UNEXPECTED PARTIES
CHAPTER V
“What would you
like your inscription to read?”
“Inscription
inside the ring?”
“Yes, sir. I
shall not part with this diamond, but for great love. Great loves are the
enduring kind. Endurance is written in stone; in your case, in platinum.”
“Yes. It should
read, ‘My first, last,
more and forever’,” I state.
“And what’s your
symbol, sir?”
“My symbol? What
symbol?”
“What represents
you, and your love to your woman, sir?” he asks, and I feel like a student who
is taking a quiz on a lesson he hasn’t studied yet.
“I don’t have a
symbol,” I say. His face falls.
“You must have
one. Or rather you do, and you just don’t know what it is yet. There are
ancient symbols that represents love,” he says and assesses me silently. He
looks at my demeanor, my gaze, and look at me in such a way that if I didn’t
know any better, I’d say he was weighing my soul.
“No...” he says
shaking his head. “A love symbol won’t do for you,” he says to a question I
haven’t heard asked.
“Why not?” I ask
like an insolent child.
“It’s too light
for you. You need something more...” he says.
“You exude power sir. You love her, but ‘love’ is not the correct word
for what you feel.”
“What? How is it
that it’s not love I feel for her?” I ask angrily.
“Because sir,
like the rings, you’re twin souls. Love would be too simple: representing one
lifetime. What you need...” he says pausing, and he appears to be solving a
difficult equation in his head, and he needs to use all his faculties to
complete the task, and his face creases looking at me, looking through me, then
lowers his head and looks into his hand holding the diamond, finally nodding
his head as if he conferred with the ring, and looks back up at me having
solved his problem. He smiles.
“...yes, what
you need is beyond. Beyond love, and beyond life... I think an apple simply
will do,” he says resolutely.
“What?” I ask
shocked. I want to laugh, I want yell at him, but he looks so serious about
this conclusion he reached. I have to ask.
“An apple? Why
an apple? I'm not buying a laptop. My love for my wife to be is represented by
an apple?”
“Sir, don’t you
know anything about Venus, Cupid and the Golden Apple?” he asks shocked.
“No. I mean I
know Venus, and Cupid, but I don’t see the connection,” I reply.
He sighs.
“I’d be happy to
educate you on the subject sir,” he says like he’s the reincarnation of
Socrates. I see Taylor listening attentively from my peripheral vision, and
even he’s interested.
“Alright. I’m
listening,” I say. This should be...interesting at least. Unless the old man
completely lost his marbles.
“The ancient
Greeks revered the apple as a symbol of love and sexual desires, sir...” he
says, and I’m immediately full attention. Love and
sexual desires is my symbol. I find myself leaning forward, and even Taylor
instinctively takes a half step forward.
“That is a
symbol associated with the Greek Goddess Aphrodite; or you may know her as the
Goddess of Love. As the story goes, sir, if a gentleman tossed or threw an
apple to a maiden, he was confessing his love to her...” he says and takes a
pause to catch his breath. Anastasia was my maiden for all intents and
purposes; one, I deflowered. So far, he is on the right track.
Mr. Caria takes a lungful of air and continues
his story.
“If the maiden
in turn caught the apple, or at least attempted to, it meant that she was
reciprocating her love to him.” I’m with him so far. I want Anastasia to catch
my apple all the way.
Then he looks at
me funny and with a glint in his eyes, he says...
“Young man,” and
he says it in such a way that if I didn’t know any better, I’d say he was
talking with a Yorkshire accent, sounding like ‘yung
man’, I open my eyes wider, and listen.
“The apple was
also considered to bring abundance and fertility. It was customary for the
bride to eat an apple on the wedding night ensuring sexual desire, fertility to
birth children and abundance within the marriage.”
I smile, “Well,
Mr. Caria,” I reply smiling confidently, “we don’t need help in the first
count; second one can wait for a long time, and the third one I’ve already
accumulated.”
“Mr. Grey, even a blind man can see the truth
in what you said. But, what is available in the present time must be preserved
for the future. Don’t you agree, sir?” I nod imperceptibly.
“But that is not
the only reason I suggested the ‘apple’ as your symbol sir. You exude power,
but your stance tells me that you are the man among powerful
men; you are a leader, a top dog if you don’t mind my crude expression. You
would fight for her... to death I think...” he says slowly and assuredly
nodding at himself, his expression going dark, and eyes bottomless.
“Do you know why
it became the symbol it has become?”
I shake my head,
my gaze fixed on him. He nods and continues his story.
“Eris, the
Goddess of Chaos, Strife and Discord was angry for not being invited to the
wedding of Thetis, a sea-nymph, and Peleus. Their wedding was attended by many
of the Olympian gods.”
“I’ve never
heard of Thetis, and Peleus’ story,” I say nonchalantly, shrugging one
shoulder. He smiles, and leans in just a bit conspiratorially.
“Perhaps you
have heard of their offspring, Achilles,” he says in a soft voice.
“Him, I have
heard of,” I say nodding.
“As the story
goes told by Hesiod, in Theogony, it was said that Eris was angry for not being
invited. So, she threw a golden apple on the banquet table, claiming that
whoever was the possessor of this beautiful, rare apple would be considered the
most beautiful goddess. Of course, Hera, Athena, and Aphrodite moved quickly to
claim it, and they started fighting over it. However, Zeus intervened and he
appointed Paris who was considered the most handsome man among all of mortal
men,” says slowly his voice taking the sound of a talented orator.
“Clearly each
Goddess wanted to be declared the most beautiful and they each offered
something to Paris in return for his declaration. Athena promised Paris riches,
Hera promised him power, and Aphrodite promised Paris the most beautiful mortal
woman in the world to have as his wife.
He chose,
Aphrodite of course, and she promised him Helen of Sparta. But the catch was
that Helen was already the wife of Menelaus. Oracles warned Paris against his
quest, but he nonetheless set sail to Sparta and was welcomed warmly by
Menelaus which of course immediately ceased when Paris left Sparta with his
wife who chose to leave with him thus in return igniting the Trojan War.
Consequently, the Golden Apple became the symbol of love worth fighting for.”
I find myself
saying, “Golden Apple it is...”
“Very good, sir.
We will call you when the ring is completed. It shall be ready in a week’s
time.”
*****
I sit in the
SUV, and Taylor closes the door behind, and quickly takes his seat in the
front.
“Where to sir?”
he asks.
“One second
Taylor, just pull out and drive around the block until I give you a direction,”
I say. I check my text messages, and there’s one from Elliot.
*On my way to get dad. Nora says
his schedule is open for the afternoon. Did you talk to him already?*
Taylor looks
momentarily confused, but he quickly regains his composure and pulls out of the
underground parking lot. I take my Blackberry out, and taking a deep breath, dial.
“Christian?” he
answers after the second ring.
“Hi dad! Listen,
are you doing anything this afternoon?” I ask.
“I’m done with
all of the court appearances, and I was only going to go through some new
files. I don’t have anything that can’t wait. What’s going on, son?”
“Since our
wedding is not far off, I think we need to shop for some tux for you, me and my
best man Elliot, and my groomsman Taylor,” I say, and Taylor slightly swerves
off his lane... “If we live through the drive that is...”
I mutter under my breath so that only Taylor can hear me. He reddens all the
way to the hairline and to the backs of his ears.
“Is that why
Elliot just got here?” he asks surprised.
“Hi little bro!”
I hear Elliott shout out in the background.
“Yes, I had a
busy morning, I just got the time to call you,” I say, and Taylor’s eyes goes
to meet mine on the rearview mirror, and he quickly looks ahead.
"Ahh...
Sure, let me just clear my schedule with Nora, and where do you want us to meet
you?"
"Elliot
already knows dad. He'll bring you."
"Is it a
secret?"
"No, dad.
It's not. I'll see you there," I say cryptically to which he responds,
"Yes, I will see you...uhm...there," and
we hang up.
"Are
we meeting them there
sir?" asks Taylor.
"Yes,
we are," I say impassively.
"Where
is there, sir?" Very funny
Taylor.
"Take me to
Escala. Armani is sending their tailor to take our measurements. We are going to get
custom made tuxedos."
"Yes, sir, but
why not at Armani?" asks Taylor confused and drives.
“Changed my mind at
the last minute, and had Andrea rearrange it last night. I need to talk to my
dad about the new security. What time were they coming by the way?”
“Oh, yes, Welch has
them under his hand, it’s up to you sir. If you wish to meet them earlier today
rather than later, they could come after the measurements, sir.”
“Let’s do that.
