Il n’y a que deux
endroits au monde où l’on puisse vivre heureux: chez soi et à Paris.
~Hemingway
CHAPTER XI
«Bienvenue à l'Hôtel de Crillon, Monsieur et Madame Grey.
And may I extend my congratulations to you both. Welcome
to Hotel de Crillon, sir, madam, » our hotel concierge greets us both in French and in
English.
“Merci beaucoup,” I respond.
“Thank
you,” Ana replies, and the middle aged, slightly balding concierge smiles at
us both professionally.
“My name is Durrant Rodell. Any of us at the concierge
desk would be more than happy to assist you to fulfill your requests. A simple
phone call is sufficient to have one of us advise you and make all kinds of
reservations for you. Theaters, concerts, museums, transportation, a French
interpreter should you wish one, a guide, a chauffeur, a coiffeur, a personal
trainer, anything you wish. As the concierges at Hotel de Crillon, we will do
our utmost to bring you the best Paris has to offer, Monsieur and Madame Grey.
This is our hotel manager in charge Mademoiselle Elisabeth
Dubois. She will escort you to your suite,” he says indicating a young woman in
crisp business suit. She blinks a couple of times, and then extends her hand in
greeting.
“Pleasure to meet you Monsieur and Madame Grey,” she says, and
Anastasia narrows her eyes. With the movements of her jaw, I can pleasantly see
that she’s gritting her teeth. She extends her hand to the hotel manager first.
“I’m Mrs. Ana Grey,” she says, then motioning towards me,
she indicates, “and this is my
husband, Mr. Grey,” she says.
“A pleasure to meet you both,” Mademoiselle Dubois
replies, and takes us to our suite. The manager's and Anastasia’s high heels
click on the checkered Italian marble floors.
“Monsieur
and Madame Grey, welcome to the Bernstein Suite,” she says opening the door
letting us in.
“This suite was named after the famous composer who was fond of
staying here. As you can see the sublime terraces offer an outstanding view of
Paris and the Eiffel Tower. I hope you have a pleasant stay at l'Hôtel de
Crillon. If there’s anything
we can do for you, please let us know,” she says and leaves the room, after her
gaze lingers on me a few seconds longer making my wife shake her head.
Anastasia stands in the middle of the living space and looks
around the room curiously. The walls are covered with ornate mahogany paneling
and it has classical paintings displaying French nobility. The décor is red and
gold soft colors, and large marble coffee table is occupying the middle of the
room. There are fresh cut pale pink roses strategically placed around the room.
“There’s a piano,” she says pointing at the wooden piano
perfectly matching the suite’s refined, elegant and romantic feel. “That there
is, Mrs. Grey,” I reply with dark eyes. “I wonder what the bedroom looks like.
Come,” I say taking her hand.
The room is quite large, about 430 square feet. But then again
the entire suite is over 2600 square feet from what the brochure had told us.
Red and gold décor continues into the bedroom. The décor is a mix of classic 17th
and 18thcentury French. The sun is setting outside, and evening
lights from the city is slowly seeping through the terrace door. Anastasia’s
eyes widen when she sees the terrace. She quickly makes her way to the double
French doors and opens them. The city is glimmering in light. Eiffel Tower is
lit up and shining in all her glory. The way the tower is warmly lit, and the
dark metal against the black of the night makes it an undeniably graceful
sight. Thousands of bright white lights are sparking all over the tower,
creating a magical scene, gracing the city of love and light with her majesty.
“This hotel...It’s like a castle Christian!” she whispers
in a hushed voice. I look at my wife unblinking.
“Do you like it?”
“Yes, I love it! It’s beautiful! Is there a particular
reason why you chose this hotel?” she asks after seeing the glimmer in my eyes.
“Actually, yes. The hotel was built by King Louis XV in
1758 as a palace, and of course, it’s built in the grandeur of the 18th century
architecture. I think a duke lived here. Then other nobles resided in the
palace until French Revolution. It was seized at the time. In fact, the
French-American treaty was signed here in 1778 which was recognizing the Act of
Independence of the United States.”
“So, you chose it for its historical significance?” she
asks me with quizzical eyes.
“Yes and no. This hotel withstood a lot of turmoil in its
long history. And look how grand it made her in the end?” I say in a sweeping
gesture. “I want that endurance for us. No matter what we live through, no
matter what difficulties we face in life, I want us to come on top, and better
than ever,” I whisper. Her lips curve in a half smile, half sadness.
“You say the most romantic things, and take my breath
away, Christian,” she whispers. “And I love you for it. And I love you for
being you, and I love you for loving me!” she says her eyes brimming, and she
reaches up, snaking her arms around my neck.
“For you Anastasia, always hearts and flowers,” I reply.
She swallows hard.
“Kiss me,” she whispers as her lips find mine. She doesn’t
have to say it twice. Our lips mold into each other as we’re consumed with
passion in the city of love and lights. Her hands travel into my hair and her
fingers tangle and pull my hair, merging us further. Her tongue parts my lips,
and forces her way into my mouth, making me gasp for more of her. I suck her
tongue, caress it with mine in a lovers’ tango in my mouth, and finally push my
tongue into her mouth. She groans, and hitches her right leg around my waist
trying to mount me.
La Vie En Rose - Louis Armstrong
“Whoa! Ana, slow down! You’re going to unman me, baby,” I
groan into her mouth.
“Please!” she begs.
“We have a dinner reservation, soon.”
“Please... I don’t care for dinner, I’m in the city of
lovers!” she insists begging in my mouth.
“You want me to take you, here? On the terrace?” I ask
incredulous.
“Please. Don’t make me beg, Christian! Because I will...
You brought me to the most romantic place on earth. I want to make love to my
husband!” she says nipping my lower lip and sucking it to soothe the slight
sting. My breath comes hissing through my teeth.
“Fuck the dinner plans! What do you want Anastasia?” I ask
with my eyes dark.
“I want you anyway I can get you...” she says giving me my
own words back.
“Have me, you shall then, baby,” I reply. “We’ll utilize
this bench,” I say pointing the bench with cream colored cushions. The sun has
completely set, and the city lights are glimmering in the distance. The terrace
is in relative darkness.
“Come,” I say my gaze darkening. I sit on the bench, and
pull her onto my lap as if she’s riding. My right hand travels up her leg and
my hand cups her sex over her lace panties. She moves her hips, pushing her sex
into my palm, and arches her back. My erection is straining against my pants,
and she’s trying to rub herself over my growing cock to get some friction. I
insert my finger into the lace of her panties and rip them freeing her sex into
my waiting fingers. She’s deliciously wet. Her skirt is pushed back up to her
thighs and the sight of her like this on my lap is intoxicating. My left hand
moves under her blouse. I slowly push it back up, and pull it off her. Her long
hair falls in waves on her nearly bare back. She arches her back and pushes her
breast closer to my face making me grin. My fingers dip into her bra pulling it
lower freeing her breast. I repeat the process with the other breast, and her
nipples stiffen with the slight evening breeze.
Anastasia shivers on my lap. My fingers skate over her breast, tantalizing her. A shiver runs through her back again and she gyrates her hips on my lap, begging for some friction. With my left hand I cup her breast, and toy with it while I capture the other one with my mouth. As my thumb circle over her nipple, my right finger mirrors the action over her clitoris. I continue to tease the other nipple with my tongue, slightly sucking, and nipping. She groans. I roll and knead her nipple between my thumb and index finger, and tug the other one between my lips. My eyes are fixed on her face. She tilts her head, eyes closed, trying to absorb all the sensation.
