tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post1177144287568695433..comments2023-10-10T08:58:52.772-07:00Comments on A Walk in the Clouds: Book II - Chapter II - Christian and Anastasia FanFictionEminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-53516333376536108532012-09-19T04:19:03.489-07:002012-09-19T04:19:03.489-07:00Thank you Nieves! I think the upcoming chapters on...Thank you Nieves! I think the upcoming chapters only get better. Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-50225196251246047892012-09-18T21:17:48.382-07:002012-09-18T21:17:48.382-07:00Omg I so love reading these chapters!!! I LOVE CHR...Omg I so love reading these chapters!!! I LOVE CHRISTIANS POV!! They feel so intense!! I'm finding his thoughts, at times, more exciting than Ana's! Maybe since I already know hers. You r doing a great job. I've told all my friends about this blog so they too can continue with this truly amazing love story!! THANK YOU for keeping it going for all of us!!!Nievesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-27386827229301441972012-07-08T12:38:39.930-07:002012-07-08T12:38:39.930-07:00Hi Emine:
I read the trilogy in 10 days and have b...Hi Emine:<br />I read the trilogy in 10 days and have been on your website since the 1st of July and all I can say is wow. Do you happen to know the author or did you just get into her head? I am trying to slow down so I don't catch up to you since I read it on the train to & from nyc. Thank you for Christian's POV and I can wait to see Jack get thrown out of SIP after being kicked by Ana. <br />Thank you for this blog.Lynnenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-86903556892234981232012-07-02T12:16:13.543-07:002012-07-02T12:16:13.543-07:00Emine-
I'm so glad I found your blog. Thank yo...Emine-<br />I'm so glad I found your blog. Thank you so much for taking the time to write. I'm just as addicted as I was while reading the trilogy.<br /><br />You are doing an amazing job. It is everything I could ever wish it to be and more. Thank you a million times.<br /><br />Would love to see a conversation between Taylor and Ms. Jones since they knew him when he had subs. The part of their interaction with him in the shower was beyond perfect.<br /><br />-ChristineAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05832891623355232276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-23726628197915413692012-07-02T11:44:32.724-07:002012-07-02T11:44:32.724-07:00This chapter was amazing. I loved the interaction ...This chapter was amazing. I loved the interaction between Christian and Mr. Dumass it was too funny. You have really captured the intense emotions of Christian and I can't wait for him to finally tell Ana he loves her! I truly am in awe of your talent my friend,thank you for sharing.<br /><br />CharAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11998529131921053692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-41116231340766550832012-07-02T11:38:23.646-07:002012-07-02T11:38:23.646-07:00Oh can't wait for the chapter. I'm couting...Oh can't wait for the chapter. I'm couting the minutes Emine!<br /><br />RachAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-27250517299179687752012-07-02T10:52:48.100-07:002012-07-02T10:52:48.100-07:00You are so amazing!!!! I absolutely love reading ...You are so amazing!!!! I absolutely love reading this from Christian's perspective. Your immersion into his character is phenomenal. I can't wait for your next post!!!!! =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-31231438461371175322012-07-02T10:44:59.711-07:002012-07-02T10:44:59.711-07:00Fantastic Emine!!
I for some reason thought you al...Fantastic Emine!!<br />I for some reason thought you already were home. If I had known you were around, especially in the Bronx yesterday, I would have made a point to meet you. I was there for the Yankees game and would have made a point to stay longer. I would love to meet the woman behind the words!! And I am sure My hubby would like to say "Thank You" to you for keeping my Fifty Shades world alive. lol :)!! I hope the rest of your trip goes well. Thank you again for an amazing post! I just can't seem to get enough!! <br />JillAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-10055045368991533792012-07-02T10:30:59.015-07:002012-07-02T10:30:59.015-07:00Hi everyone!