It’ll give me time to talk to him, and send him with the new security. I
believe Welch just sent the information.”
“Yes, that’s
already been arranged sir, Welch sent both of us the info right when we were
leaving,” he says as he pulls into Escala’s underground garage.
He pulls into
one of the bays, and parks the SUV. He opens my door, and we make our way to
the elevators.
“Sir, before
your brother and your father come over, I need to have a word with you,” says
Taylor as the elevator doors close on us. I scrutinize Taylor’s face, and it’s
impassive, giving nothing away. I say nothing for a long minute. When the
elevator whisks us away towards the penthouse, I nod, “in my study.” He nods
and waits patiently.
When the
elevator reaches the top floor, the doors ding opens.
“My study,” I
say and he follows. If Taylor requested a private meeting, he must have
concerns, and I am dying to hear them.
I walk into my
study, and he closes the door behind. I sit in my chair, and lift my gaze up to
Taylor with expectant curiosity.
“Sir, I have
security concerns about your wedding in light of the recent events. How
important is it for you to have it at your parents’ house?”
“It’s a done
deal, Taylor. It is
going to be at my parents’ house.” He nods his head.
“We know the
layout to your parents’ house. From a security point, it’s nearly indefensible.
Just a full sweep is not enough, sir. We have had issues in the past with Leila
even after we’ve done a full sweep of Miss Steele apartment, and that was one
woman sir; we knew who she was and what she looked like, and how she would
behave. Now we have a would be assailant after you or even Miss Steel, and even
your family members are targets.”
“What are you
suggesting?”
“Mr. Grey, we
can’t get any place 100% secure, and it is less so with your parents’ place
because of the water. We will need to have the guest list so Welch’s team can
do background checks on all of them, and also on the serve staff, catering staff,
florists, the Pastor, down to the ring boy and the flower girl sir. It’s a
large estate, we need to have eyes and guns covering each entrance and more so
on the waterfront sir.”
“No guns on my
wedding!” I bellow.
“We have to have
guns sir, because we don’t know who is after you! I can’t take the chance on your
security after the Charlie Tango incident. Pella said that the perp is going to
try, and he will try to succeed this time! I can’t have you or Miss Steele or
someone you care dying under my watch! Sir!” he raises his voice anxious. I
haven’t seen Taylor anxious much before.
“Guns are
abhorrent to me, Taylor! Especially at my parents’ house who hate them as much,
if not more! No guns! That’s final!”
“Mr. Grey,”
Taylor says resolutely, his eyes dark, his stance firm with finality in his
decision. “It’s been a privilege and honor to work for you, but I quit! You’ve
given me your limits, and I’m giving you mine. A man bent on killing you is on
the loose, made attempts to kill you, the paparazzi is camping up and down the
street to harass you or Miss Steele, you’re taking away our means to protect
you! I can’t go along with that sir! I have to stand my ground.” I flinch at his
answer. I can’t lose Taylor. Both my hands go to my hair in exasperation; I
take a deep breath inhaling.
“Why are you so
bent on carrying a gun? You’re a skilled fighter.”
“Mr. Grey, a
would be assailant with a gun would not care for my fighting skills. A good
fighter dies just as fast as a bad one in the hands of a weaker fighter because
of the weapons he posseses. I won’t have time to manually insert the bullets
into him! On your wedding day, all kinds of people will be coming out of the
woodworks because they have had some sort of grudge against you. We don’t know
who we’re looking for, and Pella insists that the perp isn’t working alone! That
means we’re looking for unknown number of people, with unknown faces, and more
than likely people you know. That’s when it becomes more imperative than ever
that we have close protection for you, with weapons, sir!” he nearly shouts at
me. My gaze is impassive piercing him. It’s an internal struggle to go with what I know
about guns, and the truth in what Taylor is saying.
“Mr. Grey,
please! I’m still having nightmares about the bony ass, skinny all for her 102
pounds self...excuse me,” he corrects himself, “Leila, holding a gun to Miss
Steele’s head in an apartment we did a sweep, and she didn’t have a key for,
and she could have shot Miss Steele!” he says making me flinch.
“But she didn’t
and I managed to subdue her!”
“Mr. Grey, it’s
very likely that this man who is after you has never subbed for you! Therefore,
he will not be subdued like Leila was whom you knew how to bring down to heel.
This guy is going to go until he kills you or someone you care for. I can’t
watch that helplessly, sir. If he shows up, some of the security will for sure
die trying to protect you and those you love because you didn’t permit us a way
to protect you properly! You have to allow us to carry weapons sir, or I will walk!
With this no weapons shit, you’re making me feel like a fucking moron with no
way to protect you, and we’ll be like sitting ducks for whoever is intending to
harm you. Am I to hand the perp a flower while he’s holding a gun to your or
Miss Steele’s head? I’d rather shoot the fucking bastard. Sir!”
He’s right.
Fuck! My face gets creased with the thought and I shot up to my feet.
“Fine! Only
close protection bodyguards and for those who are guarding the entry points are
allowed to carry weapons. And those must be chosen carefully by you and Welch,
but not for those who are walking around the guests. Otherwise I’ll have your
and Welch’s balls on a plate!” I hiss through gritted teeth.
“Is that a
workable enough compromise for you?” I ask. He sighs, and wipes the sweat from his
forehead with the back of his hand.
“Yes, sir. It
is. One other measure I want to bring up to your attention. We need to have a
decoy.”
“A decoy for
what?”
“A decoy
location for the wedding: Have the guests to come to a different location, and
after their identities verified, we send them to the correct location at your
parents’ house, and have the identifications checked it there as well. That
way, we can thwart off majority of the paparazzi and confuse any other person
who is looking to come after you,” he says, and that’s actually not a bad idea.
“Yes, that would
be fine. Arrange the place with Andrea, and Welch. I’ll leave you and Welch in arranging
the details. And, Taylor, you don’t mind being one of the groomsmen?”
“No, sir. I was
wondering how I could suggest that to you myself. It won’t get any closer
protection than that. So, that was a good move sir.”
“Guess,
Anastasia can use a bridesmaid in Gail who can accompany you,” he grins
surprised in my response.
“Yes, sir!”
“I would like
you to stay, Taylor, but you already figured that out yourself,” I say my face
serious, unblinking. He’s the best personal security, and he cares for
Anastasia. I can’t replace him. Not in such a short time. And, oddly, I find
myself fond of him.
“So, does this
mean you are staying?”
“Yes, it does,
sir. Thank you for compromising.” I nod dismissing him.
*****
“Mr. Grey,
extends your arms out, sir,” and I do as I’m told.
“Angelo, how
long have you been doing this?” I ask as a way for small talk.
“Forty years
this coming October, sir,” he replies politely, pushes his half-moon glasses
back, and takes his soap marker and marks the fabric.
“Mr. Grey, if
you please get off the platform, you’re much taller than I am. I need to take
your chest measurement, sir,” he says, and I get off the ½ foot platform.
“Now lift your
arms up, sir,” and I do. He politely thanks me.
He writes the
measurement down, and sticks the pencil behind his ear. Just as I lower my arms
to my side, he says, “if you could extend your arms, once more sir, I need to
take your waist measurement.”
He takes the
measuring tape wrapping around my waist, writes the measurement down, and
re-measures me again.
“Did you get it
wrong the first time?” I ask. He smiles.
“No sir, we
tailors have a saying, ‘measure twice, and cut once,’ it prevents errors,” he
replies.
“Are these the
fabrics to be used?” asks my dad from the sofa he’s sitting on.
“Yes, they are.
Do you have any objection to the colors?”
“No, I think
they’re great colors.”
“I’m not too
fond of this pale pink for the waistcoat,” mutters Elliot. “How come you’re
getting the silver color?”
“I’m the one
who’s getting married,” I say, and Elliot snorts. “Besides, you’re supposed to
match with your girlfriend, not with me,” I say and he grins.
“Mr. Grey, would
you climb back on the platform please?” asks Angelo, the tailor. He’s barely
5’6”, salt and pepper hair with a mustache. He has a pin cushion strapped above
his elbow. He must be nearing 60 years old, though he looks agile for his age.
“Where are you
from Angelo?”
“I was born in
Napoli, sir. My father was a tailor, his father before that.”
“But you speak
English so well,” says my brother.
“Yes, sir. I
grew up in Brooklyn. My father immigrated with one of the fashion houses as a
tailor. He was nearly unmatched in his skills, sir. I’ve learned most what I
know from him,” he says as he takes his measuring tape again.
“Mr. Grey, would
you be so kind to take your shoes off? I need to measure you for the pants,
sir.”
