tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post7843018248951338835..comments2023-10-10T08:58:52.772-07:00Comments on A Walk in the Clouds: BOOK II - CHAPTER XXII - Christian and Anastasia FanFictionEminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comBlogger103125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-10490325030673564742013-10-19T08:14:13.251-07:002013-10-19T08:14:13.251-07:00Hi Emine,
A happy end. Love it! I do love all thos...Hi Emine,<br />A happy end. Love it! I do love all those moments and explanations that were missing in the E.L. James' books.<br />This truck driver was so nice with Ross and Christian. A good man indeed. It's so rare today!<br />Grace is so touching, hugging and kissing her son, crying with joy, relief and worry together. A very good mom. That allows us to see how much she loves her children. And Mia and Elliott, always the same ones!! Lol!<br /><br />Going on to read the next chapters! :)<br /><br />S. from FranceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-37494390434497058262013-08-06T12:32:01.645-07:002013-08-06T12:32:01.645-07:00Hi Emine,
after reading the trilogy books your bl...Hi Emine,<br /><br />after reading the trilogy books your blog is the third fanfiction about the characters Anastasia and Christian findung and fighting for love which I'm following now.<br /><br />This chapter will be my favorite one, because there are long parts without Ana but with lots of emotions and technical details. Thanks.<br /><br />Greetings<br />hghgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-58437991052246093792013-06-09T07:09:49.889-07:002013-06-09T07:09:49.889-07:00This was one of the most awesome chapters you wrot...This was one of the most awesome chapters you wrote. I think you did great with the wording of the terms about Charile. Tango! Great job!Jozienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-13118069371298062732012-12-12T04:00:48.319-08:002012-12-12T04:00:48.319-08:00Hi Jade!
I've met some people both from Rapid...Hi Jade!<br /><br />I've met some people both from Rapid City and Mitchell. S. Dakota has some very solid and nice people, very friendly,neighborly; people who watch out for the well-being of one another at times. A few years ago, I was very pregnant with my daughter, and had a flat tire. It's quite hot here in AZ. I was going to call either my husband, or auto club depending on who would come fastest, but this truck driver stopped, from Mitchell I think. I remember that his belly was as big as mine. He stopped on the freeway and changed my tire. He was from SD. His name was Len. I never forgot that. And that's how the truck driver come about.<br /><br />People forget that there are nice people around. So, this was a good opportunity to write about that. Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-82929769532711781022012-12-11T22:09:08.737-08:002012-12-11T22:09:08.737-08:00thank you for making the truck driver from mitchel...thank you for making the truck driver from mitchell south dakota im from rapid city south dakota even though it is across the state in made me feel good reading that ... then in the next chapter i have never figured out why christian deposited 50,000 in to ana account and that was then end of it never to be mentioned againAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16200060319606720108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-31531148284440281982012-11-22T11:13:12.535-08:002012-11-22T11:13:12.535-08:00Emine,
Thank you for explaining the Alex Pella st...Emine,<br /><br />Thank you for explaining the Alex Pella story. I only got to read a little the other night after you sent it to me, but tonight, after a full belly of turkey and all the trimmings, I will relax and begin the story again. <br />He sounds very interesting, and I am looking forward to reading it!<br /><br />Happy Turkey Day to you!<br /><br />Love & Laters,<br />JenniferJenferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434638033820182578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-52375719535629323682012-10-25T10:18:15.920-07:002012-10-25T10:18:15.920-07:00What an awesome chapter, you never fail to surpris...What an awesome chapter, you never fail to surprise us. This was such a great read. LOVED IT!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00719986914622763591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-65074500208224588002012-10-08T21:40:40.496-07:002012-10-08T21:40:40.496-07:00I loved finally knowing what happened during the h...I loved finally knowing what happened during the hours that Christian was missing. Thank you for the great writing!!! Keep it up!!Nievesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-20029817706176664552012-09-22T11:09:56.006-07:002012-09-22T11:09:56.006-07:00Omg I was so estatic when I found your blog! When ...Omg I was so estatic when I found your blog! When I finished all 3 books I wanted more. Thank you so much Emine for taking the time out to write this, it is absolutley amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter, it is hard living in the UK and being 5 hours ahead.<br /><br />I love the comments about filling in gaps from the original books. I think the stripper idea is amazing and we can see how 50 Christian will go. I love Ana and Christian's relationship. Christian will beeven more protective when they get married.