tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post4332457396985520847..comments2023-10-10T08:58:52.772-07:00Comments on A Walk in the Clouds: MASTER IS DARK - Christian and Leila's Last DayEminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comBlogger48125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-84603256449341094272015-02-25T07:35:19.502-08:002015-02-25T07:35:19.502-08:00Master was indeed dark. This was a great chapter.
...Master was indeed dark. This was a great chapter.<br /><br />So glad it was Ana and not Kate who went to interview him :)Sannanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-49779582036978064622013-10-01T05:06:14.173-07:002013-10-01T05:06:14.173-07:00I never had any soft spot for Leila. CG was comple...I never had any soft spot for Leila. CG was completely up front about what he was offering, and she knew the rules of the demi-monde she inhabited. <br /><br />What I love about your twist is his frustration at not being able to actually punish her! That was actually hilarious! How, indeed, do you punish a masochist? (There's the old joke about a masochist begging a sadist to punish him/her, and the sadist says, "I won't!") LOL<br /><br />It was interesting to see more of how this cult-like group works. I actually didn't think we got enough of this information in the books -- I was kind of surprised what all the clucking of the detractors was about. Seeing CG this way, it's much easier to understand him, and see how he thinks he's being so easy on his "baby". Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12498121858891075019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-82181019353133391282013-05-31T14:22:43.909-07:002013-05-31T14:22:43.909-07:00In the book I had some kind of feelings for Leila....In the book I had some kind of feelings for Leila.<br />After reading this chapter, I feel even more sorry for her. I do love Christian and Ana relationship since the first beginning but I can perfectly understand why Leila wants to be Christian's girlfriend. He is a nice looking man, healthy, can be very tender at times and they sure get some good time together during all these years. And over all Leila lovs sex and punishment. That's why, I suppose, she fell in love.<br /><br />Very, very good job Emine, as usual!<br /><br />S.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-43864799475166510362013-04-05T15:47:46.462-07:002013-04-05T15:47:46.462-07:00I love this chapter!I love this chapter!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-43912689645425639862012-12-13T07:31:02.357-08:002012-12-13T07:31:02.357-08:00I just love this chapter on Leila. When she was me...I just love this chapter on Leila. When she was mentioned in the 50 Shades Books I used to think to myself, what else did you get up to at Escala on your secret visits. This chapter explains a lot about how Leila would have felt when she stopped being Christian's sub. Thank you again for all your hard work, I am so enjoying reading all your chapters.Sheila Hallnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-56640835619926972742012-12-12T13:27:31.216-08:002012-12-12T13:27:31.216-08:00Amazing!! I was a little nervous at 1st bc of your...Amazing!! I was a little nervous at 1st bc of your intro, but I'm so glad that I read it! Totally gave more insight and gave Christian more background! I love the effort you're putting in to give us good stuff! I'm gonna be so sad when we're at end of book 3! GediGyrlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09806942669450909460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-13353092513161478672012-11-09T10:18:56.590-08:002012-11-09T10:18:56.590-08:00I found your blog a few days ago. I have read EVER...I found your blog a few days ago. I have read EVERYTHING... I am addicted. LOVED this point of view. please don't stop. This is what keeps me going lately. Looking forward to the next installment. I often wondered what the releationship with Leila was like. I think you hit the nail on the head. Keep up the excellent work!!!! Susan (Baltimore, MD)Susan Burkenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-25973562124697194722012-11-06T19:58:16.152-08:002012-11-06T19:58:16.152-08:00hemscy 368wow! I think yo did a incredible job. Ev...hemscy 368wow! I think yo did a incredible job. Even E.L. James says C.G. is exhausting. I inderstand it must be hard to get into his head. But you pulled it off beautifully. I oftenwonder what he was like before Ana. Sometimes he actually comes off as a littel too mushy. He gives into her alll to easy sometimes. It was nice to see the harder side of him. Thank you for exploring it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-79213558994518576442012-09-26T22:51:18.084-07:002012-09-26T22:51:18.084-07:00I just discovered you today. I had a pretty good i...I just discovered you today. I had a pretty good idea of what Christian was before Ana so I wasen't really surprised about his dark side but it just showed to me again how much he loved Ana to try and change for her. I did enjoy knowing a bit more about Leila, the ultimate sub and wonder if in any future books she will be heard of again. Thanks again LillianAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-4544189986278558422012-09-24T09:16:29.484-07:002012-09-24T09:16:29.484-07:00Thank you TJ!