“Who did you
work for before Armani?” asks my father curiously.
“I worked for
most of the major fashion houses, sir. Brioni, Canali, Loro Piana, Ermenegildo Zegno, Stefano Ricci, Sartoria,
Casare Attolini and now Armani,” he replies, leaning down.
“Mr. Grey, would
you spread your legs about a foot apart, sir?” he asks politely. I do, and he
measures from my foot to my crutch, and then he measures from my foot to my
waist. Then he measures my calf’s, and my ankle’s circumference. He then goes
around my body taking my measurements at various sides and angles.
After he’s done
with measuring me for my tuxedo, he measures my father, and then Elliot.
“Christian, why
didn’t you choose a tuxedo off the rack? It’s not like you’ll be able to use
these colors again. Maybe, you can use the tux, but not the waistcoat,” he says
with distaste. “I’m sure Armani had a load of tuxedos to satisfy the needs of
someone whose taste is as discerning as yours,” he says grinning. I frown at
him.
“Why do think
that is Angelo?” he asks the tailor.
“It’s quite
simple, sir,” replies Angelo as he busily continues his measuring with
professional accuracy. “As any well-dressed gentleman can tell you, there is no
off the rack outfit as elegant as a hand-tailored suit, sir. You may perhaps be
familiar with the expression of the “Bespoke tailor.” Have you heard of it,
sir?” asks Angelo without stopping his measurements.
“I don’t think I
have,” answers Elliot genuinely.
“Perhaps not
sir, a lot of great quality suits are available in such big fashion houses.
But, this phrase originates from 17th century when tailors had bolts
of fabric in their shops. Customer would come and choose the material, and
hence the fabric was spoken for, therefore the term “bespoke” was used. This
elegant material was then transformed into the garment tailored to the
customer’s individual measurements, just as I’m doing for you gentlemen today.
Mr. Grey
requested specific materials, and he wishes not to use made-to-measure
tailoring.”
“Isn’t this what
you’re doing already? You are measuring us, and you are going to make tuxedos
from our measurements,” asks Elliot.
“No, sir.
Made-to-measure uses an existing template individually adjusted to your
measurements. What I’m doing here is creating your own pattern from your
measurements, sir. This will in fact be a one of a kind suit. Mr. Grey has
great taste in clothing, sir,” says Angelo reverently, and continues to measure
Elliot.
(courtesy of Alonna C.)
“Hey bro, just
so you know, we’re having a Bachelor party for you!” says Elliot surprising me.
“What? I don’t
want a bachelor party! I wish you asked me first, Elliot!” I say scowling.
“Sure you do!
It’s a tradition! I expect you to throw me one when I get snatched up!” He says
grinning.
“What kind of
Bachelor party? Who is coming?”
“Guess it has to
be semi-clean since dad is coming. Otherwise mom would have my hide,” he says
nonchalantly.
“Dad’s coming?”
I ask mortified.
“I’m right here,
Christian,” he says amused. “Yes, I said I’d come, but if it makes you feel
better, I won’t stay very long.”
“It’s not that,
dad. I don’t like unexpected surprises.”
“Is there any
other kind? And besides I just informed you that you’re having a bachelor
party. No surprise left. In fact I’ll give you the option of going out to a
club, or bringing the party to my apartment. Which one do you prefer?”
I think for a
minute. I can leave a club anytime I want, but I have less control over the
environment. If it’s at Elliot’s I have more control, and I guess I can leave
anytime I want that one as well.
“Your place!” I
reply.
“Good choice!”
“Who’s invited?”
“Your buddies,
of course. Dad, Flynn, me, Mac, Bastille and a couple of my buddies from my
crew whom you already know.”
“Leaves their
names with Taylor, before you leave.”
“So, you’re
coming for sure?”
“Yes,” I say
grudgingly.
“Do I have your
word on it?” I sigh.
“Yes Elliot! You
do,” I reply.
“Good!” he
answers. “Now would be a good time to tell you that it’s going to be held two
days before your wedding, and incidentally, that’s the day of the bachelorette
party, and Kate told me to tell you that she’s taking Ana the night before the
wedding. She said some shit like ‘it’s bad luck to see the bride the night
before the wedding,’ and since her mother is making the wedding dress,
apparently, you’re not supposed to be seeing it. Guess it’s another bad luck
things you two are supposed to be avoiding...” he says but I won’t let him
finish.
I jump to my
feet, and bellow.
“What did you
say?”
“I said it’s
another bad luck thing,” he replies confused.
“No! You said
something about a bachelorette party and that Anastasia spending the night
before the wedding with your girlfriend. I’m talking about those parts!”
“Don’t get your
knickers in a twist, dude!” he says, and I move forward. Angelo accidentally
sticks a pin in Elliot’s flesh.
“I’m so sorry
Mr. Grey. Please don’t move,” he warns softly.
“Tell that to my
brother!” growls Elliot.
“Now, now
Christian!” says Dad, chiding me. “Your brother and Kate are only fulfilling
certain traditions. Your mother had to spend the night with her best friend at
her parents’ house. It’s not so bad. And besides, you’ll have her for the rest
of your life after that night. It’s just one night,” he says and I grunt.
“I don’t know
about that, Dad! A bachelorette party for Ana? The night before the wedding
spent apart?” I say growling. I hate it when people toss things at my way with
things that I can’t control.
“What will they
be doing at this hypothetical bachelorette party? And what will they be doing
at Kate’s apartment the night before the wedding?”
“Girl stuff, I
suppose,” Elliot says shrugging.
“Thank you Mr. Grey.
You may step down, sir,” says Angelo leading him off the platform. Taylor is
next in line to be measured. Elliot scowls again. Taylor takes the platform stoically like a
sacrificial lamb. I turn my head back to Elliot.
“Well?”
“Well what?”
“No one asked me
if they could have a bachelorette party, or if Ana could spend the night apart
from me!” I bellow.
“Christian, you
are not trying to control Ana, are you?” asks Dad quizzically.
“Dad, stay out
of this, please!” I say in a controlled voice.
“As Ana’s future
father-in-law, I have to say something. Are you doing this out of jealousy or
for control, Christian? Or both?” he adds reluctantly.
“Dad, Anastasia
is the most important person in my life. Most important person that has ever
been in my life. So, forgive me if I have a hard time consenting naked men
ogling my fiancée!” I say.
“What are you so
worried about? I’d say if you didn’t do well in business, you’d have a career
as being an exotic dancer, in fact, you can put all of them out of business,” jokes Elliot.
“That’s not the
point!” I bellow.
My dad
intervenes.
“Boys!” he says
and his meaning is not lost with us. “Perhaps, you can allocate some ground
rules, and that way the girls can enjoy themselves among each other, have a
bridal shower and their bachelorette party, and spend the night together, and
you can have your way by establishing your parameters in how they can do it.
There’s always a compromise and a workable way.”
“Does Anastasia
know about this?” I ask softly, hiding the menace in my voice.
“I’m not sure,”
says Elliot. “Kate may have told her already or maybe she will tell her today.
I couldn’t tell you for sure,” he replies shrugging.
Come to think of
it, Anastasia hasn’t texted me yet since our lunch meeting. Normally she would
have made a witty remark. Even if she has gotten busy, she would have said
something. But, it’s been nearly 3 hours and not a beep out of her.
“Excuse me,” I
say to the company, and I walk to my study out of the earshot. I dial
Anastasia’s cell. She answers it quietly.
“Hello?”
“Ana? Why are
you speaking so quietly?” I ask,
alarmed.
“Oh, just...
nothing,” she says avoiding.
“Anastasia,
what’s the matter?”
“Nothing’s the
matter Christian. Just busy, that’s all...”
“Busy with what,
Ana?”
“Hi,
Christian!” I hear the voice of one of
my least favorite people. Katherine Kavanagh.
“Why is she
there?” I ask quietly, too quietly, masking my carefully controlled anger.
I can almost
feel Anastasia closing her eyes, and swallowing. “Delivering an invitation...”
she says quietly.
“For?” I probe.
“A party...” she
replies softly. I breathe through my nose, like a raging bull, closing my eyes.
She’s not going to give me the lowdown until later, I suspect.
“Would that be
the bachelorette party?” I hiss through my gritted teeth.
“You don’t want
me to go?”
“Over my dead
body!” I shout pacing around my office.
“Give me that
phone!” I hear Katherine the ball crusher who must have overheard my voice. And
before I get a chance to say no, the voice over the phone changes.
