raspy voice I would know anywhere. “If it wasn’t for Ana, you wouldn’t have invited us to your birthday!” The surprise I feel puts a grin on my face.
“Oh my goodness! Look at him! I’ll get to you later boss!” Both Ros and Gwen rush to Teddy’s side. My infant son is a chick magnet.
“Ana, you look fantastic! I don’t know how you’ve done it!” Gwen gushes her compliments while giving Ana a hug longer than I feel deserved.
“Well, Mrs. Grey is a great student, but I believe the teacher should also get a little credit, don’t you think?” It’s our trainer Claude Bastille. Anastasia comes next to me where Claude is giving me a hearty handshake. She briefly hugs Ana then both Gwen and Ros convey their well wishes for my birthday and my ball-crushing right hand (wo)man Ros, continues to coo and ogle my son.
“Who else is here?” I ask, though pleasantly surprised with the additional company, I want to know if there will be other people.
“Our group is complete,” Ana smiles brightly.
This birthday takes the top spot of all birthday because, I now fully know the value of the people in my life and there’s a new addition, part of me and part of Ana. This is a perfect day.
When the food and drinks satiate and fill all the guests, laughter from every guest continue to come. It’s almost eight p.m. and Ana quietly checks the time on her smart phone. Teddy’s bed time is coming. My mother leans in and says something to her. I shake my head to Ana in question.
“Teddy needs to be tucked in for his bedtime. But I need to feed him before I send him off with your parents.”
“What?” I ask. She picks Teddy up from my mom’s arms, and I pick up his diaper bag to follow her and question just exactly where our son would be going with my parents.
A small room is allocated for us to feed Teddy in privacy.
“Why are we sending our son with my parents?” I ask.
“Because your birthday celebration isn’t over, Mr. Grey. I want to feed him now so I don’t leak milk all over the place. Our son will go back to the hotel with your parents and Melissa.” When I look apprehensive, Ana continues.
“Don’t worry! I tried my best to make everything to your safety standards. Since you jump like a cat on hot tin roof, I’ll give you a little bit of spoiler. FYI,” she says looking up from watching Teddy’s face to give me a glance, “I didn’t realize Taylor was even stricter than you are; but he helped me arrange it all. Ryan is also staying at the hotel and he’s in the protection detail. Taylor as usual is going to come with us.”
“Ah! Ana, you know I get nervous about unannounced surprises or things that involve all of my family and I have not been a part of the planning.”
“You’ll just have to trust me and you overzealous security team, who checked and rechecked and checked the recheck a third time,” she says rolling her eyes.
“Perhaps I should have asked this first: Where are we going?” I question her. 
“You won’t give this up, will you?” she asks.
“You know your husband, baby.”
“Fine, I give up. You, me, Kate and Elliot are going to the Beyoncé concert tonight! Well, it’s a two day event, but I think there are other artists in the show that you might enjoy listening.”
“Mia’s not coming?” I ask curiously.
“She doesn’t have a date tonight, but I think she’s making an all-day event tomorrow with a man she started seeing.”
“A man? Who? How do you know this and I don’t?”
“Oh, Christian! You’re so obtuse. We talk about these things all the time. He’s a doctor who worked on her way back when, you know, when she was injured.” She flinches. It was after Jack Hyde’s attack then. I nod.
“She ran into him at a fundraiser with your mom and one thing led to another, they hit it off and went out a few times. It’s not that serious, but she seems to be very taken with him. Apparently he adores her. Mia invited him to come over tomorrow and they’ll spend the weekend together.” She explains.
“But he isn’t here tonight.”
“No. Mr. Strict-rules, also known as Jason Taylor,” she says changing her voice to a baritone level, “I’m sorry Mrs. Grey, but I cannot allow an individual unknown to Mr. Grey no matter how clean his background is to come to an event involving Mr. Grey and you, ma’am. Mr. Grey likes to vet the people he meets beforehand." She then switches back to her normal voice. "So there, you can meet him should you wish, but not tonight. He isn’t coming and neither is your sister. I had to make concessions.”
“Mrs. Grey, you are learning to negotiate,” I grin wide.
“Yes, but not with Taylor! You’d be happy to know that he is unyielding to any concessions or negotiations when he deems something as a security risk.” I hide a smile. Yep, that’s Taylor. “So, we can’t take the new boyfriend of Mia with us until Taylor said you met him prior to such a public event.”
Teddy seems to be full. Ana expertly changes him, and we go back to our company. After sending Ana back into the party room, I motion Taylor to come and talk to me.
“So, where is the concert?” My question makes him give me a surprised look, but then he nods knowing I always find out what I want to know.
“At the AT&T Park, sir.”
“And our seats?”
“As private as we could get them at the last minute, sir. But, I will be able to keep my eyes open. Mrs. Grey’s managed to snatch four tickets to one of the suites located in the right field with floor to ceiling windows and you can directly walk outside. It’s not entirely private because the suite has thirty tickets, so there will be others.”
“Okay, here’s what I want you to do, and Mrs. Grey cannot know this.”
When I explain what I want, he asks, “Can I request Andrea’s help, sir?”
“Just as long as you get it done in the exact way I tell you.”
Taylor blushes.
“Yes, sir.”
Well, well, well, Mrs. Grey. I don’t top from the bottom. I just top. I smile knowing Ana’s reaction will be priceless. This will be a birthday to remember.