It's strange how generally we ...Thank you TJ! <br /><br />It's strange how generally we want everyone to fit into a certain norm. We all believe in some form of God in every culture, but then everyone wants to project their idea of God to someone else. If we're all created by the same creator, would he have turned to Devil and said after creating the man's head, neck, torso, arms, legs, and feet, "I'm done; it's your turn now. Take over! Carry on!" and the devil comes with a fiendish glee, and slaps on the man's genitals. <br /><br />That's how we see human sexuality; as if it’s a product of devil, and not Godly (even though there is a whole section in the Bible in “Song of Solomon” celebrating human sexuality). It’s not that I support people doing the deed with everyone they meet. But even among couples, (husband and wife) this can be a taboo topic. Not having to talk about it, people end up discovering it in secret, they don’t communicate their needs because they’re even embarrassed of the person who is supposed to know him/her intimately and a great deal of them end up doing it all wrong. Sensuality is almost a topic that belonged to 18th or 19th century, and so few manage to understand or practice it. Like the microwave generation (everything is ready under 3 minutes or less). It’s not a crime to not to know it, but I think not making attempt to learn and get on with one’s years’ of doing it all wrong is somehow criminal :)<br /><br />I wanted to show that learning experience can go both ways (for Christian as well as Ana) in different aspects. And love seals the deal. I wanted to project how important communication is, and how even in the depths of one’s despair, and dark soul, love can redeem a person. <br /><br />I occasionally write a section about Christian’s childhood, but there may be other blogs who handle that aspect. I’ve heard some of my readers mention it. <br />Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-43270539638944658812012-09-24T08:29:32.965-07:002012-09-24T08:29:32.965-07:00This was an amazing chapter. It is how I imagined...This was an amazing chapter. It is how I imagined christian... this brings more depth to him and who he is and was in some form. I totally wish someone who write about Christian when he was adopted and up until he meets Ana. This and other parts of your blog fill in some of the gaps in the story. How you have written this is just amazingly deep and thought provoking. I sure hope you don't stop and continue on as I find this to be not only erotic, by human and it opens up somethings we as women want and yet can't tell. We want a strong man and yet conficted with was "society demands" of us. You are just amazing with this. Thank you.TJnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-64273647698456982072012-09-22T17:16:07.393-07:002012-09-22T17:16:07.393-07:00I quite hated Christian... OMG! This is great! I e...I quite hated Christian... OMG! This is great! I even felt a kind of repulsion towards him... Buf! Now I can understand even better why he feels so...out of control with Ana! You're doing a GREAT job. I discovered your blog three days ago and I just can't stop reading... You've made our dreams come true!!! Thank you very much!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-26272581898302013132012-09-21T19:15:47.331-07:002012-09-21T19:15:47.331-07:00Loved it! It really helps in understanding Christi...Loved it! It really helps in understanding Christian. <br />Cjwnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-16508605577762284802012-09-09T15:08:02.938-07:002012-09-09T15:08:02.938-07:00LOVE IT!! this is exactly how I pictured Christian...LOVE IT!! this is exactly how I pictured Christian to be, way before Ana came into his life.<br />Cold,Distant,seen women as objects and disposable. nadinenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-68421479511220339062012-07-23T05:54:01.084-07:002012-07-23T05:54:01.084-07:00Backassing,
I take it you fully agree! Smiles hu...Backassing,<br /><br />I take it you fully agree! Smiles hun.Prince50noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-46863036855441833272012-07-22T22:07:11.712-07:002012-07-22T22:07:11.712-07:00"Write" on my friend!"Write" on my friend!Backsassinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08941704232393817850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-53737073855066250792012-07-22T15:51:30.171-07:002012-07-22T15:51:30.171-07:00All,
Now I rethink things Christian not dark he j...All,<br /><br />Now I rethink things Christian not dark he just honest! I been in relationships before I got married where I did not want Mr Right I want Mr Rightnow! He started to have feels and I had to break it off.(See just got out of relationship he was the rebound guy) See we all say he just heartless but he was recovering from Elena if you listen in what Emine and James have written he has admitted that Elena is what he wanted. Another reason why he does not like to share. I can understand Christian not wanting to open open to love. All of us have shades some more than others!<br /><br />Hugs!