“Christian,
Elliot just texted me that you are going to the bachelor party he’s going to be
throwing in your honor! Why can’t I do a bachelorette party for my best
friend’s honor? Why the double standard? You can ogle some other naked chick’s
body, but Ana can’t do the same with a male stripper? And how do you know I’m
getting a stripper? Maybe we’ll just eat, and drink, and dance, and have fun!”
“N.O.!” I spell
out for her loudly.
“Well, F. U. and
your rules! She’s marrying you, isn’t she? Why couldn’t she have this one
night, like you would be doing?”
“What?” I hear
Anastasia in the background. “Give me the damned phone Kate!” she says, and in
the next ten seconds her voice comes a lot closer to my ear.
“Christian? Is
it true?”
“What?” I hiss.
“That you are
going to be attending a bachelor party. And here I was worried how you would feel
about a bachelorette party, and giving Kate a hard time about it!”
“I did NOT want
to participate in it. I was cornered by Elliot! I intend to leave as early as
possible. Preferably before the strippers take their clothes off!”
“What? More than
one stripper?”
“I don’t know. I
didn’t want to go! I think it is going to be clean, because dad will also be
there.”
“That wasn’t the
reply I was looking for Christian,” she says, and her voice comes through as if
she’s speaking outside the range of the receiver. “Kate, I’d be happy to come
to the bachelorette party, and I accept your invitation to spend my last night
before the wedding with you!”
“Yaaay!” I hear
Kate’s shriek in the background. What the fuck just happened?
“Goodbye,
Christian. I’ll see you this evening,” she says sweetly and hangs up on me! On
me! I pace around my office to get a grip on my growing anger. Where Anastasia
is concerned, she always manages to get me lose control. Fuck! I feel anxiety
creeping over. I count backwards.
Twently...nineteen...eighteen...seventeen...sixteen...fifteen...fourteen...thirteen...twelve...eleven...ten...nine...eight...seven...six...five...four...three...two...one...
Breathe in, breathe out! Easy Grey!
I dial
Anastasia’s number again. She doesn’t answer. I hang up. I call SIP, and her
newly hired assistant Hannah puts me through.
“SIP, Ana Steele
speaking,” she answers the phone.
“Don’t hang up!
I did not ask for a bachelor party. I didn’t want to go to it. Elliot just
backed me into it, and I happened to have made a promise to go without knowing
what would be there. If I can get out of it, I will. But, I don’t want you to
the bachelorette party,” I say in one breathe.
“I know it must
be excruciating to be backed into going to a bachelor party where there will be
strippers. And, I shall also endure the painful prospect of seeing stripping
males in my bachelorette party. But, you can be sure that I’ll try to endure it
as stoically as I can as you would be doing the same. Are we done, here, sir?”
she asks angrily.
“No! Are you
going to spend the night before our wedding with Kate?” I ask.
“Can we discuss
this tonight, please, Christian? I have work to do, I have a horrible headache,”
she says.
“I need to pick
you up in an hour,” I say without a preamble. I’m sure that Angelo can be done
measuring everyone by then. And since Elliot stuck it to me, I’ll stick it
right back to him...
“I’ve got more
than two hours, and I took a long lunch,” she protests.
“I don’t give a
fuck about it! I need to see you! And soon! Be ready!”
“Christian...”
she sighs in exasperation. She makes me feel completely helpless. I don’t know
which way is up with her, and yet, everything she does, makes me feel alive. I
need to see her!
“And,” I add
with a deep voice, “I’ve made a promise to you this morning that I’d take good
care of you,” I say in a caressing tone that would run a shiver through her
body.
“Christian,
you’re not playing fair!” she says.
“Baby, I can’t
play fair where you are concerned. You’re my number one priority. I’ll get you
in one hour... Be ready,” I say with a carnal promise in my voice.
“Okay,” she
mutters barely audible.
When I walk back
into the living room, Angelo already completed taking measurements.
“Mr. Grey, I
shall now go and take the measurements of Mr. Trevelyan, and then Mr. Steele,
sir. Thank you for your time. At your convenience sir, we’ll do two fittings
one next week, and one the week after, then I shall be able to finish your
tuxedos, sir. It would be best if each individual picked their own tuxedo up
just to make sure it fits perfectly, if in case any last second alteration is
required,” he says.
“Thank you
Angelo. Taylor will see you out,” I say, and he nods his head and follows
Taylor out.
I turn to my
dad, and Elliot, and smile.
“Thank you for
taking time to get your measurements. I wanted to speak with you about adding
to your security,” and I hear a groan from Elliot, and a subdued grunt from my
dad.
“Dude, do you
know how awkward that is to have a bodyguard following your ass everywhere when
you’re in construction business? Is it really necessary?”
“It’s not just a
necessity, but it’s a requirement. My investigator thinks that Charlie Tango
incident was a sabotage. We can’t take a chance. Until the perpetrator is
caught, I’m afraid we need to have additional security.”
“Is it the same
guy that’s coming?”
“One of them
is...” I reply.
“One of them?
What the fuck? Are you getting back at me for giving you a bachelor party?
You’re so strange bro! Some other guys would be thankful for the gesture.”
“I’m not some
other guy, Elliot! And there is a security threat that we can’t take lightly!
You will each get two close protection bodyguards.”
“That’s six for
us! I don’t know how we’ll explain that to your mother, or your sister,
Christian. They’re already getting extremely annoyed with the only one they
have.”
“Dad, please!
Annoyance is the least of my worries. Their well-being is what concerns me at
this time. This is until this perp is caught. Then we can go easy on the
security,” I reply.
“Do you mean to
say that you’ll continue to send us bodyguards even after the perp is caught?”
“Perhaps not as
many you have now, but, yes, for your security.”
“Are you trying
to pay us in kind for getting you in trouble with Ana?” asks Elliot.
“I wouldn’t
dream of it. I had the security arranged before you thought of the bachelor
party,” I say smiling.
“Christian, I
will make sure that your brother doesn’t allow anything tasteless, or cause
anything that would upset your mother, or Ana, or Kate for that matter,” dad
says resolutely.
“Dad! What good
is it if we can’t get him in trouble?”
“And aren’t you
one bit concerned that your girlfriend ogling over male strippers?” I ask.
“What? You think
she’ll take something else over this?” he asks confidently exaggeratedly
showcasing his body. “Not a chance!” he says grinning.
I check my watch
inconspicuously as possible.
“Dad, I think
it’s our cue to leave,” says Elliot smiling.
“Hope we didn’t
get you in a lot of trouble bro! But you gotta lighten up. We just want you to
have fun before you get married, that’s all!”
“That’s very
considerate of you, Elliot. Don’t forget your parting gifts before you leave,”
I say smiling.
“Taylor!” I call
out.
“Yes, sir,” he
replies walking in.
“Are they here?”
I ask with an impassive face.
“They are, sir.
They’ll be ready to leave with both Mr. Greys, sir,” he replies with a glint in
his eyes. Six guys file in dark suits; they look like six Rambos in military
haircuts. My dad’s eyes go wide.
“Your mom’s not
gonna like this,” he whispers to Elliot.
“You’re telling
me! My guys at work will have enough ammo to fuck with my head for a year!” he
mutters back.
Taylor
introduces them.
“Mr. Grey, these
are your security details: Brian Evans and Tom Rhodes,” he says to Elliot.
“Frank O’Neil,
John Brady, Hank Thomas, Tony Citoli, Clint Warner, Joe Genarro, and Claus
Schwartz go with you Mr. Grey,” he says turning to my father. “They each know
who to follow sir.”
“Great, just
great,” he replies softly. Then gaining his, ‘I’m-an-attorney’ composure, he
find his professional voice:
“Nice to meet
you gentlemen. Well, shall we?” he says like the man who is resigned to his
fate.
“Do we have to
keep you at home? Or what’s the procedure?” my dad asks on his way out.
Elliot is
holding the rear end of the group. “See you on your party, bro! I don’t feel so
bad about getting you in trouble anymore,” he says grinning.
After the
elevator door closes behind them, Taylor turns to me and asks, “Are we going
back to GEH, Mr. Grey?”
“No, we’re going
to SIP to pick Miss Steele up.”
“Yes, sir.”
*****
(Skyfall - Adele)
We’re in front
of SIP six minutes to the hour. I sit in my seat, my emotions in check so far,
but where Anastasia is concerned, my control has a way of melting away like a
block of ice in desert heat. I check my watch again, waiting for her to appear
at the door. Its six minutes past the hour. She’s not at the door. My gaze is
fixed at the door, unblinking. Did she forget? Did she decide that she wants to
keep working? Suddenly fear grips me. I’ll give her a few more minutes. Maybe
she had something to finish up. I feel my silent watch ticking as my gaze is
fixed at the door. Suddenly the door opens and I feel relief, but it’s someone
else. I take my Blackberry out and dial Anastasia’s number.
