tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post6679497488029977587..comments2023-10-10T08:58:52.772-07:00Comments on A Walk in the Clouds: BOOK III - Chapter XXII - Christian and Anastasia Fan FictionEminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comBlogger94125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-1366909316743996142013-10-12T16:43:19.965-07:002013-10-12T16:43:19.965-07:00Wow! What an action-packed chapter!
I've alw...Wow! What an action-packed chapter! <br /><br />I've always thought that "morning in Aspen" sex scene with C&A was confusing. First he wants her to fight, then he goes all soft and cuddly(?), then he's baffled because Ana is finishing what he started? THen he's practically mad that she wants it rough? And he feels she's "taking charge" because she's on top, yet he's the one who taught her that -- so it obviously is something they do. I thought of it as the "more mood-swings than menopause" chapter, but you managed to make it seem more credible. <br /><br />I love that you had that Mrs. R had tortured him by touching in his no-fly zone. She just used her respecting his boundaries to lure him in, but I couldn't picture that lasting very long, esp. as he grew and developed, and had a good physique. I don't think of her as someone who denied herself anything when it came to pleasure. <br /><br />Linc is a real piece of work! What a chilling portrait you paint! I can't believe that someone could blame a 15-year-old boy for being taken and brainwashed by his cruel wife, who had been brainwashed and trained by himself! How horrifying would it have been if he had participated in those sessions! <br /><br />I think it's because Christian outdid him in the world of business, too -- he's a psychotic predator out to prove that his is bigger. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12498121858891075019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-22119953237979408752013-05-15T07:15:21.820-07:002013-05-15T07:15:21.820-07:00Oi Emine, mais uma vez capitulo perfeito! A viagem...Oi Emine, mais uma vez capitulo perfeito! A viagem a Aspen tem um significado especial como um oásis num deserto em meio a tantas coisas que ainda estão por vir na estória! A presença de Sir Lincom ao final foi muito interessante, afinal no livro original somente no final do livro a gente descobri que ele que pagou pela libertação do Hyde, estou gostando de vc explorar este tema!<br />Fiquei muito sensilizada pela doença de sua mae, mas gostaria de te contar um pouco sobre mim...acho que tenho lido suas estórias acabo me sentindo próxima a vc a gente acaba tendo um carinho especial principalmente por que vc passa tanta sentimento em suas estórias, sabe Emine, tenho 48 anos de idade e a 12 anos atrás fui diagnosticada com câncer na tiroide, na época meu mundo foi virado pelo avesso, me senti devastada, mas graças a Deus e eh claro minha fome de viver passados mais de uma década tenho hoje o prognostico de 100% de cura! Uma benção na acha! Graças ao camarada la de cima (Deus) e a evolução da medicina penso que hoje que este diagnostico nos remete a esperança que vamos superar este momento! Fique na luz!neves089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-73578532324706202932013-05-15T07:14:37.138-07:002013-05-15T07:14:37.138-07:00Oi Emine, mais uma vez capitulo perfeito! A viagem...Oi Emine, mais uma vez capitulo perfeito! A viagem a Aspen tem um significado especial como um oásis num deserto em meio a tantas coisas que ainda estão por vir na estória! A presença de Sir Lincom ao final foi muito interessante, afinal no livro original somente no final do livro a gente descobri que ele que pagou pela libertação do Hyde, estou gostando de vc explorar este tema!<br />Fiquei muito sensilizada pela doença de sua mae, mas gostaria de te contar um pouco sobre mim...acho que tenho lido suas estórias acabo me sentindo próxima a vc a gente acaba tendo um carinho especial principalmente por que vc passa tanta sentimento em suas estórias, sabe Emine, tenho 48 anos de idade e a 12 anos atrás fui diagnosticada com câncer na tiroide, na época meu mundo foi virado pelo avesso, me senti devastada, mas graças a Deus e eh claro minha fome de viver passados mais de uma década tenho hoje o prognostico de 100% de cura! Uma benção na acha! Graças ao camarada la de cima (Deus) e a evolução da medicina penso que hoje que este diagnostico nos remete a esperança que vamos superar este momento! Fique na luz! neves089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-7620504340800142162013-05-08T18:19:46.158-07:002013-05-08T18:19:46.158-07:00I am so sorry to hear about your Mom. I will pray ...I am so sorry to hear about your Mom. I will pray for her, you and your family. She is young, I hope she is strong.<br /><br />Thank you for your stories. Through you I feel like I really have gotten to know Christian. He is very real to me. All of your characters are real. You make them that way.