  

177 comments:

Fabiana said...

Obrigada Emine você arrasa como sempre. Por favor continue. Sou sua fã. Adoro ler suas histórias.

MCRA Gestão de Projetos e Negócio Social said...

Emine, that suffering to the Cristhian not be in control and trust Ana for this control. I was worried about him and the enemies for you (Emine) is a master of surprises and I'm like Cristhian thinking that the surprise may be bad. I would not want the enemy to attack. And it's beautiful love of all by Teddy, building a family is they needed ... is repetitive, but you are always wonderful and amazing, thank you and I wish always much success for his career as a writer.

MCRA Gestão de Projetos e Negócio Social said...

Emine, that suffering to the Cristhian not be in control and trust Ana for this control. I was worried about him and the enemies for you (Emine) is a master of surprises and I'm like Cristhian thinking that the surprise may be bad. I would not want the enemy to attack. And it's beautiful love of all by Teddy, building a family is they needed ... is repetitive, but you are always wonderful and amazing, thank you and I wish always much success for his career as a writer.

Anonymous said...

Ja estou aqui loucaaaaaa pela continuacao, Emine voce nos mata assim, termina um capitulo assim, nos deixando com gosto de quero mais, fazer o que ne? ja estou aqui muito anciosa aguardando o proximo, please nao demore muito a postar, ou voce vai nos matar aqui!
De sua fã incondicional!
Thalyta

Lya de Aquino said...

Aiiiiiiiiii meu coração, vocês não imaginam minha felicidade quando vi que tinha cap novo \õ/
fiz até uma dancinha comemorando...E dessa vez Emine realmente se superou, não vou nem começar a dizer o que amei, caso contrário vou ficar o dia inteiro aqui, e eu tenho que trabalhar para ganhar a vida kkk
Mas eu realmente amei, amei a atenção e o amor direcionados a Teddy (ele é tão fofo, que dá vontade de morder) pela familia Grey, e principalmente pelos pais dele <3.
Achei lindo a relação do Christian com o filho, ele é o melhor pai literário que eu já vi. Amei de paixão a forma como a Ana mesmo ocupada com tudo não esqueceu do aniversario do marido, da comemoração entre os dois e da surpresa que ela fez pra ele. Estou completamente apaixonada por esse casal, e já estou completamente ansiosa pelo próximo. Obrigado Emine por animar meu horário de almoço, e por esse cap perfeito.
Ps. Estou cruzando os dedos para que o próximo venha logo.
Pps. O que houve com a relação da Mia com Ethan?? Como eles terminaram? E como está sendo resolvida a situação dos sequestradores de Teddy?

Angie Adams said...

Emine, Thank you for another amazing and wonderful chapter. I hope all is well with you, and your family.

Priscila Pessotto said...

Obrigada Emine! Vou aguardar a tradução da Neusinha. Tenho certeza de que o capítulo está ótimo. Beijos.

clgere3 said...

Oh my God, I can't wait to know what it's going to happen. I love that Christian know how to take charge even in his own birthday.

clgere3 said...

Oh my God, I can't wait to know what it's going to happen. I love that Christian know how to take charge even in his own birthday.

Rosangela Maria Cabral Corvalan said...

Perfect, wonderful, fantastic, as always! Thank you Emine!
Today I needed a little distraction!
Anastacia once again surprising her husband is very nice!
Wonder what Christian is planning?

Kisses my dear!

Love

Rosângela

Xênia said...

Emine ...maravilhoso capitulo!! vc escreve divinamente...amo tudo que vc escreve....!!!

Xênia said...

Parabéns....Emine...adorei!!!

samkay202 said...

Oh my God such a cliffhanger! I was so looking forward to finding out Christians' surprise to Ana... I hope the next update is coming "sooners rather than laters" otherwise, this is yet another chapter well written! I loved it, thank you..

Anonymous said...

thank you for this fantastic chapter

fanny rebellon said...

Waw Anastasia aprendió muy bien del controlador Cristian jajaja, mírenla no mas como planifico todo, tremendo cumpleaños, todo hermoso y ya Cristian aprendió a valorar mas a los que lo quieren bien. Gracias Emine fantástico como siempre.

Anonymous said...

Dear Emine
You are the best thank so much for the new chapter. XOXO

Lete said...

Adorei.Como é bom encontrar um novo capítulo.Como sempre voce arrasou Emine.Parabéns.Ansiosa pela continuação.

Jaque Nasaré said...

Excellent! Worth the wait ... Thank you my friend!

katerina Bunny said...

Oh I missed so much your writing! Thank you gorgeous girl for an other wonderful chapter. The way you write the story, the fillings you create, the expectations, the surprises, the suspense, pure talent! And the aura of love and care you build around our loving couple and their son, brinks me a smile in my face, tranquility. It was a great anτidote after the "Grey" which seems so poor - and in many ways so wrong- compared to your writing.
Thank you again, I consider myself a devoted fan of yours.
Katerina from Greece.

Anonymous said...

Great chapter. Looking forward to more.

Regiane Brambati said...