She doesn’t
answer. Panic and anger is rising in me like the twin volcanoes. I dial SIP’s
phone number, and her new assistant Hannah answers on the third ring, and she’s
breathless like she ran to the phone.
“SIP. Miss
Steele’s office, Hannah speaking,” she says trying to catch her breath. I look
at my phone confused.
“Hannah! This is
Christian Grey. Where is Miss Steele?”
“About that,
sir...”
“What?” I ask
sharply my anger rising. Where did she go? Where is Sawyer? “Did she go somewhere?”
I ask sharply. If she did, why didn’t Sawyer call me?
“No, sir. She
didn’t go anywhere,” she answers politely.
“Where the hell
is Sawyer?” I ask forcefully.
“Mr. Sawyer is
waiting for Miss Steele to get ready. I don’t think he was aware that she was
leaving early, sir,” she replies.
“Do you know why
she isn’t answering her cell phone?”
“Yes,” she says,
and then her voice goes into a whisper. “Mr. Grey, I’m sorry. She was unwell
for the last hour. She didn’t want anyone to know. She just took some Advil,
and put her head down on her desk, and told me to wake her five till the hour,
but, she gave me several things to do, and they took me a while to finish my
tasks, and I completely lost track of time. I’m so sorry I didn’t wake her up
on time, Mr. Grey. She just went to wash her face quickly before she came out,”
she says in one breath. Then realizing what she wasn’t supposed to say, she
adds chagrined, “Oh, she probably didn’t want me to pass this on. I apologize
Mr. Grey. Miss Steele’s here, sir,” she says and hands her the phone.
“Mr. Grey is on
the phone for you, Ana,” she says her voice distant from the speaker.
“Hello
Christian,” says Anastasia in a soft tone, and my heart melts.
“Hi,” I reply.
“Are you just about ready?”
“Yes. I was just
in the bathroom. I’ll be out in a minute,” she replies.
“Okay,” I answer
softly.
She appears at
the door within a few minutes followed by Sawyer, and I find myself quickly
exiting the SUV and walking towards her in sure steps. She looks pale.
“Hi,” I say
taking her hand. It’s cold. “Hi,” she replies swallowing.
“Are you not
well?”
“Just tired...
That’s all,” she replies avoiding my question.
“Ana, what’s
wrong?” I ask turning her to me.
“Nothing...” she
replies.
I take her under
my arm protectively, and walk her to the SUV.
“Have you
eaten?” I ask once we’re in the car.
“Yes, I had a
sandwich,” she replies.
“Ana! What’s the
matter?” I ask anxiety rising in me. “Do I need to take you to a hospital?”
“No, Christian.
I just had a headache... or rather still do,” she says, and I pull her into my lap where
she curls up, and I kiss the top of her head, holding her possessively. She
sighs and her arms wrap around my neck, she tucks her head under the crook of
my neck.
“Let’s not fight
baby! Not over silly things like parties,” I say.
“Well, are you
going to Elliot’s party?”
“Do you want me
to stay?” I ask her, willing her to say, ‘yes,’ that she wants me to stay.
“The rational
part of me wants you to stay. But, I trust you. I want to show you that I trust
you even among bare breasts, and naked asses,” she says wincing.
“Is that why you
got sick?”
“Yes. But, I
have to be a grown up about it. It doesn’t mean I won’t be insanely and
irrationally jealous. Because you’re my man!” she says
in a fervent whisper. I feel immensely happy and elated with her response. I
want her to be possessive of me. I want her world to start and end with me, and
the fact that she feels that way enough to get sick about it makes me both
happy and mad. Because I want to protect her, and I want her to be well. I
don’t want to be the reason, the cause that makes her ill.
“Baby, I feel
the same way about you!" I tell her.
"But what do we do, Christian? You’ve made a promise, and so have I,” she whispers.
"But what do we do, Christian? You’ve made a promise, and so have I,” she whispers.
“We’ll just have
to be there long enough to fulfill the promise we’ve made. But, do you really
want to stay at Kate’s on the night before our wedding?”
“I don’t know
what else to do. Apparently it’s the tradition, and I agreed to sleep apart
from you that night,” she says blushing. I frown.
“I can’t let you
stay far away from me, Ana. It will also create a security problem. I don’t
want paparazzi haunting you. Her apartment is not safe enough. How about this
compromise? Kate comes and stays with us in the apartment with you in your old
room. That way you won’t be sleeping with me that night, but also fulfill your
promise to your friend of spending the night with her,” she blinks with some
sort of relief looking up at me.
Then I lean in
and whisper in her ear. “We’ll just have to make sure that I fuck you a good
part of the day to make up for the night you won’t be with me,” I say
salaciously making her blush redder than the communist manifesto.
“Yes!” she
whispers, her eyes darkening, holding onto me tighter.
“How’s your
headache?”
“Surprisingly
much better,” she replies smiling.
“I was hoping
you’d say that. I have plans for us.”
“I hope it’s
before dinner,” she replies in my ear.
When Taylor
stops the SUV in front of the elevators, Sawyer jumps out, and opens the door,
and without breaking out connection, I take Anastasia out, walking her to the
elevators. We’re like the sun and its planet, so drawn to each other; when we are near, there's
an unbearable urge and a magnetic pull to mesh our bodies together. I press the
elevator call button, and when the door dings open, I walk Anastasia in, and
hold my hand up to Sawyer.
“Take the next
one up,” I say to him with an impassive face, making Anastasia blush and bury
her head in embarrassment under my arm.
“Yes, sir,” he
replies going crimson.
When the door
closes, I enter my code to the penthouse, and turn to Anastasia encasing her
between my arms against the elevator wall. My growing erection is pressing
against her stomach. I lean in and press my forehead against hers. I inhale her
scent deeply as I close my eyes.
“God, you’re
intoxicating me Ana!” I say as I start devouring her mouth, and tongue,
sucking, and nipping her lips and chin and neck. She reciprocates, lacing her
hands in my hair, and pulling my head down forcefully. I groan in her mouth,
the stress of last two hours finally seeking its release. I take her nipple
perking under her silk blouse into my mouth through her shirt, and she pushes
her arms up against the elevator wall making her breast push forth into my
mouth.
“Not here baby,”
I whisper. “I want you in my bed,” I say, and as the elevator door dings open
to my penthouse, I scoop her off the floor and hoist her onto my shoulder
making he shriek in surprise.
“Christian, put me
down!” she protest.
“All in good
time, baby,” I reply as I walk into the foyer. Mrs. Jones is coming from the
kitchen and blinks in total surprise.
“Hello Mrs.
Jones,” I greet her.
“Uhm... Yes, hi,
Mr. Grey. Miss Steele,” she says and quickly scurries away.
“Oh God,”
mutters Anastasia under her breath, covering her face. I smile.
I walk into our
bedroom and close the door with my foot and deposit her on the bed, falling on
top of her.
“How fond are
you of this shirt?” I ask.
“I like it quite
well, unless you’re willing to replace it,” she responds, and I grin. With one
swift move I pull it apart, buttons flying every which way in my bedroom. I take it off her, and unzip her skirt
pulling it off. She’s in her lacy underwear, silk stockings held up with her
garter belt. I gaze down at her appreciating the look for a minute, and lean
down, and pull her bra cups off one agonizingly slow movement at a time. I lean
down and carefully take one nipple into my mouth and expertly flick it back and
forth with my tongue, and graze it with my teeth making her gasp. I hold the
bottom of her elongated nipple between my front teeth, and my tongue fellates
it relentlessly. My index finger and thumb mirror my actions on her other
nipple. Anastasia moans in a pain pleasure, and instantly wraps her legs around
my torso.
My lips move
between the twin peaks of her breasts, and nip and suck my way down to her
navel, and probe her belly, making her clench her groin. Moving down to the top
of her pubic bone, my hand cups her sex, dipping one finger and then two into
her already drenched sex. I feel my cock pushing hard against my pants. My
mouth goes down to her pulsating nub. She yelps with pleasure. I pull her
bottom towards me. My mouth covers the orifice of her sex. My tongue dips into
her sex like there’s no tomorrow and my teeth graze over her clit. She raises
her hip off the bed and into my welcoming mouth. My tongue dips deeper in
circles first then in and out. While with one hand I push her ass into my
mouth, my other hand teases her breasts. I’m all tongue, teeth, and hands
giving her sensory overload. She soon comes loudly with long waves shuddering.
