tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post7789279344377985888..comments2023-10-10T08:58:52.772-07:00Comments on A Walk in the Clouds: BOOK IV - Chapter I - Christian and Anastasia Fan FictionEminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comBlogger140125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-84268435456130320832014-12-20T01:09:59.450-08:002014-12-20T01:09:59.450-08:00Hi, Emine! I'm not sure if you're still re...Hi, Emine! I'm not sure if you're still reading the comments here, but I am a reader from Turkey. And yes, I'm trying to read your blog as fast as I can because I'm afraid they'll ban it before I finish reading (I have a mind to read the Pella stories too :)) I am writing my own steamy-sexy novel with a political sauce and of course I'll try to publish it abroad under a nom-de-guerre! I wouldn't want to rot in jail here just for mentioning the name of a certain trial. Even writing this comment here may turn out to be a liability. Anyway, thanks for bringing this subject to your readers' attention. Love... G.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-69278160048590837142013-10-13T17:39:23.803-07:002013-10-13T17:39:23.803-07:00Once again brilliant! Loved the "memory loss:...Once again brilliant! Loved the "memory loss: the free prize", and: Fucking free prize of memory loss now finds me!<br /><br />You did a brilliant job of describing the world according to CG as he's stumbling home. And his thought that Ana isn't steady on her feet, as she's trying to half-carry him to their room. <br /><br />Perfect:<br />“Are you trying to frighten me?” she mutters breathless, scared. What? No! I’m only trying to communicate with her the only way I know how. And she won’t let me.<br /><br />And this, exactly what one misses when one gets only one POV: “Mr. Brioni, my ass,” mutters Tyler under his breath. “What dumb mobster would name himself after the suit he’s wearing?” he whispers. ‘It’s not worth my life to find out,’ he thinks to himself.<br /><br />And this is why I wanted to see more of this, to see this at least addressed, in the books: <br />Elisabeth and a lot of other women working at SIP resent Ana badly, and half of them wouldn’t think twice to aid in finding a way to get her flat on her face. The bitch … marries the second richest man in Seattle. Christian Grey! … Every girl is burning with envy at the SIP. This would serve her right. <br /><br />To my mind, they never dealt sufficiently with the rigors of the life Christian sort of abducted her into. She never signed on for this, and loved being an anonymous, private person. I'm sure she would be subjected to a lot of envy, malice, malevolence -- and there are lots of ways this can be implemented in an office. <br /><br />Another wonderful chapter, as I'm dodging something I'm supposed to be doing! Thank you!<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12498121858891075019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-23553994358615565162013-06-14T03:05:39.748-07:002013-06-14T03:05:39.748-07:00Dear Emine, I just found your Blog & I am lovi...Dear Emine, I just found your Blog & I am loving it, great writing. Always wanted to know what Christian was feeling & now I have my answers. How often do you publish a new chapter? I want to keep reading this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-21564277666760744212013-06-13T01:01:21.606-07:002013-06-13T01:01:21.606-07:00Is this not book 3 instead of 4 ???Is this not book 3 instead of 4 ???Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-73028938057642902082013-06-11T17:19:06.856-07:002013-06-11T17:19:06.856-07:00Oh Emine..I wanted to tell you that I was convince...Oh Emine..I wanted to tell you that I was convinced your story/writing couldn't possibly get any better...well guess what?!? It got better!!<br />I am simply flabbergasted. You have given this story dimensional substance. I mean, come on, I know what is going to happen next yet you still manage to have me in tears and at the edge of my seat with anticipation.<br />Thank you for sharing your talent so freely with so many. Backsassinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08941704232393817850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-19955813038679460982013-06-11T17:13:04.099-07:002013-06-11T17:13:04.099-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03743915768942515236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-59432607447569042152013-06-11T17:10:09.574-07:002013-06-11T17:10:09.574-07:00Estou ansiosa pela capítulo 2!!!Estou ansiosa pela capítulo 2!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03743915768942515236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-27104180849693661232013-06-11T16:41:26.385-07:002013-06-11T16:41:26.385-07:00Emine você é perfeita...vc captou todos os sentime...Emine você é perfeita...vc captou todos os sentimentos que o cinza passa para nós e colocou em palavras<br /><br />Nós aqui do Brasil estamos viciados em você...você não pode nem pensar no sucesso que esta fazendo aqui no Brasil, todo mundo queria saber como o Christian sentia em relação a tudo o que aconteceu...e agora temos através de você<br /><br />Um obrigado direto do Brasil<br /><br />ESTOU ESPERANDO ACIOSA O CAPITULO DE HOJEMichele Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10321506441196574575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-28621296344676595722013-06-11T16:38:07.269-07:002013-06-11T16:38:07.269-07:00Hey everyone! I had Jury Duty today, and just got ...Hey everyone! I had Jury Duty today, and just got home. I will review Chapter II and post it in a couple of hours. Bear with me a little while please. Thank you!Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-66909036254304941962013-06-11T16:35:16.963-07:002013-06-11T16:35:16.963-07:00Emine estamos aqui no Brasil viciados na sua histo...Emine estamos aqui no Brasil viciados na sua historia...<br />Ficamos sempre de plantão esperando o próximo capitulo...<br />parabéns pelo trabalho...<br />E o capitulo de hoje??<br />estou doida para ler...<br />achei super emocionante o ultimo...<br /><br />o Brasil manda um oláMichele Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10321506441196574575noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-52930142281680656592013-06-11T15:17:01.933-07:002013-06-11T15:17:01.933-07:00Quando posta o novo capitulo??????????????'...Quando posta o novo capitulo??????????????''<br />Estou ansiosa....amo esta versão do christian pois nos livros não podemos ver o casamento deles,nem os filhos,nem os sentimentos deles e nao dá para enteder quem é ele..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-62127692345172572462013-06-11T14:33:31.136-07:002013-06-11T14:33:31.136-07:00I'm hoping that after dinner tonight or before...I'm hoping that after dinner tonight or before bed, I refresh and be surprised with the new chapter!! Take your time Em...my impatient ass can wait a bit longer (not too much) but longer!! I'm loving the way the book is going in the direction that it is. It amaze's me to see how dedicated you are to the book, us, and your writing! I'm in awe...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07750788181321317828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-25615854740636678742013-06-11T09:44:41.911-07:002013-06-11T09:44:41.911-07:00Pessoa inspirada que cativa nossos corações a cada...Pessoa inspirada que cativa nossos corações a cada capítulo! Nossa!!! Que mágico ler a versão sr.Grey! Aguardando ansiosa a continuação! Bjs e muito obrigado por socializar seu talento!!!Veranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-15465582772082940342013-06-11T05:39:46.239-07:002013-06-11T05:39:46.239-07:00Mais um capitulo imperdível! Incrivel Emine como v...Mais um capitulo imperdível! Incrivel Emine como vc consegue dar encantamento a tudo que escreve! Amei a visão do psicopata Jack, a visão de Elizabeth, o pq dela esta sendo chantageada e entrar no jogo! As mulheres numa inveja danada da sorte da Ana! Ate eu tenho tb! Afinal o nosso Grey eh inesquecível e maravilhoso! Amei e to aqui na expectativa danada em ver o final da estória!<br />Fiquei muito impressionada com sua estória sob a respeito dos direitos das mulheres, realmente estamos em pleno século XXI com tantas conquistas fantásticas como a internet, evolução da comunicação com celulares e as mulheres ainda são vitimas de tanta violência seja (violência física ou violência verbal) que a meu ver eh tao nociva qto a física! E mesmo com leis cada vez mais focadas com a finalidade em proteger as mulheres, a própria mídia que as vezes da visibilidade a fatos ainda somos vitimas! Parabéns pelo seu trabalho, continue a humanidade precisa de pessoas como vc! Fique na luz e muita saúde para sua mae e filhos!neves089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-33841362231807767122013-06-11T05:22:29.439-07:002013-06-11T05:22:29.439-07:00Oi Emine!
Eu concordo com Você, aqui acontece mui...Oi Emine!<br />Eu concordo com Você, aqui acontece muito também, eu mesma tive uma experiência em minha própria família com uma das minhas irmãs .<br />Eu espero que seu filho esteja melhor eu sei bem o que você esta passando , eu também estou com meu filho doente. E pra melhorar eu também estou de cama, eu tenho fibromialgia, eu não sei se você conhece essa doença, aqui no Brasil tem poucos médicos que conhece essa doença, pelos menos os médicos que eu já passei todos conhece essa doença então eu faço tratamento.<br />Eu estou lendo os livros novamente, eu já chorei, ri muito também do C G.<br />Obrigada!<br />Você esta de parabéns!<br />Ediene O Maiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16950568384498562207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-19990666805870782432013-06-11T04:50:25.575-07:002013-06-11T04:50:25.575-07:00Never mind. I re-read that part again and I unders...Never mind. I re-read that part again and I understand it better. I just miss read.<br /><br />Thanks,<br />Jandaj.farmer2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04721250663761427681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-48510732569785399322013-06-11T04:44:22.163-07:002013-06-11T04:44:22.163-07:00I can see the girls at Ana's work being jealou...I can see the girls at Ana's work being jealous of her, but she's not a superior yet. So it's not like they have to take orders from her. She's an editor. This makes Elizabeth either still her supervisor or an equal. Now I know they probably assume she will be their superiors at some point but she's not now. Ana's been nothing but nice to Elizabeth so what's the deal? Elizabeth has said several times that Ana's her boss now, but she's not.<br /><br />Jandaj.farmer2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04721250663761427681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-7655288469277642352013-06-11T02:13:34.549-07:002013-06-11T02:13:34.549-07:00Olá Emine!!!!