O que será que o Christian vai aprontar?
Belíssimo capitulo, Louca para ler traduzido pela MEGAMARAVILHOSA Neusa Reis.
Beijos Emine

reinee raman said...

Hi Emine

Thank you for this excellent chapter.. Will be grateful if you could give POV on Taylor on Teddy kidnap.. Also first day Teddy at GEH n Teddy getting injection...
Thank you so much

Reinee Raman
Penang

Heather J Jacobson said...

AMAZING as always!!

Angela said...

Omg!! Emine,
I'll never stop to read your fantastic blog and thus chapter!!! Oh this chapter is pure love and lust. I love it !!! I love this Christian love love love !!! Always!!!
And I love you too !!! Thank dear Talented friend!

Angela

Martha Baltazar said...

Oh My God!!! I loved this chapter, but then again I love all of your chapters. I can hardly wait for the next one. I'm anxious to see what Christian has planned for his Ana. Thank you so much Emine.

Elo said...

Eeeeee.... capitulo novo,fiquei super feliz,venho sempre dar uma olhada se tem algo novo obrigada querida Emine um beijo,e agora é aguardar a excelente tradução da Neusa!!!

Anonymous said...


I'm thinking that Christian will have Beyonce sing "Crazy in Love" exclusively to Ana.
Enjoyed the story.

Thanks,
Kamilla

jeangb said...

Another great chapter. It must be very difficult for Christian to give up his precious control of every given situation. But Ana has covered all the bases with Taylor so his should be proud and learn to trust her. I hope his surprise doesn't top hers. It would take all the pleasure out of her plans if he tries to out smart her. For goodness sake let her enjoy what she has achieved in making his birthday special without him wanting to go over the top to prove he is still in total command

Anonymous said...

Spectacular as always. Well done, thank you for posting! You're a terrific writer.

Anonymous said...

Thrilled to bits to have you back! I loved the new chapter and can't wait for the next one but I will continue to re-read. I am glad about Mia & the doctor (I think I emailed you about that last year). Stay well and enjoy the remainder of your summer.
cheers, kath

Ira Nathalie Luna said...

I love this chapter! Can't wait for christian's surprise. I'm a fan emine :)

Thalita Alcantara said...

Omg thank you Emine!! 😍

MY FREE WORLD said...

Adorei este capítulo, estou ansiosa para ler o próximo. :)

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Gwen said...

As always just the best!!! Love Ana "in control"!!! Aye but sounds like CG might have one up'd her! Looking forward to your next chapter!!
Gwen

Gwen said...


Awesome chapter!! Loved Ana topping!!!! But CG certainly has a plan!!!!!

Xênia said...

Emine....I loved....you're the best!!

Darla Mills said...

Great chapter, love when Ana tops but somehow Christian always takes over.

Anonymous said...

You've taken their story to a SUPER fun level!! Look forward to every new chapter...

FABIANA said...

CAPITULO NOVO MUITO ESPERADO PELAS FÃS DESTA INCRÍVEL ESCRITORA. PARABÉNS EMINE

Margareth Antequera said...

Me pego pensando no Teddy, ele deve ser muito fofo.
Amei demais, e matei a saudades.
É apaixonante ler a continuação desta história, sempre bem escrita e muito bem construida, ninguém conhece o nosso CG como a querida Emine.
Muito obrigada Emine - o livro 5 está ótimo.
Me faltam palavras para agradecer o quanto amo ler seus livros.
Receba meu carinho e profundo agradecimento.

Maria Monteiro said...

Boa tarde Neusa, espero que esteja bem. Não está sendo possível acessar o último capítulo, já traduzido por você. Ao clicarmos no mesmo, o que vem continua sendo o texto em inglês. Já agradeço sua atenção em verificar.Bj

claudia ferreira said...

Porque o capitulo nao abre em portugues?

Neusa Reis said...

Meninas a Emine Fougner já foi informada do problema do link que está encaminhando para o capítulo em inglês e não para a tradução. Para ler em português, no momento tem que ir ao cabeçalho do Blog onde tem Português 5 e clicar no Capítulo 5 diretamente, não no Português5. Na lista que fica do lado esquerdo o capítulo 5 ainda está com problema, eu espero que a Emine consiga resolver... De toda forma este capítulo vai valer a espera. Está lindo.. Beijos

Nicoletta Cuppone said...

Impressive!masterly!exciting! I.L.Y.
Nicoletta

Anonymous said...

Thank you for this beautiful chapter! Can't wait for the next one.

Joan Goldman said...

OMGI can't wait to read what Christian has just cooked up with Taylor.

silvana altale said...

Arraaaaaasou! Muito obrigada por ter postado mais um capitulo, você não sabe o quanto eu fico feliz por ver capítulos novos! Vou ler imediatamente, quando tiver mais novidades, por favor, nos informe! Obg, tenha uma otima semana, beijinhos! <3 ♥♥

Reggie Ablao said...

Hi ms emine, when will the next chapter be posted?

reinee raman said...

Hi Emine

Can't wait for your next chapter.. Hope it coming soon..

Thanks
Reinee Raman

Anonymous said...

You wrote after soo long and that too just one chapter
Not fair
Please update faster:) please
Left me hanging and I'm dying to read more

Carolyn Brooker said...