I quickly divest
myself off my clothes, and flip Anastasia onto her belly.
“Lift that
glorious ass up the air baby,” I say and as she does, I separate her legs with
mine pushing them aside, and making room for myself. My cock is pulsing, and
demanding to be inside her, and nothing short of taking her all the way,
branding her inside will satisfy the beast in me.
I plunge myself
into her making her gasp, filling her tight orifice, and the feeling is
exquisite. I stay like that connected, my eyes closed, and her ass in my hands,
savoring her.
“Ready baby?” I
ask.
“One second,”
she says and adjusts her legs, spreading her arms forward.
“Okay, I’m
ready, lose yourself, and take me with you!” she says making my need for her
grow in leaps and bounds, and I move. First slowly, I move in and out, and she
meets me thrust for thrust, and plunging against me, making me find the deepest
unexplored spots inside her sex, groaning.
I push one leg
over, making room for my hands to reach her breast, and teasing and tugging, I
move and slide in and out of her. The swelling of her nub and her unbearable
wetness pushes me to the vortex of pleasure. As I start groaning, I feel the
tightening of her sex, and her body begins to convulse with built up pleasure,
shaking her legs. The desire in me for her pushes me higher than all the
limits, and I work my hips in circles, lifting her ass up in the air at such an
angle to give my cock a better leverage against her pleasure zone. As my rhythm
gets faster and faster, I pound into her relentlessly.
“Christian,
please!” she yells.
“This is
mine!" I hiss holding onto her sex. "You are mine!”
“Yours,” groans
Anastasia.
“And I’m yours!
Don’t. You.Forget.That!” I say and empty myself into her as we both reach the
peaks of our please.
I thrust one
last time into her, and finally without breaking out connection, I collapse
onto bed, without breaking our connection. I pull her into my arms, completely
sated, and happy.
Before she
closes her eyes relaxed, I hear her whisper, “I love you, Christian.” I hold her tighter.
“And I, you,
Ana,” I whisper softly, and drift off.
another great chapter. it was so nice to read about the bachelor parties... so funny... keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteGreat chapter. Loved all the humor.
ReplyDeleteLoved the story of the Golden Apple...very interesting.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you so much for indulging us!!
i was waiting for this Emine! and again it's a superb chapter!!! can't wait for the bachelor parties. :)
ReplyDeleteWOW!! What a great chapter. I loved the story about the golden apple and thought the part about the bachelor parties was really funny. Love your writing and look forward to each chapter. Thank you so much Emine.
ReplyDeleteWhile I love your writing I have to ask when are you getting to the wedding? I know you wanted to fill in the gaps that the book left us with in respect to the engagement but I just feel that it's being dragged out a little. Again I don't mean any disrespect by it because I LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing, I'm just wondering when you'll start writing the actual book part?
ReplyDeleteThank you, once again for indulging us! Loved all the humor! You are a very gifted story teller. I'm greedy for
ReplyDeletemore, can not wait for the next chapter....
PS...once CG is done will you indulge us in a POV of Gideon Cross? I loved the crossfire series also. Just finished Reflected in You...and Sylvia Day is taking forever to release the 3rd book Entwined in You.
New reader who recently found this kick ass blog and I LOVED this as much as all your other chapters I had the privilege of reading!
ReplyDeleteI love your Taylor and how he is with Christian and how protective he is with Ana.
The Grey men moments were really fun to read.
Of course that last part with Christian and Ana arguing and then making up was more then awesome!
Thanks for all the hard work and time you take to write this for us!
This blog is by far my fav guilty pleasure!! I love the way Christian controls every detail and is so fixed in Anna. Is such a high reading the way his character como to live .....way better than the way we originally know. Thank you again for doing this. Can't wait for the bachelor party ;D...
ReplyDeleteYou've done it again. Terrific chapter V. Can't wait for the next one, meanwhile I'll read this one a few more times :)
ReplyDeleteHi Emine,
ReplyDeleteAmazing as always!!!!!! Loved it, can not wait till the next :)
XOXOXO
Norma Wellington
Excellent! I love all the extra details. The ring, the tuxes, and the bachelor parties! We missed all these things in the book. You are brilliant and have told you so many times. Thank you for doing this for us. Cannot wait to see what you have in store for us! It's like Christmas and my birthday together when i see a new chapter posted! Thanks Emine Cathy from Texas
ReplyDeleteI can not begin to tell you just how happy I am that you are taking your time to fill in the voids in the novel. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! Please don't feel like you need to rush through this part to get to the novel. We LOVE IT!!!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the story about the apple of course and really loved the arguments about the parties. I somehow seeing them compromise that there will be no nude strippers at the party. Neither one of them wants it and it is their party after all in their honor. They will work it out that is if their more recent sexipade didn't do the job. ;)
Thank You for another great chapter. See you next week!!!
I think this was yet again phenomenal! I loved the part with Taylor protesting the gun issue & being prepared to quit in order to protect Christian & Ana! That shows dedication & love. I love my dress pick bc its clean & simple. The lace back is what I envisioned when I read the book. I love your writing & can't wait til the next addition!
ReplyDeleteI have so loved these last five chapters. The stories behind the diamond and the symbols on the ring were great. Keep up the great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteWonderful! Cant wait til next monday!!!
ReplyDeleteEmine,
ReplyDeleteI have been reading your blog for awhile now and I absolutely LOVE it!!! You are an amazing writer! Thank you so much for taking the time to write this wonderful story! This chapter is just as fantastic as all of the previous ones! I anxiously await your next post!!
Thanks again for all of your hard work,
xoxo Crystal
Just got through chapter v. Fantastic story. Can't wait for next chapters. Keep up good work
ReplyDeleteAnother great chapter Emine, love the CG/Taylor relationship, and so sweet that he's a groomsman, even if they do the macho thing and act like it's all for protection, we know better lol!
ReplyDeleteThank you
Laney
xx
Hi Emine, just registered as one of your followers. I love your CG's POVs. I understood CG better after learning what's in his mind and heart. I really am thankful for your effort to fill in some of the "gaps" in the original book. You really spent super extra effort to write these stories by doing a very keen research work and I really admire you for that. You are not an artistic person but a very responsible writer as well. I wish you can also share with us the super detailed wedding ceremony of Ana and Christian. Till next week. -bambi from the beautiful country of the Philippines.
ReplyDeleteHey Sweetie! I loved every single part of it. Christian rocks in every single way! I love Taylor too <3 .... well this was amazing. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteLove you <3
Rach
I loved this chapter! Well I always love them; I think I start my comment always saying the same! :p
ReplyDeleteI loved the story about the Golden Apple! I love Greek mythology. Is there anything you don't know about? You are so knowledgeable sweetie, always impressing me :)
Thanks for sharing the story :D
I liked the tuxedo part, although I'm the kind of person that still finds silly to spend so much money in these things! That's why I didn't say anything about the weeding, I can't make myself wanting to see things to spend so much money in one single day, and really, I don't understand any of it! I went shopping for the bride's dress of my cousin and I was always upset about how absurdly expensive they were, c'mon! Oh well, I guess I'm never going to marry, at least not in such a fancy way :p
I loved when Taylor was discussing with Christian! So good he compromised with him, I thought "Well, our Christian sure is growing up, compromising with Taylor too, how sweet" and then he puts up the fight about the bachelorette party and I was like "c'mon stop with the fuss! Why the double standards, that's not nice!" and then you put Kate saying that exactly and I started laughing out loud because I think that I'm a little similar to Kate in this kind of things, but with the shyness of Ana :p
Oh well, I love this! I can't wait for the weeding and for the parties :p
And for Ana's reaction about the ring, and the inscription and symbol! :)
You are the best Eminé, always make us feeling all this range of emotions with one simple chapter! Thank you so much for all your work :)
Love you my dear!