<br /><br />I am also excited to read the scene where Ana gets touched up in the club and 50 goes mental. <br />I was so happy when I found out Kate and Elliot got married. Even though its fictional, this book makes me feel so many emotions, its a roller coaster ride! Keep writing and I wish you and your family well. I can't wait for the next book. Anjelicanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-90038321221342647232012-09-22T10:00:30.732-07:002012-09-22T10:00:30.732-07:00Emine, I like that you put photos in your posts. ...Emine, I like that you put photos in your posts. Even though the guy's picture you use doesn't look like my "mind's eye" Christian, I do like having the visual as I read. You do such an amazing job, and I so look forward to your post every week. It gives me a break from the monotony of the Groundhog Day in which I live. Thank you so much for what you do for all of us to enjoy. GinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-78534058628219171672012-09-22T09:46:48.976-07:002012-09-22T09:46:48.976-07:00Emine Thank you so much for your kind words and ye...Emine Thank you so much for your kind words and yes we mums worry ALOT :) he is my world and it has turned my life upside down for a while but i no me and his dad will and do give him all of our love :) we will always support him and very thankful to his pre school teachers who are helping him now too thank you once again you truly are an amazing woman Lisa xxxxxxxlisaxxxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09277477142955426673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-14153945595504743862012-09-22T08:58:36.644-07:002012-09-22T08:58:36.644-07:00I'll post the new chapter within two hours or ...I'll post the new chapter within two hours or maybe less... Few tweaks left.Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-87119628789688450602012-09-22T08:57:06.833-07:002012-09-22T08:57:06.833-07:00As a newbie, may I make a few suggestions of my ow...As a newbie, may I make a few suggestions of my own?<br />First, Emine, you are, Amazing!<br />I would find it helpful if,there were no pictures of, Christian and/or, Ana. They have to remain figments of our own imagination for in the end, we all know who Chistian looks like. One thing I think I would never see on Christian are, tattoo's. In fact, I think Ana doesn't care for tattoos?<br />May I also suggest some music that, I think would fit in with so many of the 'situations ' in the story? How about the theme music from ' The Onedin Line' when we read the description of, soaring, and/or sailing? And, perhaps, after the 'break up', try Nat King Cole singing 'Smile'?<br />Perhaps, tongue in cheek, the 1812 overture would fit in with so many of, Christian and Ana's experiences together? In the meantime, I will wait (just one of many) to read your next post. And, today is, Saturday! I shall get out my, English, Lady Grey tea, the one that comes in a Black box, and which my relatives send from England. The kettle is on! Thank you, Emine!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-15747749396357578412012-09-22T05:59:52.460-07:002012-09-22T05:59:52.460-07:00We are desperately waiting for the new chapter ;)We are desperately waiting for the new chapter ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-15974677794372045922012-09-22T02:23:57.806-07:002012-09-22T02:23:57.806-07:00Hi Emine,
How are you? I hope all is well. I don&#...Hi Emine,<br />How are you? I hope all is well. I don't know if I happened to mention that E.L.James was on the Katie Couric show this past Monday...she was great!! It was a really good show. A few days later Katie revealed that there had been a question and answer session at the end of that show. An audience member asked the author if she would ever consider writing a part for herself in the upcoming movie. She surprised everyone when she divulged that she has already written herself into the the Fifty Shades story as a very, very, minor character, and challenges all the readers to figure out who it is. Oh well, I guess I'll have to go back and reread the books again. That can wait until I'm finished with Christian's POV. Thank you again.<br /><br />Take Cake,<br />DebbieAnn54ontheSevernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16918096898731334793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-89970989041841548422012-09-21T20:46:18.556-07:002012-09-21T20:46:18.556-07:00Love ur writing!! Just wanted to throw it out ther...Love ur writing!! Just wanted to throw it out there as an additional fill in the blanks section : what about more from Christians childhood such as his adoption and time spent at the foster home. Or even college and when he quite and his parents reaction or how he was treated at high school ect..<br />I love the other suggestions as well, I think they're great ideas.