Anastasia shivers on my lap. My fingers skate over her breast, tantalizing her. A shiver runs through her back again and she gyrates her hips on my lap, begging for some friction. With my left hand I cup her breast, and toy with it while I capture the other one with my mouth. As my thumb circle over her nipple, my right finger mirrors the action over her clitoris. I continue to tease the other nipple with my tongue, slightly sucking, and nipping. She groans. I roll and knead her nipple between my thumb and index finger, and tug the other one between my lips. My eyes are fixed on her face. She tilts her head, eyes closed, trying to absorb all the sensation.
I flick her nipple with my tongue, and briefly letting go
of it I whisper to her: “eyes open, baby. I want to see you get undone...” I
murmur in a husky voice.
“Husband! Take me please,” she begs.
“All in good time baby. First I want to get you all good
and soft, and ready to take me all the way in,” I reply. My lips travel to the
base of her breast nipping and sucking, making strategic stops. I capture her
other nipple while I squeeze her delectable derriere with my other hand, I run
soft, delicious circles over them. Her right nipple is now between my lips, I
slightly nip it, and just then lifting her skirt, I land a spanking on her ass,
making her arch her back even in a exquisite curve and toss her nipple further
into my mouth and dip my finger into her sex at the same time.
“Christian! I need you now!” she begs further. I unzip my
pants quickly and my erection springs free. I lift her buttocks off my lap, and
slowly place her over my aching cock and slowly bury it all the way down into
her greedy sex. My cock fills, and stretches her to the max. She sits on me,
balls deep and without moving her up, I swivel my hip as I keep her stationary,
then I slowly lift her up. As she comes down on my cock rather hungrily, I push
up and impale her deep. She meets me thrust for thrust.
“Ahhh!” she groans. Then her lips find mine. I pull and
tease her nipples with one hand while I guide her buttocks with the other, and
our lips are locks in a passionate love making.
“Suck me!” she groans into my mouth. She’s becoming quite
the demanding Madame, of late! I grin at her hunger for me. She rides high on
my cock, tilts her head back as my lips slide down to her chin, and neck then
down to her breast, sucking forcefully, and I pull the other nipple between my
thumb and finger elongating it. She gyrates her hips, speeds up her movements,
and her sex starts contracting, squeezing deliciously inside, trying to pull my
cock in deeper, milk it for all I’ve got, stroking, and teasing. When I take a
deep pull on her right nipple, her sex squeezes my cock hard, stroking it, and
she comes loudly in waves. As she pushes her nipple further in my mouth, her
left arm leans back, holding onto my leg tight, riding me like a bronco, and
it’s my undoing seeing her unravel in my mouth, and riding my cock hard with
her sex. I come in thick spurts into her. As I thrust into her two more times,
she finally collapses onto me, her arms wrapped around my neck and I tenderly
kiss her.
When
I move her off my cock, semen runs down her leg, and she bites her lip. A blush
runs her cheeks Marking her that way and her lip biting is a very heady
combination for me. I swoop her off the floor, holding her in my arms without
even bothering to zip up and carry her into the en suite bathroom.
“Bath time,” I say. And this time, I want to enjoy my wife
in the tub.
****❦ ♡ ❧*****
My hands seek for her in the bed. As my hand reach for the dent on the
pillow her had created, I feel the cold there, and her absence wakes me up
immediately. I only feel secure when she’s in the bed with me; only feel
comfort when my arms and legs are draped around her upon waking up. She is my
comfort zone; my safe place, and the main source of my anxiety. I quickly find
a robe, and put it on and go out to look for her. She’s not in the living room,
or the dining room.
Did she go out without telling me? Anxiety rises in my, but I decide to check the terrace and that’s where I find her. Wrapped in a bathrobe, perched on a patio chair, gazing into the city of love.
“Hi,” whisper slowly as to not to scare her. She turns around and looks at me with her big blue eyes.
“Hi, Christian!” she says turning her head to
me smiling; but the smile doesn’t reach her eyes. Is she worried about
something?
“What are you doing out here?” I ask,
unblinking. But she answers me with a question.
“Do you know what are my top ten favorite
movies?” she asks still looking ahead. I shake my head without breaking my
gaze, and answer a soft, "No."
“One of them is ‘Sabrina.’ Not the newer one,
but the one with Audrey Hepburn and Humphrey Bogart. Have you ever seen it?”
she asks in a distant voice.
“I don’t believe so. What is it about?” I ask
trying to hide my rising anxiety.
“There is a girl named Sabrina Fairchild who
lives over the garage at the Larrabee's palatial Long Island estate. She has a
crush on David, who is the young Larrabee heir and a playboy. She grows up
watching their lavish parties and balls the family throws from a nearby tree.
Her father is British and is the chauffeur of the family. When he discovers her
crush on David, he disapproves because they’re not of the same stock, and packs
her off to Paris so she can learn to cook like her mother who died a long time
ago. She goes off to Paris for a couple of years. She can’t cook, but she
learns elegance, sophistication and charm which turn out to be her thing. She
comes back home with a chic haircut, a smart suit making her look very grown
up, and a French poodle. She looks so stunning and David is taken by her.
Her father tells Sabrina...” she says and
pauses, her eyes fixed on the Eiffel Tower, " 'he’s still David Larrabee,
and you’re still the chauffeur’s daughter. And you’re still reaching for the
moon.' To which she responds, ‘no, father. The moon is reaching for me.’ But
his family is bent out of shape with this attraction because they want him to
marry a nice rich girl so the wealth of the families merge. David has an older
brother Linus – a Yale graduate,” she says looking at me, “who also realizes
what a radiant creature Sabrina has become. But of course, Linus and his
hardliner father will do anything to end the romance and Linus decides to get
Sabrina out of the way so his brother can marry the rich girl.”
“What an ass!” I reply. She smiles a little,
and continues with the story.
“Linus
manipulates Sabrina throughout. He essentially becomes Sabrina’s chaperon and
his feelings begins to change all around. The moment Linus begins to realize he
is in love with Sabrina, his success feels hollow and so does his life as a
result. You know the old adage, love conquers all. Linus sends her off to
Paris, and he’s supposed to be coming along, but of course he doesn't. His
initial goal was just to get rid of her, and then he has a change of heart...he
follows her, goes after her. And the rest is history. Paris is their savior,”
she says and shrugs.
“Ana, what made you think of this movie?” I
ask cautiously.
“Can’t you see?” she asks.
“No, I can’t. What is it am I supposed to be
seeing?”
“I’m Sabrina
in a way. You brought me to this beautiful city, to this opulence,” she says
gesturing around. “I might as well be your chauffer’s daughter. I have nothing,
and yet you... you still wanted me. You love me... And I’m completely, utterly,
and helplessly in love with you, Christian Grey! I don’t know what I would do
if you didn't want me. If you didn't love me or stopped loving me, I would
simply die,” she says, her eyes misting and looks up at me.
“Baby! Why...” I say, but don’t get a chance
to finish my sentence. Anastasia hurls herself at me, and our lips meet. When
we stop kissing, we’re both breathless.
“None of this 'I may not want you' nonsense,
anymore! There is no one else I would ever, could ever want besides you! You’re
the one for me Ana. Don’t you see that baby? This is our honeymoon. What
brought this on?” I ask.
“Just the overwhelming extravagance, my
unbelievably handsome, loving husband... I just felt unworthy of you all of a
sudden. It’s still like a dream to me. I’m so scared that I will wake up and
you will disappear. I love you so much, it scares me, Christian,” she says her
eyes brimming; her thoughts mirroring mine.