<br /><br />Rick James & Teena Marie - Fire and Desire <br />http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CPikYsi6_zU&feature=relatedPrince50noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-55407428422050787502012-07-22T13:53:39.161-07:002012-07-22T13:53:39.161-07:00This was a tough read to see Christian this way, b...This was a tough read to see Christian this way, but it was insightful into the whole dom/sub dynamics before Ana. It puts into perspective how much he truly loved Ana and how she was able to help him see life & love in a different way. As always, I appreciate all the hard work you put into these chapters :)Keishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663862659661473206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-6602916888598348982012-07-22T13:50:50.962-07:002012-07-22T13:50:50.962-07:00Emine, I have been a fan of yours since I stumbled...Emine, I have been a fan of yours since I stumbled across it a couple of weeks ago and I am addicted. I loved this, though I am sure I would not be a sub, I can appreciate that some women out there like this lifestyle and that is a part of why they put up with him. I wouldnt say he was dark per se, if that was what you got your rocks from then you would be ok with it all. In some weird way though I saw Ana willing to try it because hell who wouldnt love some yummy Christian, Fifty or not women usually think they can change a man. LOVE you for all you feed us!Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07969469467351663514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-55993343881184944502012-07-22T13:47:33.535-07:002012-07-22T13:47:33.535-07:00This was a tough read seeing Christian this way, b...This was a tough read seeing Christian this way, but it did offer a perspective of him and the Dom/Sub dynamic before Ana. By reading this though, it shows how strong his love was for Ana and how she changed his perspective on life & love. As always, I appreciate all the hard work you put into these chapters :)Keishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663862659661473206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-79314005941942749512012-07-22T13:29:03.971-07:002012-07-22T13:29:03.971-07:00Hello Emine.
This was a difficult thing for me but...Hello Emine.<br />This was a difficult thing for me but I read it. I think is good to take a look at the CG before ANA. It made me understand exactly how fucked up he was. ANd it made me glad to see that LOVE really can change anything. Being with Ana was a healing process for him. <br />I loved the chapter. Thank you for doing this again. It is always a good time when I come here. I confess that i wasn't a happy chapter, it was really dark but it was important, because it made me understand a lot of things about him.<br />Love your work, you know that, right?<br /><br />See ya<br /><br />RachAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-19374371298704506642012-07-22T12:58:51.008-07:002012-07-22T12:58:51.008-07:00I actually liked looking at how dark Christian was...I actually liked looking at how dark Christian was before he met ana - it gives you an insight about his previous relationships with women. This can show just how strong his love for Ana really is :-)<br />Great chapter once again!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12402516390031158345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-60556179314349463452012-07-22T10:30:03.471-07:002012-07-22T10:30:03.471-07:00Emine it was extremely difficult for me to read, s...Emine it was extremely difficult for me to read, so I can only imagine it was hard to write. I almost skipped over it but I needed to understand him, and this made me realize just how special Ana is to him. Other fan fics make his relationship with Leilia as if he cared. I don't think he did, being who he is he cared for his subs as a human cares for another but nothing more...he is a compassionate man. I feel you get into his head and you get him. This Chapter showed us his dark side. Can't wait for the next chapter!Deborahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-51106274164080843182012-07-22T10:24:05.378-07:002012-07-22T10:24:05.378-07:00I didn't think I would be too interested about...I didn't think I would be too interested about Christian and Leila but to my surprise I truly loved it! This is exactly what I pictured a day would be like pre-Ana! You always amaze me and after following your blogs for a while now I really shouldn't be so surprised at all. <br /><br />I did want to comment on the harsh anonymous comment that you received. I always fear that you will get tired of seeing those and revert your blog back to private. I hope you don't. I look forward to your chapters every week and because I have read all three books 4 times.. this gives me something to read, and its a subject that I feel so dearly about. I try to thank you at every chapter because I want you to know that I truly do appreciate your hard work! So thank you again! Looking forward to the next chapter.. Monday right??crystaldardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17933048054051876978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-1727403453262757792012-07-22T10:22:17.158-07:002012-07-22T10:22:17.158-07:00I didn't think I would be too interested about...I didn't think I would be too interested about Christian and Leila but to my surprise I truly loved it! This is exactly what I pictured a day would be like pre-Ana! You always amaze me and after following your blogs for a while now I really shouldn't be so surprised at all. <br /><br />I did want to comment on the harsh anonymous comment that you received. I always fear that you will get tired of seeing those and revert your blog back to private. I hope you don't. I look forward to your chapters every week and because I have read all three books 4 times.. this gives me something to read, and its a subject that I feel so dearly about. I try to thank you at every chapter because I want you to know that I truly do appreciate your hard work! So thank you again! Looking forward to the next chapter.. Monday right??crystaldardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17933048054051876978noreply@blogger.com