Thank you for another wonderful chapter

reinee raman said...

Hi Emine

Looking forward for another chapter. Hoping u will answer for loose end on FSOG.. How liela got AG n KK house key.. How she know AG be at apartment on that day.. How Jack know CG will be in NY.. And pls punish Elena..

Thank you

Charm D said...

Emine,
That chapter was delicious!!! I can't wait to read the next one,I know it will be well worth the wait!

Take care
Char

Walquíria Silva Belshoff Torezani said...

Amei...
Simplesmente perfeito!
Estou ansiosa pela continuação.
Emine você é show!

Amy Headrick said...

Awesome, can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Anonymous said...

I love your blog.When is the next chapters?

Nikko Anthony said...

Eminé
I'm so in love with your brain. I'd say you but it's really your brain I wan t to crawl inside. I just finished echoes in eternity, AGAIN. And I read all of this blog, AGAIN. I'm very hungry for more. I might even have to pay you a visit. Christian was wrong, anticipation SUCKS DAMNIT CARPE DEIM!! I'm not sure I spelled that right but you get the message. 👠👠👠👠 I'm tapping my stiletto's AGAIN.
I love you, Eminé. I hope all is well for you! Much 💘

Anonymous said...

Esperando pelo próximo capítulo! Show da Beyoncé uau!!!

Anonymous said...

I love your work. Can't wait to see what the surprise is, by the way when are we going to have the next chapter? Please let it be soon.

Amy Headrick said...

Any idea to when we can expect the next chapter?

karen spatti said...

Lindo ...lindo ...lindo
Seu trabalho é maravilhoso ....obrigado Emine ....ansiosa para o capítulo 6 ...beijos.

Anonymous said...

Did you forget us?

Ingryd Mustrange said...

Ótimo ansiosa para o próximo capitulo dessa linda e quente história.

Iglyz Lopes said...

Quando vai sai o capitulo 6 do livro 5 do grey.

Anonymous said...

Quando saio o capitulo 6 do livro 5 do greu.

MARY DAILEY said...

Dear Emine is everything okay you never miss writing a chapter before so I'm wondering is everything okay when are you going to write another Pella series and will a walk in cloud be in it I notice that audio book has your back ground for a walk in the clouds on their back ground for fifty shades of grey hope everything is okay with you and your family can't wait for the next chapter

penha storani said...

Emine vc é uma escritora maravilhosa. Conseguiu identificar e exteriorizar a alma do personagem, melhor do que a propria autora, que lançou o livro na versão Grey e que deixou muito a desejar. A sua versão está perfeita, deu vida humana ao personagem, tenho certeza que o seu livro faria um enorme sucesso. Parabens, continuo sua fã sempre. Bjs no seu coração. Aguardo ansiosa os proximos capitulos, que essa historia nunca acabe.

Anonymous said...

Why are you not writing more chapters ? If you have stopped writing them can you at least tell us please.

Anonymous said...

Loving your version of FSOG..I have read this twice now from the begining...I hope everything is going well for you and your family... I was excited to get a mail update today but was disappointed when it was for the English version for book 5 chapter 6...please update soon..

maria silvia said...

Please chapter 6, my anxiety not take it anymore, do not leave us abandoned

dani lindsey said...

THE WAIT FOR THE REST OF THIS STORY IS PURE PUNISHMENT!!!!! I'M SO LOVING TI!!!!

Anonymous said...

Hi, dear Emine!!
Comecei a ler e me interessar pelos livros da E. L. James, somente agora em julho deste ano! Li os 3 em cinco dias! "Fuçando" na internet, achei um blog com sua fanfic e adorei! Li seus livros rapidamente! Nossa, eles são viciantes! E só depois, achei seu blog! Já li e reli seus livros aqui rsrs Parabéns! Você torna o ordinário extraordinário!!! Espero que sejamos contempladas com MAIS! Obrigada!
Neusa, obrigada pela tradução primorosa!!
Ansiosa por mais capítulos!!
Christiane

Anonymous said...

Dear Emine, I Hope things are well with you and your family, please update soon you are excellent at what you do, keeping myself busy with fanfiction until you continue this story.

Anonymous said...

Are we ever going to get the next chapter? At least tell us what's wrong.

Anonymous said...

Will we ever get the next chapter? At least tell us what's wrong.

celiatabai@gmail.com said...

adorei, eles sempre nos surpreendendo, estou muito ansiosa para ver o capitulo 6, esta espera esta me sufocando, por favor Emine nos tire dessa espera .
Ansiosaaaaaaa





celiatabai@gmail.com said...

adorei, eles sempre nos surpreendendo, estou muito ansiosa para ver o capitulo 6, esta espera esta me sufocando, por favor Emine nos tire dessa espera .
Ansiosaaaaaaa





Neusa Reis said...

Meninas só para lembrar que o livro Ecos na Eternidade conta a história do Alex Pella, aquele que aparece na história do Christian com destaque. O Pella é um cara quentíssimo também. Vale a pena conhecer a história dele. Quem leu está adorando e recomendando como pode ser visto nos comentários da Amazon.com.br
Vamos aproveitar o preço promocional de R$ 3,94, comprar e comentar no site da Amazon.
Estou insistindo porque realmente vale a pena.
Beijos e até breve.