“I love you more than you can ever imagine,
Ana. Now, let’s go have breakfast, and then you and I will explore the city of
love,” I say smiling pulling her in my embrace.
*****❦ ♡ ❧*****
“What will we see first?” she asks excitedly as we are being driven in
the car. We are in a Mercedes SUV. Taylor is in the front sitting next to one of
our French security details Philippe. Gaston, his twin brother is already on
location, doing a sweep. I hold Anastasia’s hand in mine, and look at her.
My answer to her question may be unoriginal but it’s completely
truthful, “The Eiffel Tower.”
“Not the Louvre, or Champs-Elysées, or Arch de Triomphe or Notre Dame or
Versailles Palace?” she asks grinning.
“We will see those as well, but I want to show you what inspired me in
college. The Eiffel tower helped me understand the principle of unity; because
it has a masterful combination of industry and grace. That’s why I made sure
that industrial elegance and curves were incorporated in the Grey House. Beauty
of the curved line can balance the cold rigidity of metal. And of course the
view from atop is to die for!”
“Do we have a guide?” she asks.
“Of course,” I reply smiling.
“But you seem to know Paris so well. Why the guide?”
“So, I can observe my wife enjoying herself in this magical city,” I
reply truthfully.
When we arrive at the Eiffel Tower, Gaston is waiting with our middle
aged guide. He’s a man in his 50s. He’s wearing business casual. He’s not a
very tall man, in fact slightly shorter than Anastasia. He has a warm demeanor
and a knowledgeable presence. He smiles warmly and professionally giving both
of us an equal amount of his attention.
“Bonjour Monsieur et Madame Grey! How do you do? I am Jaques Painlevé. I will be your
guide this morning.”
“Thank you,” we both say at the same time.
“Allow me to introduce you one of the most
recognizable structures in the world; the Eiffel Tower. She is 324 meters tall
and it is about 1,063 feet in your measurements. It was completed at the end of
the 19th century and became the tallest structure in the world at that
time, and it was until 1930 when the Americans built the Chrysler Building. The
man behind the tower was Gustave Eiffel, and it was built for the World
Exhibition in 1889. She held in the celebration of the French Revolution in
1789. Did you know that while the Eiffel Tower is a steel structure, and weighs
approximately 10,000 tons, it actually has a relatively low density, weighing
less than a cylinder of air occupying the same dimensions as the tower?” he
asks and looks over his rather large eye glasses that were left over from 1980s
for an effect. Anastasia gets curious and asks:
"How could 10,000 tons of steel weigh
less than a cylinder of air occupying the same dimensions as the tower?”
Painlevé’s eyes light up like a student who studied hard for an test and the
question he was hoping was asked is in the exam.
“Ah, the Madame is interested in the
sciences!" he gushes rubbing his hands together. "It shall be my
happy duty to educate you on the topic. The metal structure combined with the
non-metal components of the tower weigh approximately 10,000 pounds. 7,300 tons
of it is metal. If you were to melt down all the metal, it would fill the 125
square base to a depth of only 6 centimeters which is about 2.36 inches
assuming a density of the metal to be 7.8 tons per cubic meter. The tower has a
mass less than the mass of the air contained in a cylinder of the same
dimensions that is 324 meters high and 88.3 meters in radius. The weight of the
tower is 10,100 tons compared to 10,265 tons of air,” he says grinning to have
explained it to its scientific specifications.
Anastasia turns her back to him and looks up at me as her eyes lit
up and she's stifling her giggles.
“What?” I whisper quizzical.
“He’s just like an older, much shorter and
French Sheldon Cooper,” she says smiling.
“Who is Sheldon Cooper? An ex-boyfriend of
yours from your Physics class?” I whisper through gritted teeth.
“No, silly!” she giggles more. Monsieur
Painlevé blinks and looks quizzical without knowing what we are whispering
about. I shake my head. “She’s just making an observation,” I say for his
benefit, and he smiles politely in response. Then I turn my back to the guide,
look down at Anastasia and ask her:
“Ana, you’re driving me crazy! Who the hell
is Sheldon Cooper?” I ask my gaze fixed on her darkly. She smiles and answers.
“Hold on to your hair Mr. Grey. No one you
should be worried about. He’s a character from a TV show called ‘The Big Bang
Theory’. He’s a geeky theoretical physicist who is always very egotistical and he
often brags about his smarts, totally lacks social skills, weary of germs, and
physical contact, introverted, and always makes an observation or makes a
statement that no one understands or even cares for that matter, like, ‘What
part of an inverse tangent approaching an asymptote don’t you
understand?’" she says imitating a masculine voice.
"When our guide inserted the math facts
of the tower, I thought he reminded me of Sheldon’s character, and I was
right," she shrugs, but my gaze gets darker on her. She frowns, "And,
for heaven’s sake, stop looking at me like that!” she hisses scolding me.
“Can’t I make an observation without you getting jealous of a fictional
character?” she murmurs and I sigh.
“Please remember that I only have one type;
and that’s Christian Grey,” she whispers. I hold her hand tightly and turn to
our guide. Motioning him to go on.
“Behold the beauty that is Paris,” says
Monsieur Painlevé. He talks about the history, and the people involved in
creating this masterpiece. Then he leaves us to ourselves to enjoy the
spectacular view Paris from third floor of the tower. Once our tour is over, we
eat lunch at the Le Jules Verne’s Restaurant located on the tower’s second
level. The place is booked weeks in advance at times which is why our
reservation has been made before we arrived in Paris. It has a great wine
selection, and exceptional French cuisine.
But the highlight of the day is the
Versailles. Painlevé meets us at Chateau de
Versailles.
“Bienvenue sur le château de Versailles," he says. “The Château de Versailles is a rags to riches story among
Baroque architecture,” explains Monsieur Painlevé as his eyebrows steeple, and
he pushes his glasses back up on his nose once again.
“The palace and the surrounding gardens are
spectacular and exquisite in detail; but it stood in the middle of a field
which once was neglected. The inspiration of these gardens came from the
Italian renaissance, but of course Italians would have never reached that
opulence or magnificence as the French would,” he adds proudly.
Anastasia clears her throat. “Mr. Painlevé, don’t you think that statement is a little racist?” she asks.
Anastasia clears her throat. “Mr. Painlevé, don’t you think that statement is a little racist?” she asks.
He blinks at her as if she started speaking
in pig Latin. “Not unless it’s the truth Madame. Truth cannot be construed as
racist, which by the way is a very American expression. It’s not perceived
as such here. Even Italians know that. You know how the saying goes, Madame.
Heaven is where the police are British, the cooks are French,” he says proudly,
“the mechanics are German, the lovers are Italian –of course I dare say that
French make better lovers than Italians, but I digress- and it’s all organized
by the Swiss. Hell is where the police are German, cooks are English, the
mechanics are French, the lovers are Swiss and it’s all organized by the Italians,”
he says.
“I’m quite sure Italians make great cooks as
well,” challenges Anastasia.
“Oh, that’s debatable Madame. What do they
have? Pizza and pasta… I can’t think of anything else.”
“I love pizza and pasta,” replies Anastasia
completely amused teasing the hell out of this man who takes her jokes
seriously.
“Mon Dieu! Monsieur Grey! You must immediately introduce the young lady
to real food. She has been deprived!”
“I was told that Italians taught French how to cook. Was I misinformed?”
Anastasia asks innocently, and Painlevé’s
hand immediately goes up to his mouth to stifle a gasp. I squeeze Anastasia’s
hand to remind her to slow down to save the poor man from having a heart attack
and protect the Gaelic and American relationships. Taylor is trying very hard
to hide his grin as the French security twins are looking impassive.