<br /><br />By the way, you may want to change appeal to apparel in this section. ***Of course the lawyer had to have the layers of armor in the guise of an off the rack Armani suit and John Lobb loafers to look powerful, wealthy and commanding. He didn't have it in him to be what he is which is why the other man required layers of classy clothes, giving the illusion of power. He was still a thug in thousand Dollar shoes and an Ivy League education. But the man in Brioni didn't have contempt for him. He was a tool for means to an end. Fortunately, he doesn’t have that kind of need, but then again, he would never wear a suit, designer or otherwise off the rack. Indeed, he likes to splurge on his custom made appeal. He likes everything to fit his tastes. He does not like the conformity.<br /><br />I'm praying for you and your mom. I'm sending you a great big hug (BIG HUG)<br />Lee Greenhttps://www.facebook.com/lee.green.944?ref=tn_tnmnnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-85277935149515788132013-05-08T02:27:30.585-07:002013-05-08T02:27:30.585-07:00I have always thought that linc lincolm's invo...I have always thought that linc lincolm's involvement with Jack Hyde arose out of opportunity much as you have portrayed it rather than being something planned in advance.Chris Lnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-48249864858365830502013-05-07T12:38:27.211-07:002013-05-07T12:38:27.211-07:00Just want to day that I'm praying for your mom...Just want to day that I'm praying for your mom to be healthy and for you to be strong!!!Snowyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02062991186574497147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-17678125811462828542013-05-02T19:33:10.291-07:002013-05-02T19:33:10.291-07:00Hi Emine
I haven't written to you in awhile b...Hi Emine<br /><br />I haven't written to you in awhile but I just wanted you to know my thoughts and prayers are with you at this tough time. You have all our love and support.Pixiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08275986023313130447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-34983072500863670292013-05-02T18:13:42.466-07:002013-05-02T18:13:42.466-07:00Hi Emine
I imagine that to be hard receive news l...Hi Emine <br />I imagine that to be hard receive news like this. I hope your mom haven't anything of the bad. That's just a scare for all. Really to be strong sometimes is very very hard, but remember that cry not means to be weak, ok? <br />Kisses <br />Luciene (Brazil)Lucienenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-50718758283179178702013-05-02T17:50:10.542-07:002013-05-02T17:50:10.542-07:00Hi Emine
I imagine that to be hard receive news l...Hi Emine <br />I imagine that to be hard receive news like this. I hope your mom haven't anything of the bad. That's just a scare for all. Really to be strong sometimes is very very hard, but remember that cry not means to be weak, ok? <br />Kisses <br />Luciene (Brazil)Lucienenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-5490301611561786322013-05-02T17:11:46.744-07:002013-05-02T17:11:46.744-07:00Hi everyone!
I'm okay. I'm just busily tr...Hi everyone!<br /><br />I'm okay. I'm just busily trying to finish this chapter. I ended up writing 40 pages again, give me a few hours, and I'll post. I've still got two more pages to write and edit.<br /><br />I haven't called my mom this week. Just buried myself in work, because I need time to digest the overwhelming news. We don't have any positive or negative results yet. <br /><br />In any event, I'll be the person whom everyone will be looking up to since I'm the oldest sibling in the family. It's not always easy to be the strongest. It's a solitary place to be. But, I've got a good husband who is supportive and incredibly kind. <br /><br />Give me a few more hours, and you will have your new chapter :)<br /><br />Thank you so much for all your kind messages, e-mails, tweets, FB notes, and everything. That means a lot. Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-11445938618653326032013-05-02T17:04:27.530-07:002013-05-02T17:04:27.530-07:00Emine Hope all is well. You haven't answered a...Emine Hope all is well. You haven't answered any of your emails on your blog. I love when you comment. Hope your mom is ok. Love JanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-78461619516221165282013-05-02T17:02:42.988-07:002013-05-02T17:02:42.988-07:00Emine I hope everything is ok you have not answer...Emine I hope everything is ok you have not answered anyone on your blog. Hope all is well. janAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-39216045239901574552013-05-02T14:47:14.059-07:002013-05-02T14:47:14.059-07:00I can hardly wait for the nxt chapterI can hardly wait for the nxt chapterAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-51554291662184348412013-05-02T06:43:26.847-07:002013-05-02T06:43:26.847-07:00hi Emine I have read about your mom, so sorry, hop...hi Emine I have read about your mom, so sorry, hope all will end good!!! the chapter is amazing as usual,<br /><br />ElisaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-80982770607444667202013-05-01T23:16:53.787-07:002013-05-01T23:16:53.787-07:00Oh Emine!