Kiss,
Catarina*
Emine,
ReplyDeleteYou did such a fantastic job!! I just can't wait for the bachelor/bachelorette parties. I just love to read over your chapters again and again. Your writing is amazing and I look forward to your next chapter. You are incredibly gifted :)
Holly
I have to giggle...Last night as I was waiting for the new post; keeping busy so time would pass by quicker...When time neared,I enter the computer room, in hopes of finding solitude and submerge myself into your writing... only to find my son on the computer working on a school project, listening to his I pod ...frozen, I stared him down...as if yelling..."What the hell"...then he informs me the speakers no longer work on the computer...I just stood there...lost in a blank thought...I wanted to panic...I soon left pouting, pacing...then busted out laughing! I mean, really laughing out loud! ...Oh how Christian of me! So I go in search of the lap top...missing in action...oldest son...his I pad...gone...pacing again...returning to youngest son...I plead for the use of his I pad...he looked at me as if I had grown two heads...Again, such a Christian moment! So I once again pouted. My son's response took me aback as he handed me his I pad w/a reply of "it only has 10% power"...I looked at him with a Christian type grin..."oh number two son... Mamma-son has extension cord/doohickey". And as soon as I could, I curled up in my chair by the fire place, wrapped myself in a blanket...and began to read...ahhh... Mamma-son is now happy...Had my Emine fix...
ReplyDeleteThough, I have to admit, I was more interested in the honeymoon and awaiting my turn... I am finding this wedding adventure to be...well, rather fun indeed! I just hate I have to wait a week till the next chapter! Yes, I understand why, but I am in a Christian mode...it doesn't mean I have to like it...Great read, loved the laughter it brought and the lesson learned "Golden Apple" ...until next time...I'll be waiting! (hopefully w/less Christian drama! :~) heehee
Oh, just an idea..the theme music from the new James Bond movie...great to listen to while reading Christian and Ana's bedroom scene...very seductive music...just saying..."Wow" ;~)
I don't know why but when the jeweler was talking about the symbols about what Christian and Ana had was more then just love it was more, I was almost in tears. It was so beautiful. You go into such detail and obviously do your research. Thank you again for another wonderful, insightful chapter. Have a great week. :)
ReplyDeleteI foung your blog from instagram.. i think her name is helene. I didnt know it wasnt you. And i did greet you a happy birthday at a comment at helene's ig. I read all your cpov til book 3 chapter 4, for four days. You write so good. The ideas are so totally like CG. Then after that kept checking.once in a while if you have this chapter 5..
ReplyDeleteYou 're really good in what you're doing.. and im glad you were kind to share it to us. Keep.up your good work. Thank you
IG lajc_corveau
This blog is the only thing to quench my thirst for Christian since I finished the books.
ReplyDeleteI miss the characters and their fierce love for each other, this is a great pacifier.
Well done!
Emine I actually laughed out loud a couple of times reading this chapter.lol The part where Christian's dad said his mom is not gonna be happy with the 'Rambo' type bodyguards was hilarious. I would love to get her reaction when she sees them.lol
ReplyDeleteAs usual, excellent chapter and we are so happy you decided to share your blog with us.
In the meantime, are there any 'HOT' books you can recommend so that I can keep my mind occupied until I can get my weekly Christian & Ana fix?
Hugs from
still laughing in the Caribbean.
Absolutely loved Chapter V. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteThank you18
Ok folks... Bachelor parties followed by Grey Wedding is next week....
ReplyDeleteCatarina – there are a lot of things I don’t know about, but I read often and learn. One of my favorite ancient books is actually Hesiod’s Theogony (Θεογονία in Greek which means “the birth of the gods”) a poem by Hesiod composed around 700 BC and it was written in Homeric Greek. But it’s not a short poem :) It’s about 300 pages.
IG lajc_corveau – First, welcome! Helene mentioned about you, and passed on your birthday wishes. Thank you so much! I love Helene! She’s such a great fan, and became a good friend (though we live on opposite ends of the country). Thank you so much for reading!
Mzthang – HOT books... Someone shared the below list before. These should occupy you for a little while (I might have a surprise next year with one of my own – if I get my act together that is, and stop working my ass off). I was translating @ 3 a.m. this morning because the project was due @ 7 a.m.: I made it of course, but by the skin of my teeth. Books:
SYLVIA DAY(Bared to You, Reflected in You, Pleasures of the Night, Heat of the Night and more)
SYLVAIN REYNARD (Gabriel's Inferno and Gabriel's Rapture)
MEGAN HART (Tempted, Naked, Dirty, Broken)
I want to thank all of you for reading, being patient, being forgiving for all the shortcoming and not making a big deal of all my OSMs (Oh Shit! Moments): The only thing that was mentioned for an earlier chapter of Book I which I finally corrected was by a French reader who said my French sucked as much as her English did (I don’t know whether it was an insult or a compliment, but considering French care about the grammar and spelling like the gatekeepers of their language, I’ll take as a semi-compliment.) I made it to the sucky part: It can only get better. Ok, the French sentence that was sucky but corrected is this one (Any objections French speakers?):
ReplyDelete“L'amour est comme un sablier, quand le cœur se remplit, le cerveau se vide.”
If it still “sucks”, post me the unsucky version of it. I shouldn’t misquote one of my favorite authors (Jules Renard).
Anyway, I do have a point (I'm getting to something)... Making mistakes, or being corrected don’t bother me: I intend to be very good at writing which is why I constantly ask for feedback, or your opinions. It’s a goal, and I’m taking one step at a time to reach it.
There are several reasons I want to accomplish this: First and foremost, I want to keep writing, and constantly improve my skills. But my purpose isn't solely limited to, me only wanting to write. Several of you have contacted me, and each have some sort of difficulty you’re going through in life. Not two problems alike. As a result some of you have lost hope in life and that breaks my heart... One should never lose hope, ever! My personal triangle is consisted of Faith, hope and love. For a lot of people, having careers, family, responsibilities, illnesses, issues, in fact life itself gets in the way of things that they once wanted to do, fulfill or achieve. I’m probably one of the busiest people you’ll ever meet. But, with working towards what I want to do, I want to set an example that you have to have personal goals to keep going in life. Some next thing to achieve. You can’t do it without being ready to fail at it at some point, or make a giant ass of yourself. There’s about 1.6 million of you from 131 countries. I’m sure I’ve made ass of myself by not writing something correctly or offending someone greatly. Ignorance is bliss, and my failures aren't going to stop me from writing.
I translate, edit, conduct OPI language interviews, localize websites, subtitle videos, interpret...in freelancing you can’t pick and choose. It’s a luxury I can’t afford, and can’t complain. It is what it is. I don’t work at one particular company. On top, I have one homeschooled child, and two others in elementary school who are in gifted programs who require me to help often, and everyone including the dog, and newly widowed Katherine the fish requires my time. I’m lucky to get 2 hours of sleep on the days I have a major project work on. My time requires a lot of juggling and planning.
Regardless of all of that, I WANT TO WRITE. I LOVE to write! I try not to make an excuse of not doing a good job (I do my research before writing). There are some of you I admire: working hard, and still have personal goals and working to achieve them. But with my own struggles in writing, hopefully I can encourage some of you to not give up on your goals.
Because, nothing or no one can beat you down like life can-in fact most often you're your own determining factor. Even if you fail, or fall down, you must keep moving even if you have to drag yourself inch by inch. If you make the slightest effort, someone will give you a hand. But the key is you have to keep moving. If you just lay there and give up on yourself, everyone will step all over you.
So in short,hopefully I'll have fewer shortcomings each time, and fulfill my goal of being an author. If I can do it being this busy, most of you should be able to achieve your personal goals. Keep forging ahead; and don’t lose sight of your dreams. Ok... Back to the grindstone. This chapter isn't going to write itself...
i'm so sorry if you misunderstand me. I love yours stories, I really do, and I don't care you don't speak French. It's just your misquoted sentence is sort of funny...
ReplyDeletemy humblest apologies if I hurt your feeling.
Solanne-no need to apologize. I don’t get offended by this; actually it was quite funny for me too. I work in linguistics; French is a language I use (not on daily basis) but I don’t translate into or from. Even among the languages where I’m a high level speaker (I’m certified by the Defense Language Institute (DLI) and American Council on the Teaching of Foreign Languages (ACTFL)) and my annual OPI and WPT results training tests show that I’m in top ½ of native level speakers in languages I test in. What it basically means is that I can tailor language to fit the audience, counsel, persuade, represent an official point of view, negotiate, advocate a position at length and interpret formally as far as global tasks and functions are concerned. As for the lexical control, I can precise for representational purposes within personal and professional experience, and can elaborate concepts freely. In my structural control I can organize discourse well and use appropriate rhetorical devices and high level discourse structure. I can use and understand details and ramifications of target cultural references. I can produce speeches, lectures, debates etc. And I can do all these in global terms.