“I would say you were grossly, egregiously misinformed Madame! French
cuisine is famous for its sauces, bread, cheese and wines. I shall immediately refer you and Monsieur
Grey to some French restaurants where you can experience the true magnificence
of the French cookery,” he says fervently.
“What do you think about the Greek food?” Anastasia asks, changing
directions.
He sighs, “Greeks are such a great civilization. To be fair ma’am, they
gave us democracy, science, and little cubes of charred meat that taste like
sweat. It is a known fact that French cookery is superior over all of the
cuisines in the world.”
Anastasia’s eyes first go wide with his answer, shocked, but also dance with mischief as if she’s having great fun
while starting World Kitchen Wars I. It’s time to stop her.
“As enticing as the culinary discussion you two are having, I’d like to
see the grandeur of this French architecture,” I say pointedly. I pull
Anastasia’s hand and she’s flush on my side.
“What’s gotten into you? You were about to give that poor man a coronary
and perhaps start the World Kitchen Wars I,” I state in a slow,
forbidding voice into her ear.
“I don’t
know what’s wrong with me, either,” she says biting her lip. “I feel like a
troublemaker. I just couldn't stop,” she whispers back. I narrow my eyes on
her.
"Maybe you need to be spanked, Mrs. Grey,” I whisper into her ear,
and hear, rather than see her hitching breath.
“I’ve been a bad girl. Perhaps a punishment is in order, Mr. Grey,” she
whispers in a husky voice, flushing.
By the time we get inside the castle, Anastasia’s amazed with all the
opulent, gilt splendor of the eighteenth century palace, and she utters, “I am
completely in love with Versailles!” utterly taken by her surroundings, and it
is apparent that she's all forgiven by our tour guide.
After our guide gives us a tour of the Palace, he bids us his adieu
before leaving us to wander through the place on our own. He shakes Anastasia’s
hand, then shakes mine saying, “you have in your possession a very outspoken, a
very passionate spouse, sir. I congratulate you! She must have French in her
ancestry. I am therefore honored to meet you both,” he says and takes his
leave. I am completely baffled and taken aback how Anastasia affects the other
people.
“Come, Mrs. Grey, let me show you what other megalomaniacs do for the
women they love,” I say darkly and take her into the Hall of Mirrors. The early
afternoon light floods through the windows to the west, lighting up the mirrors
that line the east wall and illuminating the gold leaf décor and the enormous
crystal chandeliers. Anastasia is completely mesmerized, as if she’s in a
spectacular dream from which she doesn’t want to wake up.
“Yes, it is interesting to see what becomes of a despotic megalomaniac
who isolates himself in such splendor,” she murmurs as I’m standing by her
side. She’s trying to get a rise out of me on top of what she has done to poor
Monsieur Painlevé.
I gaze down at her cocking my head to one side. “Your point, Mrs. Grey?” I ask with humor.
I gaze down at her cocking my head to one side. “Your point, Mrs. Grey?” I ask with humor.
“Oh, merely making an observation, Mr. Grey,”
she says waving her hand airily at the surroundings. I smirk at her response
following her to the center of the room where she stands and gawks at the view.
There’s something amazing in this picture. The view of the spectacular gardens
glimmer in the mirrors, but then also my stunning wife’s image is reflected
back on every single mirror. I gaze at her boldly, darkly, salaciously. She’s
completely, incredibly and utterly beautiful, especially with the way the light
is accentuating her chestnut hair.
“I would build this for you,” I whisper.
“Just to see the way the light burnishes your hair, right here, right now,” I
say in a low, husky voice as I tuck a strand of hair behind her ear. “You look
like an angel,” a mischievous angel, but an angel nonetheless. I kiss her right
below her earlobe, and taking her hand I murmur, “We despots do that for the
women we love." She flushes, still shy when she receives a compliment. I
follow her through the room, and when she turns back to me with desire in her
eyes, I hold her face gently in my hands, and kiss her with all I’ve got, our
embrace reflected in every single mirror like Rodin’s “The Kiss” statue.
When we break our kiss, she whispers, “You’re very brazen Mr. Grey.”
I smile at her salaciously and admiringly.
“We’re in the city of love, in a palace built on a piece of neglected land
which used to be a small hunting lodge, but Louis XIV restructured the location
into an icon of absolute power and timeless domination – sort of like my less
than humble beginnings,” I say shrugging.
“And what you are now…” she adds. I smile at
her but my smile doesn’t reach my eyes. My gaze is focused on her. “Did you
know that there are 357 mirrors, 17 glass doors, marble walls, chandeliers, and
splendid paintings in the ceiling: it creates a heavenly splendor which of course was the Sun King’s intent
here. But you Ana, standing here... you are like the brightest shining jewel of
all. The sight of you in here, looking at me like this...with love and
admiration is a sight simply breathtaking in its majesty. I’m simply awed, Ana.
You do that to me,” I whisper softly. She swallows hard, and her arms snake
around my neck.
“Take me back to the hotel, or find a private
room in this palace, I don’t care which. Right now, I’d be completely happy if
you just took me down here,” she whispers wanton.
“Mrs. Grey, you've become completely insatiable. What have I created here?”
I reply with a grin.
“Would you have me any other way, Mr. Grey?”
she asks smiling.
“I’ll have you any way I can, baby… Any
possible way I can. Come, let’s go,” I say and we take off to the Hotel de
Crillon.
*****❦ ♡ ❧*****
“Where are we going today?” she asks
excitedly after breakfast.
“It’s a surprise,” I grin.
She groans in response. “Baby, this is a
remarkable city with so much to do. You can spend a lifetime here and still not
have seen or experienced everything. Ernest Hemingway lived in Paris, and he
said, ‘If you are lucky enough to have lived in Paris as a young man, then
wherever you go for the rest of your life, it stays with you, for Paris is
movable feast.’ That single sentence captures everything about Paris. I want
this to be an experience you will never forget. He also said, ‘Il n’y a que deux endroits au monde où l’on
puisse vivre heureux: chez soi et à Paris.’
“ I say in French slowly. She looks at me enamored. Her chest is rising up and
down quickly to accommodate her rising passion. She’s flushed. She gazes at me
darkly as she walks around the table to stand before me:
“I have no idea what you said,
but it sounded so hot, I feel like hurling myself at you!” she whispers
licentiously.
“I said that ‘there are only two
places in the world where we can live happy: at home and in Paris.’ I was
quoting Hemingway. But once you are bitten by the love of Paris, there’s just
no cure for it. You’re in love with this city for life,” I say grinning, and
turning my chair towards her direction so she can sit on my lap, cowgirl style.
She wraps her arms around me, and we are lost in our kiss, until Taylor
discreetly comes in and clears his throat.
*****❦ ♡ ❧*****
“Musée
du Louvre is one of the greatest museums in the world,” I explain Anastasia.
“What?
Are we not utilizing Monsieur Painlevé’s mean guiding skills?” she asks smiling, batting her eyelashes
innocently.
“Why luckily, Mr. Grey?” she asks narrowing
her eyes.
“Let’s just say that, it turns me on; makes
me feel alive.”
“It’s not fair, you know!” she whispers.
“What’s not fair?” I ask.
“That you turn me on in an overly crowded,
one of the world’s biggest, most famous museums, leaving me hot and bothered!”
she says slowly exhaling, trying to calm herself down. I grin wide, and feel so much alive and in
love with my wife.
“Let me show you some of my favorite exhibits
here,” I say and pull her in the direction of the Department of Greek, Etruscan
and Roman Antiquities: Hellenistic Art. I bring her in front of the statue of
Aphrodite.