<br /><br />-CJAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-22718221539058848812012-09-21T14:58:18.093-07:002012-09-21T14:58:18.093-07:00fMia just have to be the wedding planner when you ...fMia just have to be the wedding planner when you write that chapter....just imaging her driving everyone bonkers!!!queenb52https://www.blogger.com/profile/16412526225291799642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-89401061504404246942012-09-21T13:55:00.710-07:002012-09-21T13:55:00.710-07:00WOW. It's great to see the kindness of others....WOW. It's great to see the kindness of others. I honestly couldn't say a bad thing about any of the people we met and we met a lot. It amazed me home much it felt like home. My boys asked me if we could move there. It's hard to explain to them but I have to say I'd move in a heartbeat :). I can't wait to come back and funny enough Virginia is one of the p,aces I want to go. I'd love to travel thru all the little towns to give my boys a real sense of the world and the wonderful people in it. We can't wait to come back again with the whole family. But I'm super excited to come back on my own ;) ;). Hope you and your family are happy and healthy. It a joy to hear you speak of your family. Stay safe and you're all in my thoughts and prayers. Much love Tash xxTashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06135880679382448373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-54607128542635763542012-09-21T13:49:01.608-07:002012-09-21T13:49:01.608-07:00Hi when you was saying about the next book I was h...Hi when you was saying about the next book I was half way through book 3 (for the 6th time hehe) will you be doing more on mia's kidnap and how ana got away with shooting Hyde even though it was self defence surely in the real world it would still be classed as wounding with intent. I'm so glad its Saturday tomorrow I can't wait to keep reading your amazing work jenni xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-338324882803590672012-09-21T06:08:44.724-07:002012-09-21T06:08:44.724-07:00Debbie-I am still working on the new chapter, but ...Debbie-I am still working on the new chapter, but I'll finish it today to appease everyone tomorrow :)<br /><br />Wendy- how have you been? I've had a busy week with work, and was helping kids' school for fundraising yesterday evening. <br /><br />Tash- It's wonderful that you had a great time. Vegas is about 5 or 6 hrs of drive for us depending on how many potty breaks we have to make for kids along the way :)it's gotten more family friendly. I'm glad you're coming back. I love the American west (primarily because I don't shovel snow here), although every state has so many wonderful people. A couple of years ago, I was working on a software project in Virginia, and had my kids with me and couple of galpals, and one of our producers and we went to Monticello (Thomas Jefferson's house). We wanted to do wine tasting, and buy some bottles for souvenirs. Anyway, I was driving, and on the way back, my GPS on my phone wouldn't work, and we kinda got lost. It was a Sunday and couldn't find anyone to ask directions. So, I found an old church and no one was in. I finally knocked on someone's door home to ask directions. I apologized for interrupting them, and told them that we were lost. The family had company and were having dinner. Those strangers were extremely kind to us, invited us in to join them for dinner, we declined, we wanted to get going, and they wrote out the directions to the freeway, and I would never forget their kindness. <br /><br />Our people are great. Hope you make many more trips back to the States. I have Australia in my bucket list, so I will come :)Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-32610035945732049512012-09-21T03:43:19.037-07:002012-09-21T03:43:19.037-07:00Hi Emine,
I know I'm being selfish, I keep che...Hi Emine,<br />I know I'm being selfish, I keep checking back everyday hoping that you might post early. So excited...can't wait for the next chapter!! Thank you so much for sharing your passion for Fifty with us.<br /><br />Take Cake<br />DebbieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-67086301040233525622012-09-21T03:03:51.135-07:002012-09-21T03:03:51.135-07:00Just a friendly hello from Wendy in NZ!!!! Soooooo...Just a friendly hello from Wendy in NZ!!!! Sooooooooooo can't wait for your next amazing chapter! Hope you have had a great week! Xo Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-11766664398190929862012-09-21T01:00:48.133-07:002012-09-21T01:00:48.133-07:00Yeah babe it was awesome!!!!!! Can't wait to ...Yeah babe it was awesome!!!!!! Can't wait to come back. I fell in love the states and the people. If I'd know you we're close I would have invited you. The boys loved it. We only flew in late yesterday. I'm coming back in April for the coachella festival by myself so I can't wait. If you're ever in QLD /gold coast, Brisbane area let me know. Would love to have a drink with you much love Tash xxTashhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06135880679382448373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-28888908448317355622012-09-20T17:24:13.519-07:002012-09-20T17:24:13.519-07:00OMG!!! this is so good! Can't wait for the ne...OMG!!! this is so good! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Rosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06909489513948521206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-7113601608314638702012-09-20T16:48:15.972-07:002012-09-20T16:48:15.972-07:00How are your 3 boys Tash? Did you bring them to La...How are your 3 boys Tash? Did you bring them to Las Vegas? I just remembered that you were going to renew your 10 year vows. Damn woman! If I remembered, I would have crashed your party with Elvis renewing your vows :) Happy 10th Anniversary! Did you guys have a good time? I think we'll go again soon, maybe in Winter Break or something. <br /><br />I'm so glad you're safely back home! Tell me how it was.. Love! xxEminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.com