I'll be posting within the next ...Hi everyone!<br /><br />I'll be posting within the next hour. I flew home very late last night, but got up early so I can fulfill my word today. <br />Welcome Marisa and Anonymous!<br /><br />Amarie, I generally put the link right after the posting, but at the time, I was running late to the class, and didn't have the time. I just linked it this morning. I'll make sure, I link the new posting today.Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-7816272135483834892012-07-02T07:40:56.252-07:002012-07-02T07:40:56.252-07:00AWESOME THANK YOU SO MUCH.JUST CURIOUS AS TO WHY T...AWESOME THANK YOU SO MUCH.JUST CURIOUS AS TO WHY THINK CHAPTER DOES SHOW UP ON THE SIDE BAR, AND THE ONE THAT DOES SHOW UP IS THE 1ST CHAPTER OF BOOK 2 MARKED AS NEW. I WOULD HAVE NEW FOUND THIS IS I DIDN'T CLICK NEWER POST. ITS MONDAY AS IM SO READY FOR THE MAKEUP.:)Amariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04007845196804039743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-57071600961031744172012-07-01T19:48:47.475-07:002012-07-01T19:48:47.475-07:00I found your blog by accident a few days ago and I...I found your blog by accident a few days ago and I finally caught up to you! You have done such a fantastic job showing how Christian feels and thinks thus far... I am so excited I found your blog because it allows me to keep up my obsession without having to reread the originals :) Ty for all your time and dedication to the story! Know that you are appreciated :)Marisanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-86045654775266159812012-06-30T21:36:59.698-07:002012-06-30T21:36:59.698-07:00Loved it! You are doing such a fantastic job. The ...Loved it! You are doing such a fantastic job. The way you express Christian's feelings is so on point. I'm so glad I found your blog!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-71631874144363117172012-06-30T20:01:36.667-07:002012-06-30T20:01:36.667-07:00Emine', so sorry to hear about your unfortunat...Emine', so sorry to hear about your unfortunate ride. You have once again written a perfect representation of Christian's feelings. Every little insight into his soul is such a gift. I am loving every piece of back story and peak into Christian's relationship with the other characters as well. You have truly spoiled us--if James decides to write these books from CPOV, she will have a real challenge.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10328227896026314585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-80601434284236534792012-06-30T12:38:05.067-07:002012-06-30T12:38:05.067-07:00amazing chapter again absolutley loved it especial...amazing chapter again absolutley loved it especially the argument between christian & dumb ass it made me laugh..looking forward to the next chapter. hope your classes are going well...i was thinking that never let me go by florence & the machine would be a great song for christian with his feeling towards anaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03147891993298528432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-40910036915435438842012-06-30T01:03:43.001-07:002012-06-30T01:03:43.001-07:00Thanks for replying to the shopping! Thought it w...Thanks for replying to the shopping! Thought it was worth a mention as it is do to with him reconciling relationship versus submissive. Also showing how immature he is at relationships and all he knows his D/s. so I think even at the begining of book two still not 100% reconciled as it is all new to him! However having re read book one and most of two in the last week I think he probably bought everything about the time he was having the contracts drawn up in book one! <br />So rambling late here. Looking forward to the next chapter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-31431756763525935242012-06-29T21:55:03.138-07:002012-06-29T21:55:03.138-07:00Another amazing chapter Emine. You captured the ra...Another amazing chapter Emine. You captured the raw emotion of Christian in all his glory. All his bottled up emotion that he is learning how to come to terms with and then how to express them. I was shouting at the screen "Tell her you love her!" when he was trying to work out what can he say to make her understand that he cannot live without her.<br />Brilliantly written!ArtfulLee Designedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15256415041332531967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-32650283057395337342012-06-29T19:24:46.475-07:002012-06-29T19:24:46.475-07:00That was one powerful chapter!!! The emotions Chri...That was one powerful chapter!!! The emotions Christian was feeling..the jealously, the longing, the anger, and the possessiveness..This is a man, who has held his emotions in check for so long and closed himself off from experiencing others, about to erupt. Christian is overwhelmed but he has one goal to accomplish..to get Ana back. This is one of my favourite chapters..especially the alley scene.<br />Thank You once again Emine for a brilliantly written chapter!!!Aninoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-91894927169183819442012-06-29T14:32:52.582-07:002012-06-29T14:32:52.582-07:00Hello everyone!