“Yes. According to the Greek mythology,
Aphrodite is the Greek goddess and sexual rapture. She was born from the foam
of the sea in Cyprus. She, as you can see has supernatural beauty. Zeus was
afraid that the male gods would fight over her, creating problems. So he
married her to Hephaestus, the dour and ugly god of fire and smithing. He was
overjoyed at being married to the goddess of beauty and he forged beautiful
jewelry, and a cestus, a girdle for her. But of course that just made her more
irresistible to men. The cestus was recognized as a symbol for its magical powers to
compel love, strengthen her potent sexual attractiveness. She was unhappy, of
course, for having married someone without her will, and soon took companionship
from other gods and even mortals. She was a lover of Ares, the god of war;
Adonis, the god of beauty and desire, and also Anchises who was seduced by
Aphrodite and was a mortal lover of the goddess.
She was also believed to be the cause of the
Trojan War after making Paris fall in love with Helene. Her seductions and
temptations were a constant source of pleasure and danger both for Gods and
mortals who fell under her captivating spell. They were robbed of their wits,
and enticed into actions they would not normally take. She was a combination of
pleasure and danger. Aphrodite was not bad. She was just in love with love. She
was incredibly passionate with love and a helpless romantic. Look at her face…”I point.
“It’s timeless and emotionless. Her elongated
silhouette is very sensual, realistic yet other worldly. Even though the
sculptor was seeking to create the divine beauty,” I say walking around the
statue, and pointing at her, “this timeless masterpiece created a fine answer
to the eternal quest for beauty we all have. The result is this goddess of love
and beauty, born out of the foam of the sea.”
She looks at the statue carefully, jealously.
“You are my Aphrodite, Anastasia.
You’re the timeless love and beauty that belongs to me. You’re the
masterpiece…” I say to her reverentially.
“It’s simple. We can all appreciate the
female form. We love to look whether in marble or oils or satin or film. Beauty
is pleasing to the eye. A masterpiece of God’s creation, and we like to see the
reflection of it in captivated forms such as these…” I explain.
She nods, and smiles.
“I am in total awe of your knowledge, and
your confidence, and your Adonic beauty, Christian.”
“Adonic beauty?” I ask grinning.
“I like that title, Mrs. Grey. I like it a
lot.”
*****❦ ♡ ❧*****
“Mr. and
Mrs. Grey! It is a pleasure to have you on board of the Fair Lady. My name is
Nicholas Perri; I’m a former captain myself, but now the shore manager to the
Fair Lady. This is Captain David Madison,” he indicates a lean blonde man with
a crisp Captain’s uniform who extends and shakes my hand firmly, then shakes
Anastasia’s hand, saying, “ma’am.”
“And this
here is your First Mate of the Fair Lady, Alain Benoît,”
he indicates a dark haired, tall young man about my age, who smiles
brightly, and proffers his hand first to Anastasia, and croons:
“Enchantée Mademoiselle, welcome aboard,” he says
professionally, but I don’t miss the slight gleam in his eyes; he’s taken by my
wife. Sure enough he takes Anastasia’s hand, and kisses the back of it.
My eyes are fixed on him. I bet
you are delighted! He purposefully calls her Miss. I make sure he know that
she’s Mrs. Grey, my wife.
“Elle est Madame Grey. Ma femme!
Je suis M. Grey. Son mari!” I wedge
myself between his arm and my wife’s hand.
“Je
m’excuse, Monsieur Grey,” fucker apologizes, and adds, “Je suis heureux de vous rencontrer. Bienvenue à bord.” Sure you
do! Bastard!
“Moi aussi.”I say as my gaze is firmly fixed on him. Then I turn to
the shore manager, and indicating a private corner, I say, “A word, Mr. Perri.”
“Please, call me Nick, Mr. Grey.”
I give a slight, imperceptible nod to Taylor, who leads
Anastasia away to distract her by saying, “this way Mrs. Grey.” Anastasia looks
confused, but follows Taylor. When Perri and I walk about twenty feet away from
the Captain and the First Mate, I turn the full intensity of my gaze on the
shore manager:
“I don’t want Benoît on the ship during our
stay. I’d like you to appoint another First Mate for this week.”
“I beg your pardon Mr. Grey?
Has he offended you in any way? I assure you sir; his show of manners is purely
French and not outside of the norm here.”
“Don’t assume to give me a
lesson on social norms; I know the customs having lived in France myself. I’m
paying €63,000 for the charter of this vessel for the week not to mention added
expenses which will grow well over €100,000.
I want a different First Mate that my wife and I can be comfortable of being
around.”
“Very
well, sir. We will send another First Mate replacing Mr. Benoît. Is
there anything else I can assist you with?”
“Yes,” I say smiling having
resolved the problem. “What year was the ship built?”
He smiles in response. “She was
built in 1928 sir, but refitted in 2005 and 2006. It took about 2 years to
complete the project. She’s an English vessel, sir,” he adds proudly.
“The workmanship is exquisite,”
I say assessing the vessel. “What is her length? I’m assuming it’s about 120
feet long...” I say.
“Very close sir! Her length is
121 feet and the beam is 20.3 feet and her draft is 10 feet sir.”
“What sort of engines does she have?”
“We have two 230 horse power
Gardner sir which permits 10.5 knots of speed.”
“Impressive. Size of the crew?”
“Six, sir.”
“What sort of water-sports do
you accommodate from the boat?”
“If I may make an observation,
sir, you know your ships very well. You’re asking all the right questions.
Well, we have a 5.2 meter Boston Whaler tender with 130 horsepower engine, 4
meter Avon tender with 40 horsepower engine, and two Laser sailing dinghies,
two canoes, water skis and tow, snorkeling gear, and diving gear, sir, should
you wish to take advantage of them.”
“We will. What sort of
communications and entertainment facilities do you have on board?”
He grins in response. “You’d be pleased to know that we have Satcom and cellular communication facilities, sir. We also have Wi-Fi internet access, comprehensive audio-visual systems, satellite TV, and iPod docking stations throughout the boat, Mr. Grey. Allow me to take you and Mrs. Grey around for a tour, sir!” he says indicating with his hand, ahead, and I nod.
I walk towards my wife taking
her hand, and tour the Fair Lady which will accommodate us for the last week of
our honeymoon.
*****❦ ♡ ❧*****
John Berger
L’Americain de Paris,
c’est ce que l’Amerique a fait de mieux. (The American in Paris is the best American).
F.
Scott Fitzgerald
F. Scott Fitzgerald
Next update: January 25th - Friday. I have a translation project to finish. Thank you for your patience.
Great way to end a stressful day!!! Another amazing chapter Emine!!!
ReplyDeletethank you for posting. i love all the details about the places they visite, it makes me feels like im there.awsome chapter!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethank you for the update! it is amazing as usual! :D
ReplyDeleteMakes me want to leave this young nation and soak up the rich history of Europe i'm lost in your writing xx
ReplyDeleteThank you for a great new chapter. Now you have caught up to the book I can't wait to see how it unfolds.
ReplyDeleteHope you kids are better.
Theresa
Loved this chapter was waiting for it since yesterday. Makes me want to visit Paris ,I happen to like the pictures thanks for your hard work. Cant wait for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteI simply don't know where to start with this chapter and just how much I LOVED it! I literally had tears in my eyes reading this. So much emotion. Paris, in recent months more so, has been constant on my mind as a place I would love to visit sooner rather than later. Such a beauty and I have to say that I have loved the pics you provided for the honeymoon chapters. They are so gorgeous and I have never been outside the U.S., so I enjoy the pictures of the places I dream to go, so Thank You for them & the details you provide on their history! Some of them to me have been breathtaking!