Penny Brueggemann said...

Hi Emine....I know life is busy. Congrats on #1 in Brazil. I look everyday and hope you are continuing with our Christian and Ana. I so miss your writing about our beloved couple!

Anonymous said...

Please come back we miss your stories about Christian and Ana... please please please don't forget us.

We all enjoy your blog and stories~

Anonymous said...

Will there be an update of any sort soon, it is extremely difficult to remain engaged with a story that has such extended delays in it's progress, every chapter is taking 2 - 3 months or longer. Its 10 weeks since the last English post for book 5 and that was chapter 5

It feels strained and the story flow is not there when reading.

Please end post and if possible progress at a more expediant rate too give this story an opportunity to find its flow and story rythym.

Anonymous said...

Will there be an update of any sort soon, it is extremely difficult to remain engaged with a story that has such extended delays in it's progress, every chapter is taking 2 - 3 months or longer. Its 10 weeks since the last English post for book 5 and that was chapter 5

It feels strained and the story flow is not there when reading.

Please end post and if possible progress at a more expediant rate too give this story an opportunity to find its flow and story rythym.

jeangb said...

Missing you

Ana Maria said...

Querida, estou preocupada, ha tantos dias nao envia um novo capitulo. Espero que esteja bem, assim como sua familia!!!! Um beijao!!!!!!

Silvinha Fré said...

Can't wait for the next chap!!!! Thanks

Anonymous said...

Are we ever going to get the next chapter at least tell us when or if we're going to get it or tell us what's wrong.

Belacm said...

Nossa, comprei o livro, que está praticamente de graça, e é excelente! É sedutor, envolvente. Proporciona momentos de grande entretenimento. Terminei de ler e já fiz minha avaliação. Pessoal, vamos fazer nossa parte e ajudar a Emine a divulgar seu trabalho! É muito talentosa pra ficar no anonimato. Todas que aqui acompanham seu trabalho, já perceberam que ela é melhor que muito escritor conhecido por aí. Uma sugestão, Neuza, seria fazer um post atualizado sobre a venda do livro. Eu, por exemplo, que fico sempre na 1a página do blog, aguardando novos capítulos, por acaso, entrei nos comentários e vi sua mensagem. Sabia que seria vendido (no post do Grey Review), mas não sabia quando. De repente muitas leitoras ainda não sabem. Fica a dica e o agradecimento. Beijos.// Wow, I bought the book, which is practically for free on Amazon, and it is excellent! It is seductive, engaging. It provides moments of great entertainment. I finished reading and I've done my evaluation. Guys, let's do our part and help Emine to publicize her work! She's too talented to stay anonymous. All who follow her work here, have realized that it's much better that some well-known writers. One suggestion, Neuza and Emine, if I may say, would be make an updated post about the book's sale. I,for one, who always read the blogs's first page, waiting for new chapters, by chance, went in the comments and saw your message, Neuza. I knew it would be sold (post on Grey Review/june), but didn't know when. Perhaps many readers still don't know about it. Kisses. Congratulations, Emine, for your book! Isabela/RJ.

Sueli G Temoteo said...

Como já comentei em capítulos anteriores, os livros 01 e 02 estão impecáveis, perfeitos mesmos. Mas acho que a Emine se perdeu nesse desdobramento que fez do livro 03. Prolongou demais a história e não conseguiu terminar. Desculpe-me, Emine, mas não foi legal deixar-nos à deriva depois da expectativa que criastes em nós, leitoras. São cinco meses esperando a continuação...

Anonymous said...

Love love love all of it . Please continue soon , dying for more , to find out his surprise and the scores he had to settle at his meeting .

Donita said...

I need more..... I am waiting patiently.... ok not so patiently.. LOL Please post again!!!! The surprise for Christian is killing me!! I so hope it’s a good one and nothing bad happens at the concert that Anna is taking them to. When oh when can we expect more!!! You rock as a writer. I read the book Grey and I have to say what I read here is so much better!!! Please post more or tell us when to maybe expect more??? This waiting is killing me!! Your Loyal Reader

Anonymous said...

Hallo Emine, i love you stories. It's been a while since the last chapter - so I wonder whether there will be more chapters about Ana and Christian ?

Anonymous said...

Estou desesperada para os próximos capítulos. Entro aqui toda semana pra ver se tem novidade.
Vai fazer 3 meses que não tem. O que aconteceu? Não desista da gente Emine. Por favor.

Anna Maria

Ligia ryan said...

Hi Is everything okay? It been almost 3 months.

jeangb said...

I was excited when I received a email telling me you had posted a chapter; it's been a while. Very disappointed to see that it wasn't chapter 6 but a repost of 5. When are you going to update I am missing the story please make it soon.

Annette said...

Love the story. I got an email for a new chapter. However this is the same chapter that was listed back in July. I know there is a new chapter because it has been posted in another language. Would love to read it.

Anonymous said...

Hi Emine.. i received an email alert today at 5:30pm and i got so excited thinking we got a new chapter... but there wasn't. when can we expect a new one..im on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter,,.Oh, by the way.. I'm surprise that it took christian that long to figure out that it was Lincoln behind the revenge plot..

Debby said...