Love the blog so much!!! This is just g...Oh Emine! <br />Love the blog so much!!! This is just getting better and better!! You are Christian!!! Lol!! <br />Do you have to spend time getting in and out of character?<br />When is the next post due... In the words of Mr G... You're cutting me to the quick here!!!<br /><br />Hoping your Mummy will be ok. Love and prayers from England.<br />Rachel V Smith (Oxford, UK)<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-58133576424751395042013-05-01T19:48:04.294-07:002013-05-01T19:48:04.294-07:00Cant wait for the next chapter!Cant wait for the next chapter!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-69526603341573626592013-05-01T10:09:53.424-07:002013-05-01T10:09:53.424-07:00Hi Emine
Hope you are well, Thank you for another ...Hi Emine<br />Hope you are well, Thank you for another wonderful chapter. Hope your Mom is ok and thinking of you and your family at this time. Glad you liked the charm braclet on FB!<br />Greetings from sunny South Africa<br />DannieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04578219880084935631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-81967706139535712472013-05-01T00:46:06.861-07:002013-05-01T00:46:06.861-07:00I'm new to your blog and I just love it. Can&...I'm new to your blog and I just love it. Can't wait to see more.j.farmer2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04721250663761427681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-32731795725443113702013-05-01T00:37:31.393-07:002013-05-01T00:37:31.393-07:00I have just discovered your blog and I LOVE IT! It...I have just discovered your blog and I LOVE IT! It's like you're channeling E.L. James. You are doing such a great job. Now I've caught up and read everything, including the Pella Series, and I'm going crazy waiting for more. It's wonderful. How often do you post? <br /><br />Have you considered continuing with the Grey series past the original books? There are so many ways you can take it. I think if anyone can do it and make it fabulous you could.<br /><br />Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for this blog. I can't wait to see what you do next.j.farmer2https://www.blogger.com/profile/04721250663761427681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-87237818120282723542013-04-30T15:46:38.863-07:002013-04-30T15:46:38.863-07:00Hi Emine,
Just checking in to see how you and your...Hi Emine,<br />Just checking in to see how you and your mum are doing. I know the feeling of waiting and worrying about a loved one. It is just 4 years ago today I lost my beloved daughter to cancer after a very short rapid onset. You don't expect your children to die before you so the pain has been indiscribable. So I am praying that your mum is ok and that God will give you and your family strength to carry on. jeangbnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-48209667167564862362013-04-30T07:02:05.730-07:002013-04-30T07:02:05.730-07:00Hi Emine, I was so sorry read that your mom needs...Hi Emine, I was so sorry read that your mom needs a biopsy. I will say a prayer for her and for you and your family. Yes, diving into work is definitely a positive way to pass the time and minimize the worry. Been there, done that!! Hopefully, the tests will come out negative. Love, Carol xoCarolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15062575301433128826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-33120658372727347272013-04-29T15:31:05.162-07:002013-04-29T15:31:05.162-07:00Hi eminé,
Great chapter, as usual :-)...Hi eminé,<br /> Great chapter, as usual :-) loved the insight into mr Lincoln. <br /><br />It's worrying to hear about your mums health scare, I'll be keeping my fingers crossed that the cyst is benign and can be removed as easy and straightforward as possible.<br /><br />Although we all love your blog, we're all here to support you too, so take your time and post if and when you can, we'll all still be here waiting patiently! <br /><br />So please don't run yourself into the ground!<br />Love and respect, Kate (London) xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14626803088758456954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-92020996644567531662013-04-29T11:14:26.347-07:002013-04-29T11:14:26.347-07:00well you are an incredible woman to be doing all o...well you are an incredible woman to be doing all of this and work. I always say family comes first. So if work helps you not to think about your mom then work as much as you want. I am sure you have many people who care about you and your family and let us all do the worrying for you here until you know the results of the biopsy. I will be praying for your family. Try not to work too hard..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-52232860127968014502013-04-29T10:31:27.539-07:002013-04-29T10:31:27.539-07:00Emine,
Hun, So sorry to hear about your mom. I b...Emine,<br /><br />Hun, So sorry to hear about your mom. I be praying for you! Make sure you take care of yourself!Prince50noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-32679902835629321612013-04-29T07:28:38.470-07:002013-04-29T07:28:38.470-07:00saving a special spot for you and your mum in my p...saving a special spot for you and your mum in my prayers xx Erinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04623178404337008498noreply@blogger.com