ReplyDeleteLoved how you referenced Sabrina in here. It too, is one of my top fave movies of all time. I adore it, as well as Audrey Hepburn. Such a classic & I could watch it endlesslessly! What a great similarity between the Sabrina character and Ana.
Thanks so much for another great chapter! Smile on my face all the way through! I look forward to the next one. Hope you have a great week and well wishes that your little one gets better soon :)
xo
Amazing as always!!!!! Thank you soo much for doing this, it is by far the best stress reliever ;)
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
N. Wellington
Brentwood, Ca
Forgot to say that I love that no matter how sweet and romantic Christian is, I still love how he stays true to his 'Fifty Shades' and all. With his impatience with Ana and the tour guide to his jealousy of the First Mate and having him replaced, his Fifty side finds a way to still show itself and I love that! Of course he has grown a lot, but that other side of him is never to far way and not forgotten! Great writing!
ReplyDeleteThis chapter was soooooooo romantic! It made me want to hop on a plane and go to Paris now. One day I will. I also have to say that as I read your chapters more and more the only actor I can see playing Christian is Henry Cavill. He will be my Christian. Also I feel that whoever gets that role must read your blog!
ReplyDeleteLove the chapter
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Thanks for the update!
ReplyDeleteAlways enjoy CG jealousy ..a hahaha
I hope your daugther is better now. I found myself looking forward to more of pella's update now hahaha.. You got me hooked!! Any more stories to share? :)
Hope you take care and dont get sick too...
Aud
Just visited Paris last month, sooo excited reading this chapter.
ReplyDeleteBut I can't wait to read the part when Ana get pregnant :D
Thanks Emine.
Just visited Paris last month, sooo excited reading this chapter. But I can't wait to read the part when Ana gets pregnant. Thanks Emine.
ReplyDeleteFirst I hope your daughter is feeling better and the rest of your family is do well. And second this chapter was just what I was hoping for, it brought the city to life for me. And as always you did a spectacular job. And I can't wait to read more, you are a great writer!
ReplyDeleteHey Sweetie!
ReplyDeleteThis was another amazing chapter. I'm in awe with this new side of Christian... he's getting more romantic every day.
I enjoyed the part where Ana talked about Sheldon (He's super cool) lol ....
I loved everything about this chapter.
Love you and miss you! <3
Rach
Emine,
ReplyDeleteYou are a genius. This is my first post in the public forum. I am excited to join this wonderful community and share my thoughts about this wonderful work. This chapter brought me back to when I was 16 years old and visited Paris for the first time. This was over twenty years ago for me but you made me feel like it was just yesterday. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing and reminding me about this precious moment in my life. There was nothing like being a young girl meeting one of her first loves - Paris. The pictures that you included only heightened the wonder of this chapter. Also, I hope I don't offend anyone but I really enjoyed the description of their first love scene in Paris. Again, I have enjoyed reading Emines work more than the source material. EL James can be repetitive, especially, when she describes the intimate scenes, in her word choice etc. here, Emine captured both the sweet tender love and the passionate raw emotions between Christian and Ana and the multifaceted aspects of intimacy including the reality that it does get messy :) Thank you Emine for all your hard work and sharing your gift with us all. I hope your child is feeling better.
Your friend with the concussion
Eminé! :D
ReplyDeleteI loved this chapter, I wanted to go to Italy but everyone around me as been saying that I have to go to Paris because it's the one city that might change my opinion about London! I highly doubt that, but reading your chapter, your descriptions, and seeing the photos (that I loved, by the way and will always love because sometimes, it's truth the said that says "An image can say more than a thousand words" or something like that xD)...I have the need to go to Paris now. I would love to go there, to see everything myself, to go to Disneyland (of course, part of me is a child still :p) and you know...I'm just starting to feel enamored by Paris just by your descriptions :p
And the reference about Sheldon was amazing, I know you adore that series and I have another friend that also sees it and she loves it too, so I start laughing with Ana's description about Sheldon because that's more or less what my friend said about him :p
I love how Christian is getting more romantic but still without changing who he is! And I love how he tries to assure Ana that she is the one he loves and will always love, whether she is feeling insecure or not! I never saw Sabrina but I'm curious to see it right now! I loved the story and how Ana saw herself as Sabrina :)
You are truly amazing, and you put so much effort in every chapter my dear, always searching for everything and giving us not just Ana's and Christian love, but also a lot of knowledge about a lot of subjects! I love you and your work, you are an amazing writer and a very special person sweetie, and you are going to be an enormous success out there, you'll see :)
I hope your sweet daughter is better by now, and that nor you nor anyone else at your house gets sick again! Here is winter so it's time for colds and flu too, but so far we have been ok :)
Get some rest sweetie, you need it! And we are always going to be here waiting for more, so take your time :D
I already read your email, but I'll wait for the other one you said you would send to reply :D
A big kiss, missing you,
Catarina*
HNY Emine & fellow readers :D
ReplyDeleteI waited until midnight for this to be posted and I'm so glad I did! I wanted my comment to make sense so I waited to post it till I had a coffee LOL.
Loved the start of their last leg of the honeymoon. It had all the little touches that made it so C&A. I really liked the Sabrina movie reference you added. I do think Ana in the back of her head (like Christian) wonders if she's good enough for him and of course worries she'll lose him. I liked that you had her express that to him so he could understand where she was coming from. Of course his response to her was perfect <3
I like all the little things you're adding in this that is a lead up to the bigger things to come ie their fight about her name, Leila coming back and of course her getting pregnant and the return of the bitch troll.
I forgot to mention this after the last chapter but I am loving Taylor. So happy you're adding his little moments with them during the honeymoon. He's a really fun element in the story.
Hope your little one is feeling better and thanks as always for a great update!!
-Vee
Thank you for another exciting chapter, love it when Christian gets all jealous. I cannot begin to tell you how much I am enjoying your chapters of the book, (I am a great fan of 50 Shades Grey trilogy) and I love Christian's POV stories. I found myself thinking what would Christian say/do when I read the original books. Thank you again, look forward to the next chapters, like all your other fans we appreciate your hard work writing it all.
ReplyDeleteOh I forgot to add that I really enjoy all the photos that you add to the chapters.
ReplyDeleteI hope your daughter is feeling better Emine. This chapter was amazing. It is funny how a man that said he doesn't do heart and flowers can really do it in such a romantic way. And I LOVE how Ana was completely busting the tour guides chops. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful....again you have out done yourself Emine..... thank you! Hope your daughter is feeling better and look forward to the next update. Your Rock! Until next week
ReplyDeleteDenale.
I love the name for the tour guide, painlever, which translated loosely for those that don't speak French is rising bread. Thank you! ~ M
ReplyDeleteLoved it! And I love the pictures too.
ReplyDeleteSo good I'm in love❤❤❤...:)...don't stop!!:)
ReplyDelete♥ it!! Can NOT wait for the next one! Hope you are doing well!!
ReplyDeleteI'm falling in love al over again =D ..... The way you express their surroundings is so beautiful, that Ana and Fifty become my secondary reading focus here, and to put the cherry on top you brought up "Sabrina" .... I named my daughter after that movie, one of my top fave ever. I think of you often, how you manage to do and give so much in a daily base. I am in awe of you, you are amazing.
ReplyDeleteWhat a terrific chapter. I love the pictures I've never been to Paris so it's an added bonus for me. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteExcellent as always, I was happy to see this today.