Hello Emine,
We all miss you like crazy. Hope all is well with you and your family.
I seem to have received chapter V book V three times now. It was a great chapter however I am anxiously awaiting chapter six.
Has this happened to anyone else?

Edna Santana said...

Emine, all right? I was missing a lot of your posts! For me, this book would not end ever! I read the Grey E L James and was disappointed! In each paragraph, looking for that vibration of the characters you so well describes and disappointed me! Bring on the books 6,7,8,9 ... because you are an exceptional writer! Thank you

amolivros18 said...

Emine, esperando ansiosa os próximos capítulos. Já tem muito tempo que não tem capítulos novos. Adoro o blog continue assim. Beijos!!!
E Neusa adoro as traduções, tudo maravilhosas!

Anonymous said...

Have to ask why have you have just reposted chapter five dating it October 2 when it was originally posted July 29???

It has been 3 months since you actually added anything new to book five, will it be another protracted wait for a new chapter and reposting dating chapter 5 is just a way to artificially make it appear that you are actively working on the story.

Please give a message about what the true future of this story is

Anonymous said...

We truly miss your amazing stories on Ana and Christian. Please don't stop now as we are addicted to your great writing.

Please??? Another story soon. Hope all is well

mulderscully said...

Hello Emine

Love reading your blog.

I just received an email from you a couple of days ago. The chapter I recieved is the same Chapter 5 which I recieved in August. There was no new chapter when I went to your blog.

Just want to let you know.

Thanks very much

Gloria

Karen said...

I was so thrilled to see your update. I waited a few days before I read it because I wanted the excitement to last. As always you did not disappoint. I will be surprised if Christian does not develop an ulcer from not knowing what Ana has planned for him....and he is going for a payback already.....naughty naughty.
Love this story.....thank you.....

Mama Goo said...

Hi Emine! Thanks so much for a wonderful update! Your take on this story is amazing! I'm looking forward to the concert & what Christian is doing with Taylor for Ana.

B.M. Geister said...

Same as Gloria above. No new chapter.

Vera Lopes said...

Olá Emine, acabei de reler a estória acho que pela 5 vez, sou fã de carteirinha. Amo Anastácia e Cristian. Por favor não pare de escrever, continue contando a estória, você é brilhante, se apossou dos personagens de uma maneira maravilhosa.
Estou anciosa pelo capítulo 6. Abraços.
Vera Lucia Lopes

Anonymous said...

Will you post anything new before 2016, reposting chapter 5 3 months after you first posted it on July 29, was this done to make it appear that you are continuing to add something however long the delays in new additions are now becoming.

Will book 5 take 5 uears yo complete?.?. Book 4 was labourous to read follow when there were months between new updates. Enjoyment is lost when weeks become months and the story loses momentum and sprit when protacted delays happen over and over.

Some sort of message or something to progress this would be appreciated.


Long term but now frustrustrated reader

reinee raman said...

Hi Emine

How are.. Hope you are doing.. Waiting here for your next chapter..

Anonymous said...

It would be more respectful to tell your loyal and supportive readers whats going on instead of silence.

Please let us know if we have been dumped. I support you but why are we being ignored?

Shirlei Cristiana said...

oi amy amei amei amei esse capitulo espero ansiosa pelo proximo espero do fundo do meu coração que o proximo nao demore muito abraçoe obrigado por essa historia incrivel

Patricia said...

Hi Emine,
Will you not post any more chapters? Are you just going to end it here? I hope not, we are waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

Anonymous said...

We have been abandoned without a proper ending. Please don't end like this!

Is this the way you treat your loyal fans? I hope not.

Cassia sandes said...

Hi everyone
What's going on?
Does anyone know What is happening?
It's over just like that?
I Received the same chapter V Again.
Too much time without any news.

Anonymous said...

I miss you, I miss you, I miss you ,,,, that's all I want to say!

Maryangel L. said...

I'm getting anxious waiting the nex chapter, please update soon...

Anonymous said...

Agora sim!!! esperando pelas continuações...Grey e Pella OMG<OMG<OMG!!!!!

Thais Meire Pires Rocha said...

Emine,estou muito anciosa por continuação.
Quando teremos?

Thais Meire Pires Rocha said...

Emine por favor continue a escrever!!!

reinee raman said...

Hi Emine

Hope everything is ok on ur end.. Happy Thanksgiving... Waiting for your next chapter..

Anonymous said...

At least tell us if you're going to post anything more, don't leave us hanging.

LC said...

Hi Emine, I'd like to congratulate you on some really great writing to date. But...chapter 5 (Oct) appears to me to be the same chapter 5 originally published in July. Could you update your loyal readers please? Obviously life gets in the way but it would be a shame to abandon such a compelling story. All love, LC

Anonymous said...

You could respond to comments...

Anonymous said...

Will you finish this book?.?

This story has lost the joy, months of delay in posts has almost destroyed what story existed.

Sad you have taken this story in a direction you have lost interest in. Looking back you should have shortened the linc plot and closed this at the end of book 4.

Book 4 was a torturous journey of extended delays, book 5 is no longer of any real interest. You have even redated the last chapter from the original post date of july to October, this appears to be your go to to hold interest for the sake of it even though you have lost interest.