Espero que seu filho tenha melhorado...Olá Emine!!!!<br />Espero que seu filho tenha melhorado!<br />Sempre de olho nas atualizações.<br />Como sempre você está arrasando!<br />Ahh... Christian bêbado é muito fofoooo!!! Ri muito (chorei também) aqui, parabéns!<br />Beijos,<br />Tereza<br />SP/BRAZILAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11434733704462351309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-7778683190543098712013-06-10T09:05:47.621-07:002013-06-10T09:05:47.621-07:00Hi emine!!!!
I loved this chapter very much thank ...Hi emine!!!!<br />I loved this chapter very much thank you for writing such beautiful chapter . I cant wait for reading the conversation between christian and grace when ana is unconceous i hope it is included in the next chapter<br />with love<br />foramAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-35256668333770402902013-06-10T08:20:12.772-07:002013-06-10T08:20:12.772-07:00such a good chapter! the one thing i cant stand is...such a good chapter! the one thing i cant stand is hearing a man cry.. Cant wait for the next chapter!! at least i know everything is going to be ok.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14670111394256891320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-20735639965432938782013-06-10T08:08:45.480-07:002013-06-10T08:08:45.480-07:00Thank you Eminé ,
Yes , i agree with you there'...Thank you Eminé ,<br />Yes , i agree with you there's a lot to see and museum are my favourite!!!!<br />Don t worry about us, we can wait ( a little) :)!!!<br />Good work and a big kiss to your son!!<br />xxxxx. AngelaAngelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15544874896658919876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-85915176370588834972013-06-10T06:50:27.205-07:002013-06-10T06:50:27.205-07:00The ETA is still Tuesday. I don't know the exa...The ETA is still Tuesday. I don't know the exact hour. I have my Jury Duty tomorrow. I'm told to expect to be at the courthouse till 5 p.m. I have sick child at home. I'm going to try to see if I can get out earlier. But it will be later in the day. <br /><br />Hi Shannon! Yes, Taylor's POV will be included. This is going to be a hard chapter. <br /><br />Hi Angela!<br />There are some readers who know New York and the White Collar shooting schedule better than I do. I suggest you go to Facebook and ask one of the ladies on https://www.facebook.com/50ShadesFromEminesChristiansPointOfView<br /><br />Some of them live in New York. I live in the west, and I see New York maybe once a year. The residents will be able to give better ideas. But if you come to west California, Arizona, Las Vegas area, I can give you much better idea. But in general, I'd say do these at least:<br />1. Go to Central Park<br />2. There's a lot to see in West Village (Magnolia Bakery, Jefferson Market Courthouse, Spotted Pig (which is a pub))<br />3. Empire State Building (gotta see that)<br />4. Statue of Liberty<br />5. If you like art, go see the Contemporary Art Center<br />6. See a Broadway show<br />7. People say to see the Grand Central Terminal (but I once took the wrong subway and ended up in Bronx at 2 a.m. in the morning as opposed to GC)<br />8. If you go to Ellis Island, you can see the Ellis Island Immigration Museum. You must also see these museums in NYC: Then there's the American Museum of Natural History (my favorite), Metropolitan Museum of Art, Guggenheim Museum. <br />9. Go to the Rockefeller Center<br />10. Don't miss the Times Square<br />11. 9/11 Memorial. <br /><br />Lots to do. But you are looking for local digs, I think the native New Yorkers would be better help than I am. I live too far from NYC. <br /><br />Obrigado Anna! Meu Português é básico. Eu sei que os tempos simples. Eu ainda estou aprendendo. Eu preciso aprender muito mais.<br /><br />Welcome back Sonu! How was the vacation you lucky woman?<br /><br />Oi Ediene!<br />Women in our country are protected with various laws. But that doesn't stop violent men doing what they want to do. A lot of domestic violence cases go unreported, because the women don't have financial independence, or have not other place to go. Shelters are crowded - if you're lucky enough to get a place (mostly reserved for moms with kids). So, some just remain silent and keep enduring hopelessly. This is why I'm a big advocate for getting girls educated, and gain their financial freedom. And always tell them to be picky in choosing their life partners or the people they co-habit. Alternative is worse. <br /><br />Thank you everyone! Back to the grindstone now :)Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-56988422425287283592013-06-09T21:55:51.694-07:002013-06-09T21:55:51.694-07:00Eta ? ;)Eta ? ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-18188104339190317532013-06-09T17:39:51.265-07:002013-06-09T17:39:51.265-07:00You are a fantastic writer. I loved this chapter!!...You are a fantastic writer. I loved this chapter!! It was brilliant. How scary that happened to you with your children. I'm glad it worked out fine. You write the contrast between Lincoln and Christian so beautifully. What is a beta reader?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-81793436291347771892013-06-09T15:30:41.861-07:002013-06-09T15:30:41.861-07:00AWESOME ..... Is all I can say about that chapter!...AWESOME ..... Is all I can say about that chapter! I can't wait to hear what Kate says to Christian in the hospital room. <br /><br />Anxiously awaiting next chapter from The Lowcountry!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com