ReplyDeleteDespite the abilities I have with languages, even among the languages I’m quite proficient in, I make ample amount of mistakes. I always appreciate corrections – it’s no bother, it’s necessity. In the end, it’s not about feelings: I want to do better. Of course, you can correct my French text, so I don’t repeat the same mistake. Don’t ever worry about feelings: Correct me. Shoot me an e-mail, or just drop a line explaining it’s supposed to be. I want be better. Screw the feelings :)
3 years ago, I was working in creating Rosetta Stone Turkish language software. But a lot of languages’ software was being produced at the same time, and I believe it was the Hebrew team (each language had 4 Language experts creating the software), and we, sort of looked up to them because they were the most scholarly among the whole 29 sets of languages. Some disagreement arose among the Hebrew linguists-two in particular and we saw two professors go outside and start punching each other because of a linguistic disagreement of some wrong usage! It was funny and odd at the same time. You see, if it happens among professionals, the layman has no chance.
I have a funny story for you: When Michael Jackson died in 2009, my children, myself and my great aunt who was 75 at the time visited Neverland about 5 times. Anywho, my group had the youngest (my daughter was 3), and the oldest MJ fan (great aunt was 75). So, all the TV crews wanted to interview us. The French M6 TV channel crew interviewed us right away. But the announcer had a very thick French accent, and was hard to understand. So my aunt turned and asked me “What the hell is this guy saying?” in Turkish so not to offend him by blurting it out in English. When my great aunt switched into Turkish the announcer got excited: “What language are you speaking?” He asked her, and she said in French, “Je suis Turc. Je parle turc."
The announcer got this announcer’s orgasmic face, and he turned to the camera and said in his broken English “Dear viewers, we’ve located the oldest Michael Jackson fan who also traveled the greatest distance to visit Neverland Ranch on this very somber day.” He was laying it really thick. “She came all the way from Turkey!” he blurted out. I turned to my great aunt and said, ‘you didn’t come from Turkey, your house is in Santa Barbara which is only 40 minutes away from the Neverland Ranch! Does he know you came from Turkey 58 years ago?” She said, “guess telling people I came from Santa Barbara doesn’t make exciting news, ” or maybe that was the best he understood. Therefore ‘to err is human. To really foul things up requires a linguist.’
Good one. You have a great historical mind. Poor Christian, he really will have a heart attack sometime with his anxiety and Ana, well, she may have one too lol.
ReplyDeletePlease tell me that he is hiring Roberta Flack to come and sing "The First Time Ever I Saw Your Face" as she walsk down the aisle!!!!!!
ReplyDeletelove it Emine, another great one.
ReplyDeleteReRe -- Sshhh! Do you read mind or something? It's a secret :) You'll find out soon enough... You might be on the right track
ReplyDeleteI'm thinking Sade:" your love is king"---he crowns my heart..his kisses are rings...
DeleteAbsolutely Amazing!! Looking forward to next Monday :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely Amazing!! Looking forward to next Monday :)
ReplyDeleteOnce again a great chapter emine and I am so honored to have my christain tux as the picture I love it thank you for brightening my day
ReplyDeleteI cannot wait to get into the wedding and find out what you have chosen I already know it is going to be great
Eminé,
ReplyDeleteI'm so in love with your writing! I can't get enough of it...i find myself reading your chapters over and over again until your next weekly posts. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing "writing talent" with us. The chapters just keep getting better and better... Can't wait for next weeks!!! Love Love Love your blog.
P.s. Have you ever thought about writing about Taylors POV?... :D It would be a treat to know the things he has seen during those past 4 years of working for Cristian. Just a thought! Laters! ;)
Thanks again,
MissBella X
HI Emine,
ReplyDeleteamazing chapter as usual!!!!
I love your writing, i get so involved when I read the chapters.....you are really a very talented writer!!!
I loved also what you've said about reaching the goals, you are a very strong woman...
thanks for all..
so i will wait for the bachelor parties and the wedding!!!!!!
Elisa
Eminé.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for making my days more relaxed... I really appreciate your written skills. You do so well!!! I found your blog just few weeks ago and couldn't stop reading the chapters (from book I till now). You are fantastic! Please, keep going. A big hug for your birthday. Sorry for being late.
(from a Brazilian who lives in Austria).
I think Sade will sing at there wedding too. I like that idea.
ReplyDeleteEmine you and those magic fingers of yours, chapter five was absolutely delicious as ever. Love all the new wedding planning you are sending all us excited readers, I just might have to go out and buy myself a new dress to wear while i read the the upcoming wedding chapter. Can't wait! Be well.
ReplyDeletelove this chapter it was very educational and funny..... can't wait for the next one.....
ReplyDeleteI love that Taylor will be part of the bridal party. Enjoyed the dilemma of the bachelor and bachelorette parties,and the new security detail for the Grey family. Another great chapte,looking forward to the next one.
ReplyDeleteChar
Great chapter!
ReplyDeleteEmine
ReplyDeleteI know you are writing from Christian's pov but I was really hoping like many other readers that we would get a glimse of Ana and Kate over "the talk". No shower for Ana?? just a bachelorette party. I hope on the wedding day we get to see some special moments with Ana as she gets ready..(I know you are doing Christians pov) but we did not get to enjoy Ana's pov during the wedding. I feel we were cheated on that from E.L James and hope that you fullfill that void.
keep up the great job and thank you
OMG. I couldn't wait to read this. I have been on a cruise and had no Internet all week. The moment we pulled into the dock I couldn't wait to get online. This chapter was amazing as are all the previous chapters. Now I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I just can't get enough!!!
ReplyDeleteU r the greatest!!
I'm in love with your writing. Going on vacation next week, hope to the next chapters be ready while I'm on the road. Continue your great work. You Rock! All the way from Chicago
ReplyDeleteHello friends!
ReplyDeleteI'm updating Monday evening as usual. I've been writing today (it might be a tad bit longer because there's so much to cover). I have to run over to my BFF in a little bit. She lost her job on Friday, and Friday being my wedding anniversary I couldn't go to her, I'll go hang out with her now, and console her - its not a good time for her to lose her job, but it is what it is. We all need a shoulder to lean on now and then.
Michele-I'm glad you safely docked.
Chicago-I hope to be able to post before you leave next week.
Hope all of you are doing well! Drop me a line and I'll get back to you when I return.
Sorry I haven't posted for a while. Things haven't been good for me.
ReplyDeleteLoved the chapter as usual. Everything you do is amazing and I can't wait for the next one. ;-)
Happy wedding anniversary for Friday and I'm sorry to hear about your friend losing her job. There's nothing worse. Hope she bounces back soon.
Well id best be off - housework and more gardening to get done before lunch.
Take care. And THANK YOU ;-)
Xoxoxo
Emine Hi and happy belated wedding anniversary. I don't always get a change to comment on every chapter but I wanted you to know I love this one. I was always wondering if he would let her have a Bacheloret party. And I really enjoyed the store of the golden apple. It was very sweet and so much like Christian. I can't wait to see what you come up with for the wedding! Your blog has given me something to focus on and it is helped take my mind off of my problems. Thank you for every chapter and I can't wait to read more!!! Melinda
ReplyDeleteTell your friend I understand her pain because I too lost my job back in august and was devastated as well but god will see us through it. But if it wasn't for you wonderful writing I probably be stressed out and depress but your writing has been keeping me going. I'm leaving wednesday morning so i know I'll need something to read besides the social networks which is boring now that I found your blogs Keep doing a great job continue with Christian POV it's much better from his view. Talk to you soon and happy belated wedding anniversary!
ReplyDeleteHi Emine, I am loving these chapters.... I cant see chapter 6 yet so I'm guessing its still a work in progress moment... I am loving the surprises being sprung on Chritian and watching his reaction to them, I also love how Taylor stood up to him with the security issues...
ReplyDeletechat soon xx
So I just found this and am loving it!! How often do you post because I don't want to miss a thing!! I have already read the others now waiting for a new one!! You rock!!
ReplyDeleteThank you...absolutely fantastic...I am enjoying seeing the development of Taylor!!
ReplyDeleteDoes it get any better than this?
ReplyDeleteI have read up to this point, and have told myself I would take ONE break and write how much I ADORE you and your writing... but usually by that time my eyes are dry and I am up way past my bedtime :)
ReplyDeleteAnyway-- I ADORE your blog, writing and comments-- connecting with your fans. AMAZING. So fun to read! Kinda glad I came upon 550 shades late.... now I don't have to wait ;0 - though I am not getting ANYTHING else done around here!
Very good chapter. I could'n stop laughing about te Rambo's. You are doing a great job telling Christian's story. Thank you so much
ReplyDeleteOops, I just realized I should've left a comment like yesterday. I've only started reading book 3 a few days ago because I was distracted with something.
ReplyDeleteBut this is so much better than the original, with all that was left out for us to read right here.