Sad, that you have let you work die this death a death of delay.

I thought you had more to offer, it appears that was wrong.

LC said...

Hi Emine, love your work. I am confused however, I can't see any new writing between the August and October chapters - hoping you will update soon.

Gabizinha said...

Sei que é complicado escrever, e que quando se tem pressão sobre a gente é pior mas existe a possibilidade da historia ser atualizada antes do fim do ano?

I know it's awkward to write , and when you have pressure on us is worse but there is a possibility of history be updated before the end of the year?

Cassia sandes said...

Hello Emine,
Where are you?
Are you okay?
What's going on?

Cheryl said...

So eager for the next installment. You have truly captured the story and it's even more powerful from Christian's point of view.

I know it's a busy time of year, but please give us a Christmas present in the form of another chapter (or better yet... 2 more!)

Merry Christmas!

Ligia ryan said...

Hi Emine,
What happened? Is everything ok?
Can you please tell us something. I keep checking your site every week you never let us hanging before. Hope you well.

snmac said...

All I want for Christmas is more chapters of Christian & Anna....

reinee raman said...

Hi Emine

Waiting for next chapter.. Hope you r not abandoning this story.. Looking forward to what happens next.. Pls update..

Thank you so much for taking your time to write the story..

katerina Bunny said...

My dear Emine,
I hope everything in your life goes well. I mean, I get kind of worry here because I feel that you dropped the story and I really hope that nothing serious has happened. I know that you are a very busy person, and it takes time to maintain a rate here, but I also thought that this story was working for you as blow off steam. I know I am obsessed with your writing and I want this story to go on and on forever and this of course can't happen but you left us hanging here.
As I was waiting for the next chapter I read again from the beginning the whole story for the 5th - 6th time? I've lost the count. And I was reading as well all the comments. When I got into comments was the time that you stopped answering to as but for what I have read from previous discussions I feel like I know you, like I'm a friend of yours, I am for sure a big admirer of your writing and your ... brain.
I don't want to press you here I really I'm concerned. Give us a clue if everything is all right and if you'll keep writing.
Katerina from Greece

Luaninhah said...

Alguém sabe se emine vai continuar escrevendo,e quando vem mais capítulos? Estou ansiosa.
Please Emine, nos de esse presente de natal!🙏

snmac said...

All I want for Christmas is more chapters to read.... Please say your not done.

Anonymous said...

Where are you? Is there any more? Will you post again in 2015? Is there only to be a couple of chapters a year from here on?

Nearly six months since therecwas a new chapter for book five.

Where are you??.??

Anonymous said...

Have your loyal and long time fans been dumped like garbage.

Too bad you don't care enough to answer please..

Ex Loyal fan

Anonymous said...

where are you? i hope everything is ok

Anonymous said...

Love reading your blog.
Waiting for your next chapter.

reinee raman said...

Happy new year Emine.. Hope you'll continue this story.. Can't wait for next chapter..

Anonymous said...

its the beginning of a new year. We are all awaiting patiently for more,,, we all want to read more!!!!! Do you plan on giving any more to your story???? You got us hanging here!!! Please let us know either way.. PLEASE.. IF this was it then thanks so much it's been awesome. If there is going to be more please tell us when to expect it? THANK SO MUCH FOR THE AWESOME ROAD THIS HAS BEEN !!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Capítulo incrível, esperando ansiosamente pelo próximo!

Anonymous said...

EMINE

i HOPE YOUAND YOUR FAMILY ARE OK. i REALLY MISS YOUR WRITING.
bUT,, i REALLY UNDERSTAND WHY IT MUST TAKE ALOT OF YOUR TIME.
bEST OF LUCK TO YOU. i WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER YOU.

BYE FROM JANICE IN N.J.

jeangb said...

I do hope you haven't given up on this story. But it has been a while and I know that real life has most likely taken over. It would be good, however, if you could at least let us know what Ana had in store for Christians birthday. Hope to hear from you soon.

Joan Goldman said...

I am so missing your story and pray that you come back and continue on and that you are well. Hope that you and your family enjoyed a wonderful holiday season and that you all have a Happy and Healthy Year!

PS Please come back!

Anonymous said...

Hello Emine,
I miss your writing. hope you are well.

vera martins said...

ola, boa noite

quero comprar o ebook de 'ecos na eternidade', no entanto no site da amazon dá-me erro, o meu cartão não é aceite nos Estados Unidos.
podem dar-me alguma alternativa para poder adquirir o mesmo?

obrigada

YulsR said...

Hi Emine, was this the last chapter you're posting?? I'm sure everyone is asking you the same question but you had always responded and the last 5 months is like if you disappeared (except in Linkedin) so we are just wondering. Thank you

Anonymous said...

Hi! Are you going to post anymore chapters? This such a great story! Thanks and I hope all is well 😀

G Kimika said...

Dear Emine,
Are you planning to continue your story? The last update was in July :( I miss your story. Hope everything is OK with your family.

G Kimika said...

Dear Enime,
Are you planning to continue writing? The last update was in July :( I really miss your story. Hope your family is OK.

Anonymous said...

So six months with only a change to the chapter post date, nothing else.

Is this blog abandoned

The story has lost momentum, 6 months waiting and still nothing.