(Rach, Tash, Colleen, Mee, Michelle...Hello everyone!(Rach, Tash, Colleen, Mee, Michelle, Cathryn, Lisa, Heather, anonymous(x2)-thank you for your comments.<br />I knew the Ring of Fire song was Johnny Cash's; I should have said (sung by Joaqain Phoenix). Originally I was going to put the one that was sung by Mr. Cash, but it was a little slower, and the recording quality didn't sound as good. And Phoenix's was a little more energetic to convey the temparement hence the song you heard. But, you're right, it's Mr. Johnny Cash's song. I generally only write the name of the artist who is singing and not the one who holds the ownership not to sidetrack the reader. <br /><br />Anyway, I'm hoping to post next one on Monday, but not sure yet-busy schedule. I'm going to Manhattan in a little bit to hang out with an old friend. I'll be busy in "school" next couple of days, but I have my evening free to write (except this evening). Let's aim for Monday for the next posting. <br /><br />For the red room shopping: Ok, he's only contemplating about whether to lock up the red room for good (depending on Ana) or (that or is obviously open). I'll get the parts where he's shopping - he's so knowledgable on the topic, he can order them online, it's really not as complicated for him. But, it's a good point, I will surely insert that bit of information when we get to the appropriate part. I know a lot of people are interested. (I'm doing to research about the particular toys so I can be more accurate when writing about them). Hopefully what you see or will get to see is up to your expectations. <br /><br />Ok.. Off to Manhattan. Hope you're all well... <3Eminé Fougner @ Cowboylandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159434294847088171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-45126468867850034742012-06-29T11:57:43.490-07:002012-06-29T11:57:43.490-07:00One other song Last Resort by Papa Roach http://w...One other song Last Resort by Papa Roach http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QhJ6bE4z5vs&feature=related<br />watch it read the lyrics I don't know where it will fit in but it could work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-48221683253212087192012-06-29T11:52:28.738-07:002012-06-29T11:52:28.738-07:00Fantastic love the 2nd book the most! Was wonder...Fantastic love the 2nd book the most! Was wondering about when he did his shopping for all the stuff for the red room, when he is unsure about what she wants or whether to go in there again? I know he got rid of stuff but he still had lots of 'toys' that she finds later! I was wondering whethe you were going to include that? <br />Keep up the amazing workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-69933759710108761152012-06-29T10:45:09.180-07:002012-06-29T10:45:09.180-07:00What a fantastic chapter!! Can't wait for the ...What a fantastic chapter!! Can't wait for the next! I love how intense Christian is! Any idea when you will be posting the next one? I have an addiction lolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02206661888003459809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-89471419201155816662012-06-29T09:12:07.465-07:002012-06-29T09:12:07.465-07:00I loveed this chapter! Thank you for updating so q...I loveed this chapter! Thank you for updating so quickly! His emotions are so overwhelming. The scene when he drew the map on himself also made me cry. There so many parts of the story that made me cry.50shadesoflovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01106643344208593010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-61529511718143069282012-06-29T09:10:29.010-07:002012-06-29T09:10:29.010-07:00Song's for the next time they venture in to th...Song's for the next time they venture in to the "red room of pain" "Pain" by three days grace or S&M by Rhiana<br /><br />CathrynAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-80136168444166627062012-06-29T08:44:12.032-07:002012-06-29T08:44:12.032-07:00I really like your writing but ring of fire is sun...I really like your writing but ring of fire is sung by Johnny cash and written by June carter cash and merle Kilgore! Yes joaquin phoenix does a version for the movie and on the soundtrack but I feel Johnny cash should get the song credit!!! It's totally appropriate for this book and this chapter!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111072375072654565.post-25603530264670599342012-06-29T08:26:24.554-07:002012-06-29T08:26:24.554-07:00Emine,
The raw emotions between them in the alley...Emine,<br /><br />The raw emotions between them in the alley are palpitating. <br /><br />I hope that you are enjoying N.Y. and your classes.<br /><br />I can't wait to see his possessiveness when he meets Jack at the bar and when he asks Taylor to get the red lipstick for the "map idea". God and to know what pain and wanting will be going through his mind simultaneously as she draws the "map" on him. I cried when I read that the first time to know his true trust in her....I know I will cry again, it is such an emotional scene.<br /><br />Good luck and have fun can't wait for the next update.<br /><br />CathrynAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com