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU
excellent as always.
ReplyDeleteTHANK YOU
Another great chapter. To visit France is on my "bucket list", the museums, the palaces came to life with your descriptions & photos. LOVE IT!!!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the story to continue!
Barbara
Love the update. I'm always excited when the next chapter is posted. I really enjoy the pictures as I have never been there.
ReplyDeleteDonna
Wow! Wow! Wow! I absolutely loved it!
ReplyDeleteYou are such a talented writer. I always look so forward to your posts, and i love how you include all the photographs too. It's really helpful. Gina
i really enjoy ur writing and look forward to ur next chapters but this honeymoon section is like reading a history text book.
ReplyDeleteWay too much description of the surroundings and not enough of what the characters are actually experiencing.
I would rather have read the actual dialogue of the newlyweds based on their personal knowledge and reactions to seeing the sights that actually read facts as in a text book.
but that is just my opinion.....
IF ANYONE PLAN A GROUP TRIP TO PARIS PLEASE CONTACT ME! MY HUSBAND DON'T TRAVEL! LOL
ReplyDeletewonderful love it !!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the pictures, it really makes me feel like I am there! I just love love love seeing this sweet and romantic side of Christian!!!! You write beautifully!! Thank you!!!!
ReplyDeleteI love the pictures....one could only dream to visit these amazing places, I feel like I am experiencing Paris like Ana. Someday I hope to visit there. Thanks for the amazing chapter, as usual you are phenomenal. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone for the comments!
ReplyDeleteLet me give you a bit of insight. When I write, sometimes I have to write less (information) even though I want to write more, because I've been on a lot of guided tours.
The tour guides do not care that you're on a honeymoon. They provide the information that they give to everyone. Private tours are the same. Seasoned guides who provide such tours may be college professors or guides who have the most experience in showing you things that other new guides lack. I personally prefer the most educated ones, because if I'm going to some place, I would love to learn more.
I too went on a honeymoon-in fact we planned on going to two of them. My husband planned it for the places I loved: Native American areas and ancient roman and greek sites. Both were unforgettable. When we went to the ancient Roman and Greek sites we've spent 5 weeks at the coast of Mediterranean and Aegean visiting.
CG in my mind is an extremely intelligent man. You can't dumb him down. He tailors his speech to around the topics he knows Ana would like. Ana is a romantic. What would be better than to incorporate Versailles or Aphrodite? We know they've been to those places. He knows Paris, he knows French, he knows the culture. We know he's a genius when it comes to ships, airplanes.
You have to remember that I have to get out of my own constraints of my environment and my own way of thinking; because the lifestyle I'm trying to convey here is not an ordinary one. He's the 25th wealthiest man in the world. He affords the best of everything. Do you think he would be satisfied with a half hearted tour for his beloved?
The hypothesis that the newlyweds wouldn't talk that way is fallacious in this case. They're not ordinary people. I'd be dumbing Christian down. He's an articulate man, not just on the topic of sex. Would he not use an opportunity like this to impress his wife?
Paris is a city for all senses. One has to be there to fully comprehend her impact, and if I was there, I'd be soaking everything up like sponge.
Hi Emine! I think.you did a great job on this chapter and I agree on your assessment of Christian's thoughts. Definitely include pics because it puts an image to the words. Thank you for taking me through Europe!! Love, Carol
ReplyDeleteThe fact that Emine has written this chapter to reflect both Christian and Ana's desire to acquire knowledge about the world is a testament to Emine's strength as a writer. Christian would have planned a honeymoon that would not only fulfill Ana's sexual desires but also her intellectual thirst for knowledge about the places, people, and the history they encounter on their trip. Again, recognition that BOTH Ana and Christian are intellectually driven and that they both passionately crave knowledge is essential to accurately portraying these characters. As Emine illustrates, there is no way Christian would not have commissioned the most knowledgable scholars to give them the guided tours. He appreciates Ana's intellect and thus, wants to satisfy her desire to acquire knowledge in all realms of life. Anyways, thank you again Emine for this chapter. It is truly the type of details that you have included here as well as your great understanding of the characters that makes you a fantastic writer.
ReplyDeleteFriend with a concussion ( but healing well)
Emine,
ReplyDeleteThank you once again for a magnificent chapter. Your inclusion of the pictures makes it even more exciting since i've never been to these places and the pics provide a visual for me to enjoy even more.
The historical facts are wonderful, some I know and some I am just learning about so you are educating me in the process.
Keep up the good work as we eagerly anticipate the next chapter.
PS: How is your daughter doing?
~hugs from~
being educated in the Caribbean.
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ReplyDeleteJust finished reading your last 2 chapters, as I have been behind because of the Holidays. And absolutly love them both. Amazing writing as usual. I noticed you mentioned that some do not like the photos you add. I love them. As I read the books and many of your chapters I would try to invision some of the places they would talk about. The beauty of the skyline and Ana's clothes and you putting up the pictures makes it that much better. Keep up the amazing work.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely perfect! I love reading the historical side of their honeymoon, for when you visit someplace like they are, you don't just being in your room making love. My husband is from Belgium and has visited just about everywhere you speak of. He enjoys it when I have him read the details and it shows him that the Fifty Shades books are just about BDSM. So much more of a love story than I thought is what he says most of the time. You definitely bring out Christian's "50" with jealously and his admiration of Ana. You are also giving her credit for knowing quite a lot as well. Ana is not a naive little girl as we sometimes get lost with. THANK YOU!
ReplyDeleteJudi C. - Colorado
Hi Emine..
ReplyDeleteHappy new year..
I have been reading christian pov from book 1....I really enjoyed it.
But this is the first time i am posting a comment..
With the last couple of chapters...i felt it kind of a bit dragging.
Emine,
ReplyDeleteWhat a FABULOUS chapter!! Christian is so wonderful to show Ana everything she ever wanted to see! And, the pictures give so much more depth to the story! Love it!!!!
Thanks for all you do for us!
Love & Laters!
Jennifer
P.S. Did you get the picture of my cowboy with the horse? Mmmmm...he's lovely!! :)
Another great chapter Emine. I love all the pictures because it brings back memories of when I went to Paris many years ago. Thank you so much for this fantastic chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
ReplyDeleteI am a new fan of yours. I can't wait for more chapters of book 3 to come. You are doing amazing, I'm really enjoying your writings. Thank you
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapter. I LOVE your writings! They are always beautiful & sooooo much more intriguing from Christian's POV. Thank you!!
ReplyDeleteEmine
ReplyDeleteLove your writings....Do u have any plans for Gideon cross point of view of crossfire series.
I love your writing. I appreciate the time you take to research the facts and incorporate pictures. I will probably never get to visit Paris in person so it is really intriguing to see all the photos and read some of the interesting details. You have such a good way of writing Christian and depicting his true love of Ana. Love those characters- it truly is a wonderful love story.
ReplyDeleteMy first trip with my friend was to paris, we spent 7 days constantly walking and visiting all the sights and museums :D
ReplyDeleteSo if you like sight seeing and history then I would definitely go. Plus the fashion there is amazing, I managed to go see a Valentino exhibition.
CM
Great chapter as always! I appreciate the visuals as well as the info. Always a delight to read! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHelp emine
ReplyDeleteI love your chapter and i can want till the next chapter Because i want to kno's whats About christians head when Anastasia tell to him thans she is pregnant. But you most going on with this I love it
Greetings from the Netherland
I thought I posted something the other day, Emine you know your writing is amazing as usual, I love that you painted such a wonderful picture of Paris, and the many beautiful places in the city. I want to visit someday and enjoy this all. I can't wait to see his reaction when she steals the sea boat. I can't wait
ReplyDeleteHi Guys!