You should have ended at book 4 if you no longer had interest in writing regular pots.

Disappointing ending........well no ending just nothing.

Anonymous said...

Are you dead ?

LUIZA MARÇAL said...

Oi Emine! Estou me sentindo órfã!
Quero ler a continuação do livro 5 do Grey, mas também estou ansiosa pela continuação de "Ecos na Eternidade". Eu amei seu livro e queria te dar os parabéns por ele todo.
Quando sai o próximo? beijoss Luiza

Anonymous said...

Hi Emine, I was wondering the same thing that I see many posting. Are you ending the series now? If so, please let us know. We love your work and if you no longer feel up to continuing the story, we understand. Just wish you let us know.
Cindy

G Kimika said...

Dear Emine,
I miss you story. Your last update was in July :( Are you planning to continue?

Anonymous said...

You tweeted on the 4th of January the continuation of book 5 was coming that week.

So what is your ratio of days in a week, are they like the human to dog years? One human yesr is = to 7 dog years??

One Emine week is = 7 normal weeks to normal humans. one emine month is = 7 normal human months it would seem looking at how each addition to this story over the last 3 years are taking longer and longer to the extreme to appear.

Will check back in a month and hopefully, the Emine week from the 4 th of January maybe just maybe finished or there just might be one of a bit annual or annual chapter added.

Please Emine stick to a realistic update scedule maybe fortnightly / monthly too keep this story some sence of flow, continuity, because even you must admit that no new additions in six months is insane. No story can flow with that much delay, when it is a chapter by chapter delivery.

A'Ca'ti said...

Sad you're not posting more... Hope everything is ok with you, though.

Antonia Tavares said...

Quando vem o resto do livro?

Anonymous said...

are you done????? I enjoy this blog so much.. please let us know if your done or if you are ok? what's up???? Don't leave us hanging.. please!!!!

Marcia Petra said...

Boa tarde, gostaria de saber se vai ter a continuação do livro 5, ficou meio que no vácuo.

Marcia Petra said...

Gostaria de saber se vai haver a continuação do v livro.
tenho visitado sempre a pagina mais nem uma alteração.

reinee raman said...

Hi Emine I hope everything alright on your end.. Please do not abandon this story.. I have read this story like 5 time.. I mean the whole blog n still waiting for your next chapter.. Will be grateful n extremely happy when you continue this story.. Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please don't abandon the story.. I am addicted to your story line.. You have potray CG & AG better than the original author.. Or please let us know what happening in your end.. Thank you for taking time to write this story

Carmela Dimattia said...

Hi emine
Hope you are well. Missing your chapters. Please post soon

Anonymous said...

Hi Emone! Hope all is well with you and the family. I was thinking Link had the baby kidnapped and Christian didn't get a chance to beat the crap out of him I would love to read how the two Doms battle it out fist to fist. First for what he did to Anastasia and his sister with Hyde. Then for the baby. Keep up the great writing.

Anonymous said...

have you just stopped and blown us all off??? all your loyal followers??? REALLY?? don't you think we are owed a reason??? I'm just to STOP???? I for one am really disappointed. I have been reading your blog for years since 2012 and now you just STOP?????

Anonymous said...

Ben alors. C'est fini. Vous vous arrêtez là, complètement sur notre faim. Je ne l'espère pas. S'il vous plaît, postez nous la suite������

Viviane Ferraz said...

Não teve mais att! Pq? Aguardando!!!

Thais Dal-Cin Lamin said...

Como assim? O Livro não pode acabar aqui... Queremos a continuação. Por favor continue escrevendo. Estamos muito ansiosos a espera dos próximo capitulo ou do próximo livro (6). Amei essa versão do Grey, eu leio leio e leio e não tenho vontade de parar de ler, muito bom. Por favor não nos deixe na mão, continue a história por favor!!!!

Thais Dal-Cin Lamin said...

Queremos maissssss, por favor!!!!

Penha Storani said...

Oi Emine, espero que esteja tudo bem com voce e sua familia. saudades suas e do Christian. Aguardando ansiosa os proximos capitulos. Bjs.

Kelly Costa said...

hello, I would like to know when that chapter six will be released. I'm super excited I get every day on the site Love this story. Waiting for the continuation. His writing glad my days.

kellen said...

hello, I would like to know when that chapter six will be released. I'm super excited I get every day on the site Love this story. Waiting for the continuation. His writing glad my days.

Anonymous said...

Your tweet on the 4th of january that a chapter for book V was coming that week, that was 5 weeks ago. Is book V to be doomed to annual updates, or doomed period. It is nearly 7 MONTHS since last post to book 5, at least tell your readers if this is the future of this story. Languishing in the dark waiting months / years for anything at all, has reached what must be only called ridiculous, the credibility of the story is corrupted by repeated delays.

Bianca Andriolli said...

Is there a realese date for the next chapter?

reinee raman said...

Happy valentines day Emine.. Looking forward for your next chapter.. Been refreshing it everyday incase you update... Hope everything alright on your end

Amanda Umbelino said...

Neusaa tem noticia de novos capitulos? E novo livro?

Amanda Umbelino said...

Emine algum capitulo novo ou sequencia do livro? Espero ansiosa pelo livro 2 ou continuação aqui no blog