ReplyDeleteThe upcoming chapter will the final portion of the honeymoon and return to home. It's going to take me a little while to get it up though, because I have to translate sections of a medical book. It's going to take me a week and a half. Hoping to get it done sooner. I'll keep writing as I'm translating that way I have some headway.
It's just been a very busy and stressful week all around. But, I want to thank you all for stopping by, reading and leaving notes. I appreciate you all!
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Hi Emine, Happy New Year to you and to your family! I hope you had a wonderful Xmas and NY. I have been out of touch with the stories, so what an absolute delight when I was able to log in and read the various honeymoon chapters and the Pella Series. I love both!!! The Honeymoon series are so descriptive that I feel that I am transported as Ana and part of the honeymoon with Christian! I wish! :) Have you considered Travel writing, on top of all the other work that you do..because this so just awesome. The Pella series, oh..that is marvelous and I eagerly await for each new chapter. Thank you for writing such wonderful stories. Love Jaimini x
ReplyDeleteMy dearest Emine,
ReplyDeleteWhat a gifted writer you are!!
I mean the attention you pay to each and every detail be it the wedding the honeymoon or any other event for that matter is simply exemplary. I simply cant wait to read more.
So stay well and keep writing.
Laters,baby
Ana
I have loved every bit of the honeymoon. I've never had a honeymoon, or thought that I wanted/needed one, but after reading about this honeymoon it makes me long for one. Just the love overflowing from the two of them, forgetting all the troubles at home, learning more and more about each other. It's just heavenly.
ReplyDeleteI am really excited to see Christian back into his moody/controlling ways with Ana at home though. Getting back to real life, seeing how they get along outside their little bubble as Ana calls it.
I can't wait to see where you take them next. You are an amazing writer.
Emine',
ReplyDeleteGirl take your time. I enjoyed this tour of Europe.
Listen I understand people have their opinion so here is mine. I do not believe the story is dragging! What we see is the depth of the CG love as well as CG self loathing.
He is weak in many areas which Ana helps to fortify and the inverse is true about Ana weakness.
It takes work meaning communication not just hot sex.(well hot sex don't hurt either lol) But the point is Emine gives us the tool the evaluate this man thoroughly. It also helps us to see the faults in our own man. Men may not express there emotions but they are just as passionate as we are! Well Ok that is that!
Laters!
"That's the way Love goes" Janet Jackson
Love love love....can't wait for the next chapter
ReplyDeleteYou are doing an awesome job! All of my friends and I are so glad we found your blog. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the Aspen trip and when Ana tells Christian she is pregnant!
ReplyDeleteHere are a few suggestions for the songs you can include:
ReplyDeleteBrighter than sunshine(aqualung)
Chasing Cars(snow patrol)
Heart Vacancy(the wanted)
The heart of life(John Mayer)
Hey there Delilah(plain white t's)
Losing myself(plain white t's)
Fast cars(Tracy Chapman)
Angel in the night(basshunter)
Need you now(lady antebellum)
Just a kiss(lady antebellum)
Thanx
Love
Ana
Ciao Ermine,
ReplyDeletetake your time, we can wait.
You're a Wonder Woman for me.
Hey Emine! waiting patiently for the next installment, I love your writing and reading your blog is my best thing to do every tuesday! Did you fall asleep again at your desk? ha ha, hope all is well
ReplyDeleteI loved this chapter as Paris is one of my favorite places in the world!! Loved the places that they went to and all of the explanations!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat chapter! And love the pictures! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteDanielle
Plis chapter XII,help me!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapter! This one was fantastic! Hope everyone is feeling better in your home and your friend is okay. Have a wonderful day :)
ReplyDeleteI know that all of you are waiting for Ch XII.
ReplyDeleteI will update on Jan 25th. I have to work-unfortunately with translations the work gets to be very tedious, very time time consuming, and I have to finish translating several chapters of a medical book.
I'm sorry for the wait, and thank you for your patience!
Thanx,Emine I love you so much!!!!!
ReplyDeleteEmine, você tem feito um trabalho fantastico sei que a cada novo capitulo esta se superando. sei que a demora ira ser recompensada com os teus capitulos. força e se dedique ao seu trabalho que iremos aguardar ansiosos! abraços minha grande amiga!
ReplyDeleteEmIne,
ReplyDeleteThank you for another amazing chapter. It was soooo romantic!! It made me think back to my recent visit to Paris,it truly is a magical place.
You are amazing!!!!!! What more can be said. Much love xx
ReplyDeleteI'm absolutely loving the honeymoon!! I happen to LOVE the way you're adding history and showing us his thoughtfulness in the way he planned everything. I truly believe this is exactly what he would've done. I agree 100% that CG would never have accepted lackluster guides who skipped over details and didn't satisfy their mind as well their eyes. Amazing job as usual Eminé! Definitely looking forward to his reaction of her topless nap! Lol Good luck with your translation work!
ReplyDeleteWhens the next chapter coming???????
ReplyDeleteThe new chapter will be posted this Friday :)
ReplyDeletei love this blog. i keep on coming everyday to check for a new chapter even though i know it'll be on Friday. i think i am addicted to the page because i end up rereading the chapters. i think i read book I and II 3 times now. *Wink*
ReplyDeleteI am a new fan... Love the books...Look forward to friday when the next chapter is there... You do such nice work...
ReplyDeleteI am having problems downloding the books, hope you will find the time some day to send me an PFD fil for them on my e-mail..
nina-ohl@ofir.dk
Emine, I'm an italian reader...I think your chapters are really amazing!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you soo much for doing this...and I can't wait to read more!!! :)))
Annalisa
You are amazing! Best Christian Grey POV I have read. I love yours and another POV at christiangrey50shades.blogpost.com
ReplyDeleteI really like yours though because it covers things that Christian did when Ana wasn't there!! When are you going to post another one??? I can't wait for the next chapter!!
-Ellie
I am absolutely head of heels for this blog thank you Emine! lol
ReplyDeleteYou are an amazing writer your passion really does show in your work, I like every other addict come back week after week (every damn day!!) to follow this epic love storey.
Thank you for the journey, wishing everyone happiness and love in this new year. Stay safe and blessed xx
Great chapter as always:) luv how you tie in Christians point of view with the book, it gives a full picture of situations. Keep up the good work!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Emine,
ReplyDeleteHope your doing well. Do you have a posting time for today?
Love
S
Hello everyone!
ReplyDeleteI will be updating at about 7 p.m. PST today! Hope everyone's been well.
love you all!
I will be well as soon as i get my fix hehehee... Thank you! Thank you! Thank you in advance!!
DeleteAlready by the new chapter? Thank you
ReplyDeleteAll I have to say is don't stop writing
ReplyDeleteYou give the FSOG fans what we've been craving, more Christian!
Sitting here tapping my fingers in anticipation................
ReplyDeleteRere-it's been up for 1 1/2 hrs already.
ReplyDeletehttp://eminethe1st.blogspot.com/2013/01/book-iii-chapter-xii-christian-and.html
Enjoying the honeymoon so much! But I guess not as much as Christian and Ana :)
ReplyDeleteI just found your blog following a New York Times reference.....and I am delighted. Your writing is excellent. Your Christian POV is far better than EL James. This honeymoon chapter was exceptional. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI just found your blog following a New York Times reference.....and I am delighted. Your writing is excellent. Your Christian POV is far better than EL James. This honeymoon chapter was exceptional. Thank you.
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